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Hey remember when I was like oh boy I hope to finish TPB this year! Haha yeah so there's 22 weeks left in the year, which is 44 chapters (if I keep up the 2 a week, which I'd planned on dropping when the weather got cold.
Yeeaah I don't think I'm finishing TPB before 2027.
I really doubt it comes up much if at all in SR (or if it does, it'll be in later arcs, not TPB), but I wanted to give the Bloody some kind of extra flavor or culture. They haven't been around long enough to have major traditions and like a super solid group culture, but they do have the beginnings of one!
Idk, in canon Bloodclan kinda felt like...ya know, they're just mean. That's their whole deal. They're mean city cats who love violence. Which was fine, since their only real purpose was to be an uncomplicated antagonistic force that they could pretty much wipe out instead of Tigerclan, cause if they get rid of most of Shadowclan and Riverclan then where does that leave the series? But if I'm already trying to flesh out the other antagonists, and I don't do anything at all with the Bloody, they feel kinda like a cop-out.
Anyway, to answer your question more specifically, what the fuck vulture-men:
They're the city workers who come to clean up dead animals
The cats who follow them kinda treat them like the ferryman, carrying the dead to the afterlife.
Cats who don't follow them think they eat the cats, feed them to the beasts, or just dump them somewhere else.
Right now the tradition around them is just watching, but some cats will try to chase off other humans who try to move the body.
Sorry it took so long to get to this, I typed out most of a reply, went to double check something, and it disappeared without saving as a draft.
I assumed this was about SR specifically, but if I'm wrong feel free to send another ask!
There's a few easter eggs about either future events or fandom jokes. There's a reference to Midnight when Firepaw first joins the clan. And Dustpelt enjoying the camp repairs was initially kind of a reference to the fandom joke about him being the clan builder. Also there's a reference to Thornclaw being the patrol guy, Mousefur complains about not having time to do much battle training or hunting practice with him and says he's going to be a warrior who only knows how to patrol.
Then there's also been a few things that weren't references, just points of inspiration that felt really obvious to me but actually weren't lol. Brokenstar being scentless was largely an accident, but part of why I kept it (in addition to working with a different thing I needed accomplished) was that it reminded me of a scene from a podcast I adore. Minor spoilers for The Wizard The Witch and The Wild One (specifically the Children's Adventure), but the titiular wild one loses his magical fae scent when bathed, taking on the scent of the soap used instead. Grandmother Wren comments that it's a good thing they didn't use unscented soap, so he won't have to go without a scent. It's not really brought up again, but I've listened to it enough that it stuck with me.
Then one book inspired both a scene and some world building. Spoilers for Briar's Book (or The Healing in the Vine if you have the cooler UK title), by Tamora Pierce (in case anyone cares about spoilers for a 30+ year old book series that's been out of print for a hot minute lol). The book is set during an epidemic, and there's a character who becomes ill, but then recovers completely except for a cough that won't go away. Now, in the book it become pnemonia, not redcough, but you can probably see how that became Crowfrost's whole everything.
The other thing inspired by that book is also Shadowclan/Crowfrost related! There's a part that really stuck with me - "Daja was a Trader: they held it was mad to argue when the sick thought that Death approached. Denials only told Death here was someone who would be missed, Death's favorite kind of victim."
I didn't use that 1 to 1, but it did inspire the way Shadowclan treats death. The tradition of elders being allowed to leave on their own terms when they feel close to death comes from a similar line of thinking. Although for Shadowclan the cultural resistance to arguing with someone who says they're dying is less about inviting death's attention and more that they see arguing/denial as almost like saying you know more about that cat's life and death than they do.
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World building that I don't think will come up much in the scrambled rewrite but that I want to write about somewhere: clan traditions regarding vigils.
Talkin' 'bout death, so be warned!
The vigils themselves are mostly the same, as this tradition stretches back to the dawn of the clans. There are minor variations, such as who speaks first or what herbs and flowers specifically are used, but most traditions are the same.
The main point of deviation is vigils when there is no body. A cat who is taken by a predator, swept away by a river, or goes missing and is confirmed or believed dead will still have a vigil.
Thunderclan
As seen with Ravenpaw's vigil, Thunderclan uses a bundle of herbs to stand in for the body. They usually use the same herbs that are used to prepare the body, but may include the cats favorite flowers or herbs that the healer has extra of.
