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CH 3.3 : 35-42<— 43-52 —> 53-62

Hey you asked for a new chapter?! be ready, because this is a redraw of an old part!! yay?

This is a redraw of the original pages that you can still find in the INDEX.

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CH 3.4 : 10-13<— 14-22  —> Soon on Patreon...

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CH 3.4 : 00-03 <— 04-09 —> 10-13

Yo, everyone hope you are doing alrighty with the covid stuff and all. This part was actually made and edited months ago, but ehh you know motivation, life, and stuff~

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CH 3.4 : 04-09<— 10-13 —> 14-22

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CH 3.4 : 00-03—> 04-09

Oof the time i spent on this update, the “animation” took about a full week + the cover about 2-3 days! hope they are worth it in the end!

Anyway, here appears Fwowey!!

((idk what im doing with the plot anymore lol))

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Annnnnnnnnnnnd that’s 5!

TL;DR: Ok so, more Burstale. when? most likely, never. at least from my side lol

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CH0: Out of Sight: PART 1 <--- PART 2 ---> Soon…

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Chara woke up after a rather long sleep, they were on a bed, and it wasn’t any kind of bed, it was very soft, and absurdly big, as no matter how far they tried to extend their arms and legs they couldn’t reach its end…

((a King-sized bed for sure!))

“oh… it doesn’t hurt anymore…” said Chara as all of her wounds disappeared like if they never existed.

they stretched their arms up, then downwards, and they hit something-

“Ouch!” -said Asriel who was still sleeping…

“Ah! Sorry, I didn’t see… you…” apologized Chara

“Ah- It’s alrighty! I’m the one who…” -the prince suddenly stopped

“It was Me who… wanted to stay here… you were like- having nightmares- I think? and I didn’t want to let you alone-… and-” anxious and embarrassed, Asriel found it hard to explain himself…

“it’s okay… um… thank-”

“Asriel wake up!! the breakfast is ready; make sure to bring our guest too! I prepared a pie!” -called Toriel from the kitchen interrupting the child’s thanks

“I’m coming mom!” replied the Prince

“do you feel okay Chara? Does it still hurt somewhere?”

Chara simply shook her head in a clear “no”

“Great!! Then let’s go, you’re going to love mom’s pie for sure!!!” – said the prince all excited as they held the child’s hand and dragged them to the kitchen

“Good morning dad! good morning mom!”

“Good morning Asriel; Oh! And to you too young child, “Chara” was it right? how are you feeling?”

“good, thanks…” they said quietly hiding behind the young prince

“Here comes my Cinnamon Butterscotch pie! the biggest part belongs to our guest of course!”

“Whoa! aren’t you lucky?!” said the king with such a goofy soft voice; nothing compared to what Chara heard the day before…

The little guest remained silent gazing into the table…  

“Are you perhaps allergic to cinnamon my child? I can cook you something else if you want”-

“No… I just…” -replied the quiet one.

they started moving their hand around the table, around the plat, looking for something… the fork, they found it, getting a grip of it; they quickly went and took a piece of the pie in front of them.

-Asriel was excited and impatient to see Chara’s reaction, the king was as curious but was calmly observing the guest from the corner of his eye.

“It’s… very soft…and sweet.” Said Chara

“Hehe, your welcome~” Said Toriel all proud

-Despite enjoying the pie, Chara had something important to tell the monster family, they gathered all the courage they found, put their fork down on the table…

“Madame Monster…”

“you can call me Toriel my child…”

“…okay…Madame Toriel…”

-Toriel left a sight out, a little smile on her face

“can I ask you something…”

“well, Of course, my child!” 

“are you going to eat me?”

“What- No, why would we do that?” -startled said Asgore

“because I was a bad girl… I disobeyed to mother, and she always told me that bad kids have their eyes and hearts eaten by monsters…”

“I don’t want a pie…” their voice beginning to break

“and you can eat my heart if you want… but-”

-Asriel startled by the scary sayings of the child; dropped the piece of pie of his fork; his eyes quickly went full of tears again.

“just, don’t take my eyes… they, are very special... even if they-… don’t look- …you can have my heart instead, I don’t mind…but leave me my eyes…”

Suddenly pausing, after thinking for a moment. “... please?”

The young girl, had such an awkward manner of speaking, confused, anxious, and difficultly trying to explain their mind, it was obvious that they never really socialized…

Toriel stood up and went up toward Chara’s chair, she knelt “Listen Chara… We are not going to hurt you… Nor, will we be taking your eyes or even your heart… so please, never say that again okay? you can stay with us as long as you wish, nothing will hurt you, you are safe here.”

