The fact that we haven't had a story focused on Thinnial, showing us the whole Flyairth situation from the rabbits' perspective, is criminal.
Especially since there isn't even a POV or a glimpse of Prake's opinion on the matterโseriously, she does absolutely nothing. What the hell.
The way they present all this and then make the connection to Flyairthโs arrival in WD feels very forced to me, with that psychic river telling stories in Efrafa. Plus, they never fully explain why the connection was made in the first place?
I would have preferred it to be a standalone chapter telling us the story of that warren (like the chapter in the original book narrating Woundwortโs story) and then, with the doeโs arrival at WD, she would tell her story. Or at least that the โconnectionโ be something more symbolic or more inexplicable and that it then come together, instead of the whole story laid out exactly as it is.
Anyway, things I plan to add to my retelling. Along with one chapter about the Warren after Flyairthโs departure, with Prake as the sole Chief.