During herb shortages, a bundle of bracken, twigs, and regular non-medicinal plants are used. Catmint and other rare or valuable herbs are rarely ever used, although there have been some cases where a cat heroically saves someone but is lost in the process, and catmint was used to honor them.
After the vigil, the herbs, flowers, or twigs are burried as if they are a body. The reasoning for this varies from cat to cat, and the exact origins are unknown. Some believe it's just meant to give grieving cats a grave to visit, while others think it helps the spirit return to Thunderclan territory and join Starclan. Many cats attribute it to luck - it's bad luck not to have a burial after a funeral, and worse luck to reuse herbs that were used in a funeral.
Riverclan
Riverclan's tradition is similar, at least at first. They focus more on using things to represent the cat rather than the tradtional funeral herbs, though. While a representational body might include some herbs, it's also common to see feathers, small stones, shells, and flowers.
Riverclan in SR does still decorate their nests, so often times one or more of the cat's personal decorations will be used, and friends and family may contribute some of their own decorations to represent the part of them that went with the cat who died.
In the case of any funeral, most of the cat's decorations are claimed by the cat's friends and family, and it can get just as messy as sorting out inheritance among humans. It's not unusual for elders, sick, or heavily injured cats to specifically give away some of their decorations to cats to avoid their loved ones arguing after they die.
Unlike Thunderclan, Riverclan does not bury their representational bodies. Instead, the collection of items are taken to the river, to either be swept away or sink to the bottom. For vigils with bodies, some objects may be buried with the body and others may be taken to the river.
It's considered very rude to intentionally recover an object used in a funeral. However, if a younger cat finds one of the objects used without realizing what it was, it's considered very lucky. It's believed to be a sign that Starclan is watching over the young cat. This is one of the reasons that even funerals with bodies often include giving objects to the river.
The other reason dates back to Riverstar, who was brought to the clan by the river. He had great respect for the river, and believed it would carry him to Starclan as well. Over the years Riverstar's belief that the river connected their clan to Starclan has remained in Riverclan, although not every cat believes it or believes as strongly.
Windclan
Windclan does not use a representational body at all. If asked why, most cats would not know the answer, but the elders may remember that it is connected to the legend of the Grave-Crawlers. To have a grave without a body is to invite trouble, so they don't make a grave.
Instead, they gather around and hold a vigil over the empty space where the body would be. When it is time to bury the body, the elders walk outside together to the burial ground, as if they were carrying a body. They then step apart, symbolically releasing the body so the spirit is no longer attached to the ground.
Windclan is unique in that they take the weather into account for vigils. Rain or shine doesn't matter, but vigils held on windy nights are said to be a good sign. The wind will carry the spirit swiftly to Starclan. A still night without even a slight breeze is considered bad luck, and more superstitious cats might try to use their breath to speed the spirit along.
Shadowclan
Shadowclan uses prey as a representational body, something the other clans find grotesque. However, Shadowclan does not see it as comparing their loved one to food. Instead, it's a representation of life, since cats need prey to live.
The cat's loved ones will usually hunt prey specifically for the funeral, with the best piece being chosen to represent the cat. The chosen prey is not eaten, not even during a famine, and is instead buried.
There was a brief period of time where cats argued that if dead prey represented live cats, then live prey should be used to represent dead cats. Cats would catch prey without harming it, bring it back to camp for the vigil, then release it afterwards. That particular type of prey would not be hunted for a few days afterwards.
However, this was difficult and led to some highly chaotic funerals, where cats tried desperately to keep a frog or mouse from escaping without hurting it. Arguments also broke out over how long they should wait before hunting that animal again. They went back to using dead prey.
Elders sometimes get the urge to wander off, especially when they're close to death. While other clans do their best to keep this from happening, Shadowclan believes it disrespectful to intervene. The belief is that cats know when it is their time, and standing in their way is the same as proclaiming that you know more than them about their own fate. An exception is made for cats who are clearly confused or not aware of what they are doing.
Elders who feel the urge to wander beginning will sometimes hunt or select their own prey for the clan to use in their funeral. Unlike with other funerals, the elder does often eat the prey as a way of exercising control over their own mortality. The bones are cleaned and left for the clan to use. The funeral for wandering elders is held either when the death is confirmed or one moon after they leave.