“Tori is right! young one, you don’t have to fear anything, since I! THE KING of the Monster kind, assure you that we are going to protect you from anything! But you don’t have to worry, monsters are very kind, naïve even Haha!” -Said the King with a voice full of pride and confidence

Chara remained silent, and in their silence, they experienced a moment of disbelief, the child reached for her eyes, touching them, feeling them, she smiled slightly…

“Asriel would you take our little guest; see the stars in Waterfall? I’m sure it will help her feel better! even if I know that the ones on the surface are way more impressive! Hehe~” Asked Asgore his son

“Sure Dad! let’s go Chara!” answered Asriel vividly, weeping the tears from his eyes, as he took her by the hand

-The kids gone, Toriel gave a worried look to the king…

Asriel on the road to waterfall, was thinking of ways to cheer up Chara

((The flowers! She will like them for sure- she- yeah Chara is a… She)) The prince stopped and stood still a moment

((Aaaaaaaaaaaah!!)) begun Asriel internally screaming covering his face with his ears, letting go of Chara’s hand.

Chara wondered why the fluffy monster was squeaking so loudly, and why did he let go of her hand.

((maybe my hand was too cold?)) she thought    

“you- you can walk on your own now right? Haha- I’m always dragging you around sorry” -He spoke quickly, embarrassed.

“yeah, I can…” replied Chara following the sound of his quiet footsteps  

Asriel decided to take a shortcut to avoid going by HOTLAND, his new friend would probably find the extreme heat very unpleasant.

as they reached the intersection, Asriel turned to Chara “See from here it’s Hotland, but we are going that way to Waterfall!” as he pointed with his finger to some direction

“The road is a little rough at first so be careful not to fall, okay?”

“mhm…” nodded Chara

A few minutes after the prince warnings, he heard a loud thud, he turned quickly, to find Chara on the ground, He hastened to help her get up.

“I’m so sorry! I shouldn’t have let go of your hand! I didn’t even want to let go! I- You just got better and now because of me”- he spoke as if he was about to cry

“But Why are you crying?” Asked Chara the prince, curious.

“I- I don’t know…”

“My hands were cold?”

“huh? No, it wasn’t why?”

“Then, why did you let go?”

“it’s… you are a girl… and…”

“And?” Asked Chara genuinely waiting for an answer

“uh… holding hands with a girl is… urgh… I can’t tell you!!” as he covered his face with his ears, while he made that weird squeaking sound once again.

“you are quite strange heh” said Chara

“I’m not”- said Asriel about to deny her last statement, but as he looked at her face, he saw a faint smile, an expression he had never seen from her.

“yeah heh I might be…”

“I’m not as good as mom but” said Asriel as he put his hand on Chara’s forehead to heal the small wound of her fall “it should be enough”

Chara quickly put her hand on her savior's forehead

“Ergh… what are you doing?” asked Asriel shyly

“you are touching my forehead; why can’t I?”

“but… I’m healing you…”

“Well, so am I” said Chara

“is- is that so…” replied Asriel

Done with the healing, Asriel helped her stand up.

“well let’s go Chara, it’s not too far now, I’m sure you’ll love Waterfall’s stars!” said the small monster as he made sure to hold her hand tightly this time, bearing with his shyness, and thinking about, how this human had such an unexpected playful side.

“We arrived!” -Shouted the prince all excited

“Look up Chara!! look at all those stars!” 

Chara raised her head, their hair still covering their eyes “Y-yeh they are… really nice…”

“Wait, you can’t see with your hair! let me”- Asriel pushed her hair away from her eyes

And even though the young girl tried pulling her head back, it was too late…

“y-your eyes… they are white…?” the monster child surprised couldn’t help but to say so

“yes…They are…”

“is that… normal for humans?” asked Asriel not holding back his curiosity

“no…I don’t think it is…” replied Chara as she sat on the ground

“um, does- does it hurt?” 

“No… not anymore...” affirmed Chara

“why? I mean, If- if you want to talk about it… I’m just curious and-”

“Umm… mother told me to never speak of them… but she, never said so with a monster? will she be angry?” -Said the girl talking to herself.

“so… hum?” Her mind made up, she waited for her companion’s questions

“should I ask? - ah okay um… your eyes… can you see?”

“no, all I can see is a faint light… far, far away.” said the child as they extended their hand reaching for the void in front of them…

“Sorry for lying about the stars… I didn’t want to…”

“It’s alright, I’m sorry I didn’t notice, you even fell because of me, don’t worry though! I’m a quick learner! I’ll be ten times! - no! a HUNDERED TIME more careful!”

