Deborah AbelaāsĀ hands-on writing workshop for WriteLinks on 5th August, 2017 inspired so many writers, that many bussed, trained and carred home to rework their opening paragraphs. Others who attended critique groups shortly after, saw part of their peersā works anew. Abela, former teacher, Cheez TV writer and author of 25 books was courageous admitting her doubts about her writing ability. Audible sighs of relief signalled the audiencesā appreciation for her candidness. Abelaās 15-year writing career saw her share the ābig things she knows now about writing for kidsā. Abela exudes an energetic passion that spills onto her audience, motivating writers to share their class work.
Write A Killer First Paragraph
Abelaās first big tip. āYour first chapter has to be short, sharp, solid, fast. Itās got to grab your young reader. Itās got to almost have a beginning middle and end, and a cliff hanger at the end. You want to hook themā¦ hold them and keep them reading.ā The first lines were critical to hook the reader. In positioning herself as a āreaderā, Abela role played asking questions after reading Gleitzmanās opening lines.
Morris Gleitzmanās Once ā āOnce I was living in an orphanage in the mountains and I shouldnāt have been. And I almost caused a riot. It was because of the carrot.ā
Abela as reader, āWhat do you mean youāre living in an orphanage and you shouldnāt have been? So are your parents still aroundā¦ or not still around? What do you mean you almost caused a riot? And whatā¦ does a carrot have to do with anything? Morris has that beautiful balance between the very very serious and a lovely note of comedy.ā After further examples, her audience were keen to write and share their first paragraph for Abelaās feedback.
The basics of writing for kids, āit must be kid-focused where often kids lead the action with maybe an adult nearby.ā Often Abela gets rid of the adults ASAP or sidelines them. She found the easiest book to do this was in Grimsdon where she flooded an entire city, rescued most of the people, took them somewhere else but left some kids behind. āThe kids could do whatever they wanted. They didnāt have to be home for bedtime or have to explain the broken bones because theyād been on an adventure hanging from a plane.ā
Abela regularly questions her motives for writing and encouraged others writers to do the same. āWhy am I writing? Why am I writing this particular piece? Is it because Iām excitedā¦ Is it a period in history I love? This story wonāt leave me aloneā¦ itās driving me nutsā¦ I wake up at 3 in the morningā¦ canāt get the characters out of my head.ā Whatever your why, a passionate answer will see you committed to your project.
Also, āWhat is the story Iām trying to tell and are you doing it? With every paragraph, every single chapter, what is the story Iām trying to tell? With Grimsdon, Iām trying to tell about a bunch of kids who are stuck in a flooded city and are desperate to escape.ā
Abela said her novels had their own personality and likened them to being child-like. āSome (stories) come roaring outā¦ like in The Spelling Bee. It was a delightful, playful gorgeous thing and it sort of wrote itself.ā
However, Grimsdon was her naughty child. āNo matter how nice I was to it, it would not behave. It felt like I dragged every single word out of some word rock.ā Her editor advised, āJust write one paragraph at a time, one page at a time and you will get to the end.ā Like Grimsdon, Abela appears to have a delightfully devilish streak in her as BookLinks co-ordinator Yvonne Mes found out.
Abela explained the elements using the cake baking analogy. Ā āAt the very, very beginning, your story needs the three basic ingredients character, setting and problem.ā Put these three elements into the plot potā¦ take those characters, put them into an interesting settingā¦ then we make as much stuff go wrong for themā¦ .ā
Know your characters like youāve met and are getting to know them. Make them interesting, especially if āyouāre asking kids to hang outā with them for a whole novel or series.
Your setting is the same. āThe single nicest thing a kid has said is, āI felt like I was in that book.ā It means youāve done it. Youāve created a world and youāve created kids that feel real. And that this (world) could possibly exist. No matter your world, whether soccer fields, haunted castles or World War II it must be authentic.ā
Know what your characters want, then create problems to achieve it. āWhat is the thing your character wants the most? Itās usually numerous things, but what is the one thing driving that character? For India Wimple in the Stupendously Spectacular Spelling Bee, what she wants is to win the spelling competition.ā But first she wants ānot to have that feeling of throwing up in front of a group she doesnāt know.ā The things you throw at your character must be hard to get, but not impossible. And it mustnāt be frustrating for the reader.
Abela found a way to silence the āvoice in your headā that often reminds you how bad you are. She learned to become so involved in her characters and their story, that it felt like sheād forgotten the āvoiceā was there. āI ignore it. I donāt give it permissionā¦ I havenāt got time to listen to youā¦ Iāve got a city to flood or Iāve got some kids to rescueā¦ so get out!ā
The drafts goes through several stages ā from a solid foundation to build your story on, to making sense, to rewriting, to fine tuning and then finessing. Grimsdon went through at least 3-4 drafts before sending it to the editor.
** Editorās Notes Are Gold
In Grimsdon, her editor showed Abela how close she was to her characters and story. When the editor said, āI know why you like this characterā¦ I donāt know why I should.ā In her rewrite, Abela had to transfer her passion for her character to the reader so theyād have more empathy.Ā āNo matter what you write, you must be passionate about what you are writing.ā
Abelaās books have won numerous Australian and USA awards.
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Write with Passion ā Hook, Hold and KeepĀ Reader Deborah Abela'sĀ hands-on writing workshop for WriteLinks on 5th August, 2017 inspired so many writers, that many bussed, trained and carred home to rework their opening paragraphs.