Because of this tradition, cats will notice if there are bones around camp. It often makes older cats nervous, and typically prompts the healer to make rounds checking on every cat (if they don't know where the bones came from) or the specific cat leaving the bones.
Adding onto this with a few other traditions from outside the clans!
Kittypets
The main tradition kittypets have regarding death is that if it's safe to retrieve the body (or their collar or other personal item), you should do so and take it to their home. Even cats who hate each other respect the bond between kittypets and housefolk. Plus, housefolk running around looking for their cat really disrupts everyone's routine.
Loners and Rogues
This is the most varied group by far. Burying your dead is fairly common, but there are also plenty of cats who prefer not to bury/be burried. It depends primarily on how the cat was raised, whether or not they live in a group, and their personal experiences.
The Bloody
There's no room to bury your dead in the city, which hasn't been much of a problem for them so far. The Bloody is a new enough group that they don't have traditions so much as they have habits. These habits vary based on the cats' backgrounds, although some have begun to coalesce into something more unified.
Bloodied cats who were kittypets often ask that their bodies be placed where twolegs can find them, even if they aren't their housefolk specifically. If the cat brought anything with them, like a collar or toy, and no one else wants it, it's usually taken with them. Cats will typically stay to watch for predators for a day or two. A sort of reverance for the city workers who come to clean up the bodies has sprung up among them, and even some former loners and rogues ask to be given to the Vulture-Men.
Former loners and rogues who aren't as taken by the idea of a group of twolegs who apparently hunt crowfood usually either leave and find someplace quiet to die or they ask for their bodies to be taken to the nearest tree or green place and left. Some ask to be burried, but this isn't always possible. Some former loners and rogues also find it weird to have any preference at all for what's done to their bodies after they die.
Cats who were born in the Bloody or joined very young may pick a tradition to follow based on their friends/family/personality, but the Vulture-Men are rising in popularity. There are a number of rumors circulating about them at any given time, although only time will tell which ones become myth and which are forgotten.
The Bloody don't typically hold a vigil for the dead, but a cat's friends and family often gather after the body is disposed of to hold a reception or repast of sorts. They eat and share stories together. Some of these are private events, only for those closest to the cat who died. Others are public and any cat is welcome to join. If there's no body, they skip straight to the reception/repast, and would likely think the clan cats are odd for crafting a representational body.
Skyclan
Traditionally, Skyclan's vigils looked the same as the other clans'. However, if the cat was young, they would hold a silent vigil for most of the night, representing the vigil that cat would have had to become a warrior. Skyclan gave young cats posthumous warrior names more often than the others, although it depended. The family of the cat were consulted first, and the healer would ask Starclan for a sign representing the cat's wishes.
If there was no body, Skyclan would instead use a stone marked with some sort of coloring. Depending on the season, they might use berries, mud, bark, or flowers. It was forbidden to use blood, however. It was thought to both attract predators and invite bad luck. The stone was placed somewhere sentimental to the cat outside of camp, and it was not to be disturbed until the mark washed off naturally from the rain.
(It is said that, in the first moons that Birdflight was able to leave Thunderclan's camp and wander the territory on her own, she marked every stone she came across. Some say cats still find markings on stones to this very day, although no cat remembers what they mean anymore.)
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Inoticed some people calling you goose is that fine or like what do we call you?
Did I....did I never make an intro post??
I guess not. 4 years on this blog and I've never actually introduced myself, wow.
I like people calling me Goose! I'm ok with Goose, Solargoose, or SG. And I primarily use she/her pronouns but I also like they/them and I'm neutral on other pronouns.
Have you ever changed something because of ther eaders?
If I was going to do that I would have to do a lot of rewriting, some of y'all have gotten pretty good at figuring me out!
In all seriousness, no, I haven't. I know there are some people who get upset about twists or plotlines getting guessed, but my take is that it just means readers are paying attention and my foreshadowing is working. And that's exciting!
That's part of why I love seeing people's theories, whether they're correct or not <3 what do you mean people are reading my writing and then thinking thoughts? Thinking thoughts about the words I made? Beautiful, stunning, amazing, fantastic.
