#chapter book

I made a quick little concept story based from an actual dream I had as a kid for the fake book Chillers, tales to haunt your dreams. This is only for worldbuilding purposes and not an actual project to make into an actual publish book. Though not impossible.

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A Metal Night Sneak Out sneak peek 4: Claire and Nora's conversation

and googling who to headcanon characters while thinking 'how do I headcanon a character with something I made up/connected' I got this before I pressed generate

This character was dropped out of a window as a child.{Their was an error for the image, idk man}

[WPNZ backstory: Convery belt malfunctions at top speed, another cyborg catchs em, and accidentlay/uncarling dropped them out of a window crash out of window. "Oh neato, a well built war bot we can have be our hitman"]

what if the guy, Karen met when she was younger, just had a hobby of turning children into hitman lol {Headcanon? Theory? Funsies chapter exploration idea!} I at least made 6 headcanon autistic traits over the span of a few rewatching the video and looking at autistic traits on websites. I was very worried how to write a meltdown, but considering most complaints about autistic headcanoning, as long as I dont excuse abuse for him being autistic like a normal person, than im fine.

and than I made 6 other headcanons that I made up in my own spare time, like how listens to music on repeat. Im just imagining his fanon children who got his adhd has my way of listening to music, and listen to a specific lyrac of the song on repeat, "Put up the full song, that's not even the best part of 'Song name'" My brother was complaining to me about this in the car with my phone filled with save tiktok edits :3 The cut under here is just using a generator and commenting on most of em

To help myself edit and to test the potential of self publishing this one, I ordered a proper printed copy of my book. I am currently marking it up excessively with edits, but I just have to say that it was unexpectedly THRILLING to see my book like this. I wrote this! A book! Wow.

In A Dark, Dark Room (1984)

Story: Alvin Schwartz -- Art: Dirk Zimmer

This is meant to be a chapter book for young readers (so about ages 7-12, probably leaning more on the younger side of this range), inspired by Daisy Meadows and Gwyneth Rees' Rainbow Fairy and Fairy Dust series respectively.

I would be happy to get some feedback and critique on this piece, especially since this is the first kidlit book I've written! You'll be reading off a google doc for this, and I'll make sure you have the ability to leave comments on the piece as well so you can leave your feedback there. 

Title: Sadie And The Search For The Missing Necklace (working title, subject to change for the final product later on) 

Genre: Kidlit/Fantasy 

Word count: 7528 

Short synopsis: After losing her grandma's necklace, Sadie must work together with a fairy named Pearl in order to find it. But can Sadie learn to trust Pearl as they continue working together, or will her doubts about others keep them from finding the necklace at all? 

Desired feedback: Overall impressions, impressions about plot and characters, worldbuilding, and any other questions you might have. 

Deadline: No later than Jan. 20th, 2023!