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Edwige Fenech

but this one takes the cake, Taehyung’s fansite Max Light now a fansite for the non-alcoholic drink Mac’s Light

Oh hey, looks like that was the end of Insinuation! Makes sense; that wham line at the end of the previous chapter is a pretty good thing to end the arc with.

So we’re heading into another interlude, as I sort of expected would happen when the arc ended. I wonder, will it continue what Interlude 1 started by having a different perspective character? And if so, who will it be? I’ve previously suggested a few candidates - one of the Undersiders, their mysterious “boss” or even one of the antagonists - Bakuda, Oni Lee or even Rottendick, uh, I mean, Lung.

And that seems to be the end of the Interlude. That’s odd, I hadn’t expected an interlude to end on a cliffhanger. I guess maybe we’re picking this back up in Interlude 3? Or maybe Taylor somehow ends up going to England and meeting these characters in the Forbidden Forest? That seems a little contrived, but I still have no clue how else these characters are connected to the overall story. This isn’t the first thing I’ve read with an interlude/intermission that seems entirely disconnected from the main story and becomes important later, though, so I’m sure I’ll find out eventually.

As for quality, I feel like the writing wasn’t quite as good as usual in this chapter. Maybe Raven wasn’t at her best the day she did the editing of this chapter. Still, she did a good job compared to how Wildbow apparently writes without editing.

I think I’ll refrain from speculating on the next arc until we get there. With that in mind, I only have one thing left to say:

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Snowing and raining at the same time? Ew, you’re gonna get slush on the ground. I like snow, but when it mixes with rain like that, it’s not very nice.

Also, I guess Ebony has a weakness to the sunlight because of her vampire powers. I wonder how common that kind of thing is. Taylor should stay away from fly-swatters, just in case.

A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.

Ooh, conflict. It seems there’s a category of people at Hogwarts called “preps”. What exactly does that entail?

“Hey Ebony!” shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!

Oh hey, another new character. “Draco” is an unusual name. Then again, Ebony and Taylor aren’t exactly all that common either, I think.

“What’s up Draco?” I asked. “Nothing.” he said shyly. But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

Well that was a short conversation. Apparently Draco is a rather shy guy. I hope to learn more about him later.

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Wait, what? Was that it? No, wait, there’s more after the author’s notes.