#arvious

                        ❛    you’re stuck with me.    ❜        so he guesses he’s no choice but to stick around,  loath as he is to do so.  he could have at least tried to veil the fact,  but then --  squalo superbia’s never been one for such things as ‘ courtesies ‘.

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MY OPINION ON;

CHARACTER IN GENERAL: Crowe my queen. I wish we could’ve seen a lot more of her. Her death is a salt mine for me because it was off-screen and what the fuckery, that could have been handled better. Also imagine her in-gaaaaaaame. HOW THEY PLAY THEM: One of the most in-depth (if not THE most) renditions of Crowe Altius I have ever seen. Great job, tbh.THE MUN: SUE. mAY WE CO N TI N U E murderING each OTH e R w FEELS yO

DO I:

RP WITH THEM: yesWANT TO RP WITH THEM:  yes ;w;

WHAT IS MY;

OVERALL OPINION: Before everything else let me tell you I am NOT a poetic person. Back in my college days I avoided poetry subjects because I get confused with all the flowery words and convoluted images and metaphors, and training in law school to be precise in writing just made me more averse. Sue, you write greatly, and because you have your unique way with words, I am very happy to be able to write with and for you. When I think of Crowe, I remember your Crowe, and that your writing style forces me to adapt to a style that I have always been averse to. In a way you’re helping me too, and for that, thank you.

Although my one point is this - despite the fact that you utilize purple prose in your writing, yours isn’t as convoluted as many others out there. However, it DOES make me still have a difficult time untangling and deciphering some images you include in your responses, or even deciphering what it is exactly Crowe is doing - is she thinking? If she is thinking, does it show on her face? What DOES show and does not? Because there are too many (not always, I assure you) images included in one reply with the use of too many words, I somehow still end up getting lost and confused in your work. That and the formatting as well could be just a bit overwhelming - your partner may end up getting distracted greatly from your reply’s point if they have two big distractors in font of them - your words, or the formatting. 

I feel though that this is just my training in writing making it difficult for me. I hope this would help you even in a small way. ;w;

   BUT somehow, she can feel everyone’s eyes on her; with her head facing DOWN, she makes way to the stairs where her friends stood: ALL READY to start on their journey to the great Altissia.     ❛     Sorry...     ❜     is all she says once she’s close ENOUGH.

“  is there any special reason as to why you’re looking at me like that?   i guess if you want to fight, we can go at it  .”                 witch. judgements pass as inaudible stabs.  tredd is incapable of reasoning, getting to know another soul that isn’t axis or sonitus      && even then -  he hates them too.   gaze is met with an expression that’s typical for furia:    calm. unamused.  serious.       //     lo  and  behold,  tiredness  crashes  against  this  elite  glaive.

           vexation tears a sharp exhale, jagged irritation that sours a usually complacent expression ( directed not towards her, of course, such a thing he’d never dream of, but towards his own incapabilities that aren’t for a lack of trying ). shoulders roll, attempt to ease tautness strung across them; fingers a struggling flex to resist the urge to run back to well worn ruts and ignore such a glaring weakness.

The words pierced him, far more than any blade that had entered his body or any bullet that had tore through hardened muscle. It had been enough to be a lasting injury while sights took in the prone figure of a thoroughly defeated crow. She'd pushed him, beyond the point of taking everything she fed him. Rebellion, damaged property, hurting others, hurting herself, the range at which she'd rebelled had escalated to the point of personally enlisting with the Glaive itself and leaving his home. She made her own rules, followed what she wanted and she'd wanted to be a soldier. But to hear her feelings spill outward only encouraged features and his jaw to tighten. 

"Yeah. I know. Now get on your feet or lay there and choke on your own blood. War isn't about getting special treatment, your body breaks you put yourself back together." A rush of flame had features tilt away in time. Typical; she had lashed out letting her feelings get the best of her.