My birthday was last week, and as a special treat for me I dusted off my first ever warrior cats fanfic, complete with the original author notes from ffnet!
The first time I reread this, years ago, I was so embarassed. I don't even really remember why, to be honest, I guess just because it's a thing I wrote when I was young. But now I think it's kinda cute. I can actually see some of the things that eventually became hallmarks of my writing style. The tone I use when the elders are telling the story is pretty similar to what I've used in SR for the elders' stories and the grave-crawlers. Obviously there's some rough bits - why did my girl Willow have to cross every clan's territory? There was no need to zig zag like that lol. But I was a kid and I didn't have the map in front of me, and also I had an idea that I wanted to run with even if it didn't make perfect sense. I was just having fun, and I think that's nice :)
Elder's Tails - Originally published May 22, 2011, under the username WolfFang of LeafClan (I changed it to Hysterical Insanity later).
A/N I don't know what exactly inspired it, but here it is anyways. I don't own Warriors, however much I wish I did! I do own the cats named in this story, though. Also, the unnamed mother in this is actually called Willow. Just though I'd throw it in there. Her Tribe name was actually Willow That Grows By Quiet Stream.
The old black she-cat chuckled quietly at the hoard of kits surrounding her gold colored den-mate.
"Oh, come on, FireWhisker, they won't leave until you tell them another." Her rasp was met with a cheer from the kits and a snort from the elder tom.
"I believe it's your turn, YarrowTail. Besides, you are better at the Tale of the Five Kits." A sly grin crept onto the tom's face; he knew he had won.
"All right," she conceded, "listen up. BitterKit, stop pacing. JuniperKit, leave MossKit's tail alone. Here is a tale of a time long past; only seasons after ThunderStar had joined StarClan….."
A single, silky brown she-cat paced the borders of a place where a great number of cats dwelled. She had lost her mate when he had strayed across the border once, and she was not keen on getting herself and her kits killed as well. But she had to cross.
Finally, after a moon of deciding, she waited at the border until the patrol of cats that guarded it came along. The she-cat recognized a grey tom and a golden she-cat that had been in the patrol that killed her mate. She wavered, but padded up.
"Greetings. I need permission to cross your territory." Though met by hissing and spitting, they eventually agreed to escort her through.
However, as soon as her kits - 5 silver she-kits in all – came tumbling through the bushes and were gathered together with her tail, the grey tom spoke in outrage.
"We agreed you would cross, not them as well!" More spitting and hissing, but eventually they reached an agreement. One of her five kits was to become a ThunderClan Warrior. (You see, the leaders at this time were quite corrupt.)
Sighing with grief, the she-cat handed over Swift, the eldest of her kits, and was granted passage to RiverClan territory.
There, she was met by the same welcome, and the same price. From RiverClan to ShadowClan, one kit. And so Sure was given up.
The same event occurred in ShadowClan and WindClan. Clear went to WindClan, Frost to ShadowClan. Now the she-cat was left with only her youngest kit, Star.
Star and her mother traveled a long time, padding away into the mountains. Star became strong by the time they reached the mountains, where a friendly group of cats, called the Tribe of Rushing Water, took them in.
Many moons later, all the kits were accomplished. SwiftStrike was the quickest of wit in a battle, SureFoot the best swimmer, ClearSky the best rabbit hunter, FrostWing the most silent in the night, and Star That Shines On All the strongest prey-hunter. But they were unhappy, and soon Star set out to find her siblings. Her mother told her the way and wished her luck, though she was too old to accompany her now.
Star's long journey was perilous, though exact dangers were forgotten in time. Soon enough she reached the edge of the Clans and plunged in to find ClearSky, FrostWing, SureFoot, and SwiftStrike.
She did find them, and soon enough she had adopted a space at Four Trees, where she belonged to every Clan and no Clan, for her sisters were all quite high in standing.
But peace did not last, and a great battle between all the Clans came to be. Only the sisters stood apart, wondering at the foolishness. Clouds covered the sky, but no rain fell. At last the Clan sisters tore their own leaders off whoever they were fighting, while Star climbed to the Great Rock and let out a yowl that shook the very ground. The fight broke up in time to look up and witness a great happening. The very stars of the sky had come down, falling and dancing about Star and her sisters, before taking them, green eyes blazing, to Silver Pelt where they became true stars, shining down with rays of peace. And so SwiftStrike's quick wittedness, SureFoot's surefootedness, FrostWing's stealth, ClearSky's speed, and Star That Shines On All's strength was passed through their rays into each cat, and for many moons there was a great time of peace. A time so peaceful, it rivals even the Great Journey….
