Mind Your Punctuality
It had started out a typical day for a trio of friends: Ed, Gabriel, and Niles. The three were college-aged students that enjoyed high-jacking and using the bodies of the various students in their dorm room for debauchery. Most days, they would either jack off by themselves or indulge in a little three-way action. Today, as it tended to be, was a case of the latter, as the trio found themselves in the bodies of the swimming team hunks that lived in the same apartment complex.
âNrghâŚ! Fuck, this body feels too good!â cried out Ed as he was pounding his dear friend Niles in the ass while Gabe was eating him out. He flexed his arms, amazed at the amount of muscle he had packed on just by being inside of this guyâs body. He was a foreign exchange student from Spain or something, Ed had no idea who he was but he knew just how hard he wanted this body. âCâmon, give it to me, give it to me!â
But suddenly the sensation of having this cherry popped suddenly stopped. âHey, câmon, what the fuck?!â he cried out, turning over to see what was the problem.
Gabe held up the smartwatch his host was wearing. âWeâre running out of time,â he said, pointing out they only had two minutes to leave before⌠something happened? Honestly, Ed wasnât paying much attention, and with Nilesâ warm and tight stolen ass engulfing his penis in anal nirvana it was even harder to recall Gabeâs advice.
âItâs not safe being inside of these bodies for too long!â warned Gabe. âShit, I-Iâm getting out of here. See yâall later!â His host began to convulse as a spectral light appeared in his core and traveled up his chest and out his mouth. His former hostâs hard cock spewed his load all over Edâs borrowed ass before collapsing on the floor.
Ed rolled his eyes. âCâmon Niles, you really wanna leave right now?â he said while thrusting deep inside Nilesâ borrowed holes.
âHrmfâŚ! MmmffâŚ!â was all Niles was able to say, clutching the sheets with his knuckles as he locked his legs around Edâs borrowed waist.
âHell yeah! Knew youâd seen things my way.â Ed went wild of pounding Niles, grabbing his waist as he thrust in and out like Niles was his own personal fucktoy. âYeah, yeahâŚ! Fuck, it feels so good! Damn!â He smacked Nilesâ stolen thighs a few times, eliciting a delighted moan from him with each meaty slap as the flesh jiggled from the fucking.
âHaarghâŚ! I-Iâm cumming! Take my load, whore!â Ed shrieked, collapsing on top of Nilesâ body and gripping him hard as he came hard all over Nilesâ inside. From beneath him, Niles was writhing and screaming out in pleasure as he came and splattered cum all over their chests.
Even as his stolen cock was softening, Ed couldnât help but keep humping Niles a bit longerâenjoying the sensation of Nilesâ cum spread throughout their chests.
But of course, all good things came to an end. The two convulsed and shivered as their souls exited their spent hosts.
Ed let out a sigh of relief. He grinned, shivering as he felt the aftermath of jacking off and cumming in anotherâs body. It had been so intense that, wait⌠ohhhâŚ
âF-Fuck yeah!â he bellowed out, his own cock making a mess on his sheets before he realized something was wrong. âThe hell is this? Oh⌠oh shit, I gotta go talk to Gabe!â he said, nearly yanking the hair off his scalp. Internally, Ed was fuming. He couldnât even enjoy the sensation of cumming his insides out, and it was all likely Gabeâs fault, too. Little asshole. He shouldâve warned Ed this might happen!
Gabriel pushed up his glasses as he took in all of Edâs story in-between the ranting and ramblings. âI see,â he said, his own punctuation perfectly unchanged. âWell, I imagine these are the marks your host uses. Since you stayed in his body beyond the time limit I warned you about, this particular trait of his found itself in you, now.â Despite the graveness of his words, Gabe was still smirking as spoke. âThis is what I meant when I warned you that we couldnât stay inside other bodies for so long. Now you see what you get when you ignore punctuality.â
âÂĄFuck you, man!â Ed cried out. âÂżWhat am I supposed to do now? ÂżAm I supposed to live the rest of my life without any quotation marks?â Ed grimaced as he felt those upside down question marks appear in his words. âIt looks really stupid seeing English with these marks at the end of my words. Feels like Iâm being interrupted all the time, and it just looks all awkward, yâknow.â
Gabe bristled at that. âYâknow, whenever they localize stories for a foreign market, the punctuation is changed for the new audience. You act like this is something new, â he said.
âWatch out there, youâre mixing them up. Youâre gonna end up confusing the reader, âwarned Ed.
âYouâve got far too little faith. I always believe in the ingenuity of our readers, I said.â
âNow youâre just misplacing them.â
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âÂĄIâm not clicking that! Iâll probably get a nasty virus or something weird in my computer.â
âM y c o c k i n B i o.â
âIâm definitely not clicking on that. So, Âżhow long until this is out of my system?â
âAh, well, uhm⌠hmmâŚI can tell you this: I canât really say; afraid Iâm kinda stumped with that one.â
Ed narrowed his eyes. He really did not enjoy just how many different punctuation marks Gabe was throwing at him. It almost felt like he was being mocked. âÂżHave you never seen this before? ÂżAm I going to be screwed for the rest of my life? ÂżWill it really run out?â
âIt should, it should!â Gabriel insisted. âListen, if it doesnât then Iâll be sure to fix it myself someway, somehow. For now, I would say just keep calm and try not to aggravate yourself too much. You just might make it worse, and I donât want to have to deal with that nonsense.â
Ah, so Gabriel had a serious side to him. It was rare, but a pleasant sight nonetheless. Though Ed lacked sophistication, he could at least appreciate the sincerity he was putting on, even if it sounded like total bullshit.
âOh? Hey, I think Niles is back,â said Gabriel. As if on queue, a loud and almost irritating moan filled the whole apartment. Niles always did have a pair of lungs on him. âLetâs hope his symptoms are a lot less severe than your own.â
Niles stepped outside of the room clad in just a pair of briefs. He looked between his two friends, beaming the whole time, and began to speak:
"Hey, whatâs up guysâoh hold on, whatâs going on?!â And so, another headache occurred between the three friends.
I hope you all don't mind of a bit of a sillier idea from me. I'll keep working on some of my larger projects but have this little thing in the meantime.



















