Would you care to elaborate a little more on why you think Disney's "Hunchback" had "too many cooks in the kitchen"? Because I've felt the same way about "Wicked," and even Disney's "Beauty and the Beast" (though I love it), and I've heard the same argument about "Brave" too. I know in "Hunchback" there's the disconnect between the dark, mature drama and the goofy gargoyles and slapstick action scenes, but are there any other aspects or themes that you think seem disconnected?
the movie has six credited screenwriters and changed substantially with every rewrite, plus there were numerous contributions from the animators, story team, and musical talent. I love the movie, but you can tell that certain ideas are present in the film that do not make much sense. Many viewers have no idea how the Romani work in the film's logic. Are they misunderstood? Are they criminals? Are they actually magic? Are they beggars and robbers like in the book? There are storyboards of Phoebus being trained to be a thief, for instance.
I think, of all things, the old Nostalgia Critic Disneycember video gives a good sense of what a "normie" take on this movie was when it came out.
Of course I haven't studied the different drafts and different writers' contributions very much, but I think you're right: there are aspects of the Romani's portrayal that don't feel fully consistent with each other.
I've heard the complaint before – repeatedly – that we're set up to see the Romani as an unjustly persecuted people, wrongly stereotyped as criminals, but then in the song "The Court of Miracles" we see that some of them are con artists who masquerade as crippled or blind beggars to trick unsuspecting people out of their money.
Now, personally, I was never confused by this. Even as a child, I understood that because the Romani were victims of racism and persecution, some of them had to turn to theft or deceit just to survive. But if it's true that some of the writers wanted to portray the Romani as genuine thieves (albeit sympathetic ones) while others wanted to emphasize that they're not thieves, but are stereotyped as such, that would make sense. Different scenes in the movie do seem to say different things in that regard.
Then there's the fact that the Romani are established early on as victims of systemic racism and as having been persecuted for decades by the genocidal Frollo, to the point that they have to live in a secret underground hideaway. Yet Clopin, the Romani leader himself, seems to be the official "master of ceremonies" at the Festival of Fools, with Esmeralda as his assistant, and not only does the general public seem to like them and show no prejudice against them, but even Frollo reluctantly tolerates them until Esmeralda stands up to him. Maybe this is left over from the fact that in Tab Murphy's original outline, Frollo didn't start actively persecuting the Romani until after the festival.
And then, yes, there's the question of whether the Romani in the film actually practice magic or are only stereotyped as using witchcraft. About 99% of the movie points to the latter, but then we have Esmeralda using magic tricks to escape from the soldiers at the festival – something she never does in any other scene. Maybe it can be justified if we assume those tricks were waiting to be performed as part of the festival entertainment and she just takes advantage of them to escape, but that fact should probably have been made clearer.
I had never fully considered all these inconsistencies until now, or thought they could be the result of different writers with different ideas for the plot and characterizations.
But this is far from the only movie with inconsistencies in its tone and themes that probably stem from having multiple writes. As I said, even Beauty and the Beast – the beloved, Best Picture-nominated Beauty and the Beast – is one that to me feels slightly inconsistent, possibly because the different people working on it had different ideas of what it was about. Is the Beast a spoiled and powerful brute who needs to be humbled and tamed, or is he a tragic misunderstood "other" who needs to be understood and accepted? Does Belle defy society by learning to love him, or does she reclaim him for society? Besides a fairy tale, is this story more of a Gothic romance, a la Jane Eyre, or more of a romantic comedy of manners, a la Pride and Prejudice? Sometimes when different people in the creative team have different ideas about what the story should be, or when the writing process takes a long time and a single author's ideas drastically evolve from what they were at the beginning, it really does show.



