"That's the end." YarrowTail breathed at last. JuniperKit cocked her head.
"So, they all became Stars That Shine On All?" FireWhisker chuckled from his nest. The three kit's mother padded over, emerald eyes laced with amusement.
"All right, kits, it's time to sleep. I hope you behaved and didn't cause any trouble." She mewed.
"No, not at all QuietWillow. They were perfect little warriors." YarrowTail smiled up at the young queen.
QuietWillow smiled and herded her kits into the nursery before disappearing in herself; a flash of silver fur and green eyes…
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Wait if Crowfrost dies then what about Dawnpelt's kits?
A little peek behind the curtain - even before I decided to kill Crowfrost, he was never going to be the father of her kits. Apologies to anyone who liked that ship, but the timeline got weird and I had to decide which version of reality I was going to stick to.
Canon Crowfrost is introduced as a warrior in Eclipse, and I don't think there are any descriptions of his age. If we assume he was a young warrior, that puts him being born just before arc 3. Which would make him a bit older than Dawnpelt, but not the biggest age gap by any means. If he wasn't a young warrior, he would've been born during arc 2 or possibly earlier.
Except the timeline for the arcs has shifted. Arcs 1 and 2 have very little gap, arc 2 and 3 have a wider gap, and Dawnpelt might not even be born until arc 4. Now, luckily Crowfrost is unattached - the only parental info he has is from a fb post, not canon, so I could have just pushed him back to be born later, but then I got sidetracked by that non-canon family info, because it turned out to be fascinating.
According to that fb post, his parents were Dawncloud and Smokefoot. Dawncloud already has a whole host of prequel-related timeline issues, and Smokefoot is introduced as a warrior in The Sight. Considering that Dawncloud died in Arc 1, Crowfrost would have to be super old or the first recorded kit born to a Starclan cat. It was obviously never made canon, but the weirdness of it captivated me.
Anyway I had a different idea for Dawnpelt's kits by this point, so I figured I'd put him in arc 1. I was going to make him Dawncloud's kit, but I realized he looked similar to Whitethroat and figured I'd make them brothers.
The last few chapters of Scrambled Rewrite have been way less depressing than before them (you know the whole situations occuring). And these questions have been quite wholesome as well so I have to ask. Are there any BIG tragedies in Scrambled and if so, can you give a range on how many tragedies there are? This totally isn't because I'm paranoid and scared... TOTALLY not...
Thanks for the question! Lol yeah I try to balance the Things are Happening chapters with a few Good Times chapters to keep things from being a total slog, glad to hear it's working! :)
For the prophecies begin, I'd say it's roughly comparable to canon. There's actually a few deaths I'm getting rid of (not to say those characters will remain alive forever, but they live a little longer), so there might actually be slightly fewer? But I like to really dive into the emotional aspects of the story, so the remaining ones are maybe a bit beefier. It probably evens out!
I'm counting 5-6 real tragedies left in TPB, with a sprinkling of emotional moments that aren't exactly tragedies but might pull at the heart strings. The remaining tragedies in this part are all canon as well, so if you've read canon arc 1 you're probably all set, no major worries.
For the rest of the parts, it's hard to say because while I do have an outline, it's not chapter by chapter. It's probably similar - roughly the same number as canon, just changes to the how and when.
But not every arc matches exactly with it's canon counterpart - for example, canon arc 4 Omen of the Stars, vs SR part 4 Solar Winds. OotS has the final battle and Solar Winds doesn't, so it's way less tragic than canon.
I hope this answered your question, and feel free to ask more if you have them! :)
Hey so turns out this was kinda a lie. It wasn't at the time, but that's the hazard of writing such a long fic!
So let me clarify now that the major tragedies are all canon (Silverstream's death, for example), but not all canon tragedies happen in this au (can't give an example yet but you'll know them when they happen, or rather when they don't happen), and minor characters may still die/have other bad things happen to them that don't happen in canon (for example, the most recent chapter of SR).