“that’s a lot of carefulness!” exclaimed Chara slightly worried

“Oh, were they always White?”

“they- no, they were red before”

“Oh, like mine!!”

“really?” asked Chara curiously

“Yes! they must have been very beautiful!”

“no, they were not… in my village, it’s said that humans born with red eyes are demons, that they represent the embodiment of evil”

“Embodiment of evil?” asked Asriel

“it means the container and responsible of all the evil things in the world, and that evil must be punished for simply existing”

Asriel remained silent not knowing how to properly respond  

“and, I was that embodiment, I don’t remember well, but my sight was always blurry, and, my eyes were constantly burning.”

“Whenever I tried opening them, they always started crying on their own, like if… they hated me…”

“each day mother poured that “medicine” on them, she said it will “fix them”, but it never did for a long time, it made them burn even more, I thought that not even mother’s medicine could erase the evil that they were…”

“and so, mother was always, always angry, and so, I too was angry… at myself”

“I was scarred that if the village found out about me, they would end up punishing mother too… that’s why I always remained at home, Mother said I couldn’t go outside, and if I ever broke that rule, monsters would come to take and eat my ugly eyes…”

“T-that’s not true! We would never do something so horrible!!” Strongly mumbled Asriel denying such gruesome act

“And one day, mother was very busy, so she asked me to take the medicine on my own, but I was a bad child, I didn’t want it to hurt, I tried taking the, I wanted to pour it in my eyes; but my hands were shaking and… the flacon slipped… and spilled all over the ground…”

“it couldn’t have been a mistake… I’m sure I did it on purpose…I’m evil after all…”

“I don’t…” Interrupted Asriel her story

“hum?”

“I don’t think you did it on purpose… if- if it hurt you… it was bad for sure!! …isn’t it?!”

“maybe… I don’t know anymore…” said Chara confused, as she began questioning everything she knew.

“then, how did you fall from the Sun gap?”

“Well, when mother came back… she was naturally so angry; she screamed, and she hit me”-

“She is the bad one- She is the demon not you!!” Cut off the prince angrily

“No, no, no! you don’t understand! I deserved it… I wasted the precious medicine she made for me, and it didn’t even hurt that bad!” said the child in clear denial

“…even if you say so…” said the young monster not yet convinced by the legitimacy of her mother’s doings

“and when mother left, I tried opening my eyes, and for the first time they didn’t hurt anymore! Mother’s medicine worked for sure! I looked at my hands! my feet! and I saw my room! There were tons of different used toys too! but all I wanted to see were those eyes…”

“I looked around the room, and I found a broken mirror, and there I saw them! Those evil eyes; they… they were, of a vivid red! And…”

Chara stopped talking and kept silent for a moment…

“and?” asked Asriel slightly tilting his head

>>> TO BE CONTINUED

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CH 3.3 : 63-71<— 72-78 . 

CH 3.4~

“The hero is dead, long live the hero!”  Finally, the hero was taken down!  And Burst’s motives are finally clear, weird indeed, but clear. Haha

For her, monsters were already dead, even before her wicked doings, all they lived for, was THE SURFACE. 

“is it really that good? is it that much worth dedicating all your time & energy... all your hopes & dreams to it?!” wondered the red eyed demon~

Monsters said “when i’ll go to the surface...” “When we will break the barrier...” 

“They are indeed already dead.” agreed Gaster, but his foresight seemed to extend further than just the statements of Chara as his voice was filled with melancholy...

“Please talk about something else, please do something else, please accept it and MOVE ON!!!” deeply believing into her fatalistic philosophy, loathed the girl the monsters way...

She did scream; she did talk; but she never changed anything; and for some reason, talking or not; her judgement in the hall; was always the same, complete inhalation.

She kept on talking-

But nothing changed.

The girl felt upon her shoulders the responsibility of changing such deplorable state; bearing the weight of the sins of her own race; bearing the weight and guilt of her decreased brother; and finally and not the least; holding deep inside her core; the sight and hopes of her adoptive fluffy father...

“Chara! You have to stay determined! You can't give up... You are the future of humans and monsters...” 

It was something no one else can do. it was her responsibility. and she was DETERMINED to do it. NO MATTER THE MEANS.

Here is the final part of this chapter! what a ride (75 pages dam)

a lil’ explanation of Burst’s motives and reasons; i felt on putting them on this part for how important they are to the story~

The “Only text” parts will be parts on their own!

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