i think some of you dont like narratives or stories or characters i think you just like fanfiction tropes

protagonists can and will be sexist, racist, insensitive, cruel, stupid, etc, especially towards the beginning of a story. these are called character flaws and they are a surprise tool that will lead to narrative fulfillment later

The Will of the Many’s first person pov really works in making me feel feeling in regards to names. When we first meet our main character he’s called Vis. It’s what everyone calls him, but we’re told it’s a fake name, that he’s using it to hide. Later we learn his real name – Diago – but it comes from a person who is threatens to use it against him. Very few characters actually call him Diago, meanwhile he goes and gives the name to the wolf he befriends. Is it weird, naming a pet after yourself? Or is it not weird because that isn’t your name anymore? If not for the danger of revealing who you were, would you know what to answer when someone asks your name? Did Diago die along with the rest of his family that day, or did you bury him yourself because it was only way to survive?

"ohhh i dont like metal" yeag whatever. everyone likes men growling and moaning and gaggign and screaming in your ear. please