✨ Denise - 18 - Aries ✨ You can find Pedro Pascal and his characters: [Joel Miller, Marcus Acacius, Javier Peña, Obreyn Martell, Din Djarin, Javi Gutiérrez, Dave York, Dieter Bravo, Francisco Morales…] [Currently addicted to Joel and Marcus] [Forever addicted to Pedro so you can find a post about him quickly.]
Rules: Share one sentence/excerpt from your WIP(s) that starts with each letter of your assigned word.
I was tagged in the game by @the-blind-assassin-12 (thank you! 💚), which made me realise I haven’t done a general WIP post since April! 😲
The following lovely people also deserve my heartfelt thanks for not forgetting that I exist (and that I write), despite my shameful failure to post anything new lately, and tagging me in various WIP Wednesday/Weekend/Whenever posts over the past 8 months (yes, I keep track) 💚:
I’ve been lax with the WIP posts because I’ve finished writing my next fic and am now in the editing stage, so it didn’t really feel like I had new content to share. It’s still a WIP, though, so I guess it counts.
For the word WIP game, Alyssa gave me the word PARTY. Since I wanted this to be a general WIP Weekend post too, I was delighted to find I have a complete snippet where all those letters begin sentences in the correct order 🥳. It’s a smut scene from chapter 5 of Hush, though it’s not – I repeat NOT – fully edited yet, so hopefully there will be improvements beyond this. But I’m not totally unhappy with it, so I figured I’d share anyway.
For context, he’s sitting on a couch, she’s sitting in his lap facing forward, and he’s been holding her there and teasing her for a while, bare-handed, stroking but not quite touching…
. “Please, Mando…” you beg, lust searing through your syllables.
He reacts instantly – fingers sliding straight between your thighs. The first swipe through your soaking folds draws a moan from deep in your chest just as a gasp crackles through his modulator. His left hand abandons your breast, joining its twin to part you gently, gathering your nectar before returning to circle your nipple with your own glistening slickness. The cooling trail tightens your skin beneath his touch, and your bud hardens as he pinches gently before edging away once more.
A note of wanton bliss escapes you, hips bucking toward the fingers that now dance at your entrance. Another whispered appeal tumbles from your mouth, and he rewards your manners with a husky “good girl,” his helmet dipping in approval over your shoulder. Then comes your real reward. He shifts higher, ghosting his thumb over your aching clit and holding steady, allowing you to rub against him, the friction a merciful measure of salvation.
Heat rages inside you as you try to grind hard enough, a desperate drive to reach the pinnacle of bliss he’s promised. Your thighs tremble. Sweat beads along your hairline as you chase the pressure, finding it, then losing it again. Your head falls back against his shoulder. A whimper slips through clenched teeth, eyes squeezing shut as you arch wildly in his lap, seeking what he denies.
“Stars! Please, Mando… please let me come,” you beg, your voice cracking with need. You clutch at his arm, breath held as your plea hangs in the air, the culmination of every tactic you’ve employed to sway him.
His helmet tilts… his body tenses…
Suddenly, his arm locks across your chest like a durasteel bar, pinning you against his pervasive warmth. Your protest dies in your throat as two thick fingers plunge straight into your molten core. Reality fractures as he fills you, stretching, curling, claiming spaces within you that have been empty for too long.
And he doesn’t hold back, no longer teasing, entirely in control of your pleasure as he’s always been – your own involvement just an illusion he allowed. Unleashed, he explores your depths with unyielding vigour, his relentless rhythm sending electricity up your spine.
. When you try to shift your hips to find his thumb once more, his arm tightens across your torso, pinning you in place. “Keep still,” he growls, the vocoder barely containing the raw hunger in those words. His fingers curl upward, finding that perfect spot inside you, the one that makes your vision blur at the edges…
…and then his thumb expertly circles your clit, and a raw, involuntary cry of pleasure bursts forth, echoing through the room.
Mando whispers a staticky “shh” into your ear, but his movements remain merciless, adjusting pace and pressure as he learns to play your body like an instrument. Faster, deeper, the wet sounds of your arousal mixing with your ragged breathing. With each touch, he ignites sparks that build into a blazing fire of longing, leaving you burning with the strength of your desire.
And this is it – the absolute summit, your muscles trembling as he draws slick, obscene sounds from your cunt while you swallow your moans. The fire in your core flares white hot, an inferno of sensation consuming every thought… and you’re teetering on the edge of an exquisite peak, wrapped in this warrior’s arms, utterly at his mercy, so close to surrender…
“Come for me, mesh’la,” he commands.
You shatter.
The cabin dissolves as seismic waves of burning rapture engulf you, muscles seizing, senses screaming. His name tears from your throat, raw and desperate… his answering growl vibrates through your core as your body arches, defying his command to remain still, yet it only spurs him on.
“That’s it,” he breathes, voice rough through the modulator, as his thumb on your clit circles, circles, relentless…
…and then his talented fingers curl inside you again, and stars burst behind your eyelids. You’re falling, drowning, gasping, suspended in a glorious moment where nothing exists but his touch and the lightning coursing through your veins. And when you start to drift back to reality, he varies rhythm, pressure, angle, and you’re gone again, lost in the frenzied bliss of this epic climax.