Thanks for answering my last one! I hope it's okay to ask another, this is kinda 7 but more so I want to know your favorite opening description, if that's alright?
Oh absolutely! Thanks for asking, it's absolutely alright to send in as many as you want :) Sorry this took me a bit to get to lol, it kind of got away from me.
I think my all time favorite goes to Toast at the End of the World, the first short story in a post-apocalyptic slightly sci-fi/fantasy anthology I've been working on off and on for years.
Five years after most of the moon crashed into the Atlantic Ocean, Kate’s toaster caught fire.
I think it sets the tone of the story really well. A catastrophic event happened years ago, but the more important thing is that some lady named Kate is having a terrible day. The whole theme of the anthology is how, even in the face of terrifying, world ending events, a lot of elements of daily life continue on. The moon broke apart, falling into the ocean and causing the entire coastline to shift radically, throwing a large number of things into chaos. But Kate still has to make toast for the guests at her bed and breakfast, and now her toaster is on fire.
Waaaaay better than the original first line, the first draft started with the sentence I used to be a fan of the apocalypse genre. Followed by a paragraph of, quite frankly, trite ramblings that got way too close to just spelling out the point of the story directly. That was written December 2020, and the most recent draft (where I nailed that opening) wasn't written until May 2025. Never delete your drafts, you might come back to them later with more experience and write your favorite thing!
I think a close second is the start to a novel that I've been chipping away at, called Portraits of the End. The opening line of this one actually hasn't changed at all from draft 1 to draft ?? whatever I'm on now.
The End, when it came, was golden.
Mysterious, evocative, impactful. I wish I could say it's some kind of masterful writing technique that I learned and can explain, but uh this one came to me in a dream. PoE is just fully a dream I had, with the weirder dream elements replaced. I mean, the dream ended with the legendary pokemon from Sun and Moon doing a dance that summoned a cosmic kitten that ate the End, and some of the titular portraits were actually of Marceline and Bubblegum from Adventure Time living in a log cabin, and the younger brother had a potato that could detect ghosts soooo...
The End was a strange golden light/radiation storm that destroyed the Earth and sent the surviving humans into space. Decades later, the End is approaching one of the new human settlements. The main character has to protect her family while also dealing with the Queen's strange fixation on her, unraveling what happened during the End of Earth as well as what's going on now.
If you're sensing a theme, this one was also from 2020! Lot of grappling with exisistential dread and the dull routine of daily life that year, huh?
I think I might've already answered for already published SR chapters (or at least I answered about my favorite moments? Something similar idk), but Sandstorm checking for bees and Cinderkit trying to learn about bones are up there.
I was going to look through my non-warrior cats wips but tbh there are so many of them...what if instead I gave you out of context dialogue from future SR scenes? I have a habit of writing out future scenes when I have a vivid idea of them, so I have a collection of some things from the distant future lol. But! I'm not going to say who says them or when, and some of these are from really far in the future (like, multiple arcs away)
Under the cut cause it's long and I guess some people may not want to read them.
"I loved the parts of him that were gentle, but I hated everything else."
“The cat who killed her must have been strong.” [Name] murmured. “Would you tell me who it was?”
"You chose this just like me"
"And I will bring us into a new age."
“Cats don’t come here unless they’re troubled by something.”
“You know, it’s been so long, I don’t quite recall what my name was. Why don’t you pick one for me?”
“I hadn’t hoped to see you again so soon."
"Even if our claws cannot strike your enemies, Starclan will never abandon the clans."
“I love him more than words can say, but…I can’t sit idly by and watch this anymore.
I hadn't actually thought about why Brokenstar did stuff. Is that something you'll get into later?
Thanks for asking! Probably a little bit will be revealed later on, but he won't have time for a full monologue anytime soon, so I'll answer more in depth!
Basically, my idea for Brokenstar's motivation was that he thinks he deserves power and respect, resents the fact that he had to work for it, and views himself as having worked harder than other cats (even though he probably worked about the same as the other warriors overall).
Some of it is his natural personality. If he were a kittypet, he'd be the sort to wake you up by screaming to feed him breakfast, then wander off and not eat once you're up. If he were a regular warrior, he'd make small changes and demands when leading the patrol, like oh no we're not hunting there, I want to hunt over here.