A longer snippet than I usually offer, but it would’ve been mean of me not to include the last few paragraphs 😁
You can find previous WIPs containing more (unedited) snippets from this fic here: [snippet 1] [snippet 2] [snippet 3] [snippet 4] [snippet 5] [snippet 6]
Related ramblings:
It’s taking forever to edit this damn story. I know we all have different reasons for writing fanfic, and all are equally valid. In my case, I write fanfic to practice and improve – to develop my authorial voice in the hope that, one day, I’ll be good enough to write and publish original works. And a big part of that is continued learning. I’m aware of my own areas of weakness, so I’ve been taking online classes and reading articles, etc., primarily focused on how to effectively “show, not tell” in my writing. I’m now going through my upcoming fic sentence by sentence, attempting to apply what I’ve learned, which is why the editing is taking so long (it’s over 120k words).
But for me, much of what I love about writing is perfecting it, living in these characters’ heads, and really digging into why they’re doing and saying these things. Part of me is sorry for making everyone wait. A more selfish part of me is blissfully editing away, happy in my self-created universe, where I get to spend hours tweaking it to my liking and finding more evocative ways to illustrate my blorbos’ thoughts and feelings for readers. Hopefully, I can reward patient readers with something epic when it’s finally finished.
I’m aiming to have this ready around the time the Mando & Grogu movie is released (May 2026). If you can wait that long and would like a tag when I finally start posting, please raise your hand. You can also join my tag list if you like. No worries if it’s not your cup of tea; I know not everyone in this corner of Tumblr is a Din girlie (gn), but I always try to tag widely for the community spirit (despite the distressingly rapid shrinking of said community 😔) and because I enjoy reading other characters too.
Speaking of, since this is a Din-heavy post (surprise, surprise), I would also like to remind everyone that I have a side blog devoted to Pedro boy fic recs, where you can find daily reblogs for other Pedro character stories. These are a mix of old, new, acclaimed, and unsung fics – mostly oneshots, but a few multichapter fics as well, all of varying lengths. If you’d like to enjoy the fruits of my in-depth fic-hunting, please give it a follow, thanks 🙏🏻
Okay, tagging time. Much love and adoration to the following talented people – please accept this tag for either a general WIP Weekend/Wednesday/Whenever, or for the WIP Word Game if you fancy it. If you choose to play, the word I’m assigning you is: SPACE. Either way, I would love to see what you’re all working on 🤩💚
Reblogging for my tag list folks (general and fic-specific), since it’s a fic update. Thank you all for your support, and sorry for the extremely long wait! 💚
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Allow me to introduce to you @gomilktea, a Pedro Pascal artist here on Tumblr. At first glance, their art is stylistic and creative. However, it is chock-full of romanticization and fetishization of pedophilia, incest, and grooming. They claim it to be “personal taste” and clearly see nothing wrong with it. With this, they are admitting to being into the aforementioned issues.
Pedophelia & Grooming: The pedophilia and grooming art is a little harder to identify, as it appears to be more innocent than not. While seeing Joel and Ellie together may seem harmless, there are definitely some intimate undertones—Joel being shirtless, his head pulled down by Ellie, for example. However, that is not the case for multiple drawings featuring Marcus Acacius and various other characters, most notably children. These could be interpreted as AUs (alternate universes); however, in one piece, it is shown in two drawings that Acacius and Lucius form a romantic relationship. In the first drawing, Lucius is a child. As such, that is pedophilia and grooming.
Incest: My boyfriend put it like this: “No person who is mentally well thinks about family relationships in a sexual context.” On multiple occasions, they have drawn Lucius x Marcus, Javi G. x Lucas, and more. Regarding Javi G. and Lucas, they even said in their tags, and I quote, “I heard love between cousins is legal in Spain?” Along with that, they have SEVERAL drawings duplicating Acacius and Lucius together — Lucius is Acacius’ stepson.
By making this post, I hope to spread awareness about this “creator.” Their behavior is disgusting, and no one seems to bat an eye.
Screenshots can be found in this Google Drive: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1HlKvD0pp5FGuQLpzH35coiHYD5U194a2
Girl when I think about Joel’s death I get so upset like genuinely SO upset I have to just stop thinking about it. I’m so emotionally attached to him it’s BAD . I want to play the second game but I’m so scared to. I don’t think I can handle seeing that shit happen to him. AND IN FRONT OF ELLIE😭😭😭
im about to yap… girl SAME, i’m so emotionally attached to that man, joel is everything to me since 2014, every time i remember he’s gone like—really gone, dead, canonically, my stomach hurts it’s not even an exaggeration😭 specially because he died thinking he had failed as a father, TWO TIMES, and i don’t care what anyone says about ellie telling him that she would TRY to forgive him a night before, like, he still died thinking she was upset to him, and she was, idc what anyone says—but that’s another story🙃
i watched the gameplay of the second game when it first came out back in 2020 and being really honest, back then i didn’t even have time to process what happened, i just saw he was murdered but like, it happened so fast i didn’t have time to process it. Last year I bought my first PlayStation and played the game… you have no idea how much i sobbed, like i’m sobbing while writing this too HAHAH, it hurt so fucking much, i had to stop playing for like 2 or 3 days, it (is) was too much💔
i hate to think he died alone, miserable, when you’re back at his house and see his frames, specially the one where he was sitting alone at the table, that one totally broke my heart😭
(this one)
or when you realize he used to have his meals alone in the window so he can sees ellie’s garage, probably just watching her but knowing he can’t really talk to her, because she’s upset
it breaks to think he died watching ellie, still reaching for her in his lasts moments, being all alone, literally alone
im sorry, i will never get over his death or him:( every time i remember he’s gone i go back to watch pictures of him or something that makes me feel different:( i miss him so much:(
BUT EVEN SO, you should play the game, trust me, it is an amazing experience, i loved the second game so much <3 although it’s super long but it’s totally worth it, the story is so good🥹 i personally love it, even after joel died:( trust me, it’s really good, it’s very complex, but you should give it a try<3
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