But this was really encouraged by Raggedstar and Clawface while he was growing up. There was a mix of pressure (you have to work harder than other cats, you need to be the best, the strongest, a leader among the other apprentices) and an encouragement of arrogance (you're the son of an important cat, the clan owes you respect, how dare that cat speak to you that way, leadership is in your blood).
The result being that he doesn't want to wait for a natural leadership opportunity (working hard means making your own opportunities, plus this is what he's owed). He deserves to be in charge, and other cats have only ever been beneath him, so why not just get rid of the ones in his way?
And then he has power, and it's his right to exercise it however he sees fit. Except cats keep telling him he can't? The warrior code restricts what he can do, and he doesn't even really care about apprenticing cats young or who eats first, he just can't stand that his authority (the authority he worked so hard for and also was born to wield) is being challenged.
That's why he punished Flintfang. Brokenstar wasn't ever going to give him another apprentice, but the fact that he said he would refuse if Brokenstar tried just can't be allowed. But he can't force him to take on an apprentice, both because they're fresh out of kits but also because apprentices are meant to be a sign of his favor and if Flintfang simply refused to take the apprentice out it would undermine his authority further.
That's also why he hates Yellowfang so much. Her being his biological mother and not raising him or telling him...maybe that would mean something, if he went to cat therapy, but that hasn't been invented yet. Instead, he's focusing on the power she secretly held over him. If she'd revealed this secret before he became leader all of his power would've been taken away. He had no way of stopping her, and he didn't even know the secret existed. She had total control the whole time, and it enrages him.
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Considering the convo around Darkstripe rn I think I know the answer, but 17 for the writing ask game? Also curious about 25
Thanks for asking!!
17- Are your protagonists always the “good guys” and your antagonists always the “bad guys” or do you like to do anti-heroes and grey morality?
I love love LOVE heroes who could've been villains and villains that could've been heroes! For me, agency is a big part of morality. If they aren't chosing (or trying to choose) to do good/evil, then they're just a guy in a situation. And don't get me wrong, there are definitely great stories out there about guys in situations! They just usually aren't written by me lol. Also, if they're chosing to do the things they do, there's also the wiggle room to have a hero chose to do something bad, sometimes for a good reason, sometimes not, and for a villain to do something good. How many bad things do you have to do to become a villain? Can you be a hero in the eyes of some and a villain to others, and how will you deal with that? I <3 questions!
I also enjoy villains who think they're choosing to do good but their definition of good/what they're willing to sacrifice to achieve it is what makes them a villain. Not every antagonist has to fall into that, but I do love getting my lil racoon paws into villain motivation when I can. To use SR as an example, Brokenstar didn't think he was improving Shadowclan, he just thought he deserved to do whatever he wanted. But Tigerclaw did think he was helping Thunderclan, and that all the awful things would be worth it in the end.
25- Do you start your novels with dialogue or description? Do you end your novels with dialogue or description?
I almost always start and end with description. I like to ease into my stories rather than starting in the middle of something more intense (although when it comes to reading, I like both equally), and description gives me more wiggle room for the pacing. I do sometimes end chapters with dialogue, especially if there's something dramatic I can use.
Buuuuut admittedly the main reason I don't typically start or end with dialogue is cause I'm bad at it. I think I'm fine at dialogue overall, and sometimes I write really good lines, but there's a lot of weight on the first and last lines of a story. Your hook has to draw people in, make them curious, but not be too confusing without the full context. And I'm not great at coming up with lines that do that.
Similarly with ending, the end of a story has to set the tone you want people to leave with, and I think I'm better at doing that with description than dialogue. I wish I had that kind of knack for dialogue though. My favorite book series ends with dialogue and it makes me absolutely feral (The Emelan Series by Tamora Pierce my beloved <3 <3 "It's always us"!!!!!!! It's! Always! Them!!)
Ah. Heck. I forgot that I was going to post the comparison of my first warrior cats fic and my latest for my birthday today. But work was absolutely atrocious (admittedly at least part of that atrociousness was my fault though)
Oh well. It's my birthday, I can celebrate it whenever I want lol expect that sometime this week probably. Or next week.
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