Persona Non Grata

Opinion on;

Character in general — Since I just followed you and have not read too many of your interactions just yet, I think my opinion will be a bit more watered down. I will try! As far as face claim is concerned, I absolutely love that you used Boa instead of the plain and mundane girl group idol; it is near refreshing to see muses that aren’t Apink or Girls Day. Who all just sort of blend in together for me. Journalist and painter aren’t the newest of occupations in roleplay; but I firmly believe that people can take the typical and make them atypical. I think you do that quite nicely with Quinn overall, even if I would like to see more of those aspects in interactions? Maybe there was some and I overlooked it.As much as I think detailed biographies are nice, I think at times we as readers can get lost when reading things that are filled with description and metaphors more than simply facts or figures. However, I do think that your usage of description is subtle enough that it does not melt over into flowery language. Though it does straddle that line. I like that you do not give away too much details in your biography because Quinn appears to be quite mysterious, her origins don’t need to be overly elaborated on because her history is meant to be vague. At least, that’s what I take from my prying. I also like the attention to her abilities, each one seems as if they fit nicely into whatever type of being she might be. Instead of adding on to make the character powerful, like an afterthought. Either way, I also like that you took time to tell me about her physical appearance. How her tattoos and odd eye colour fits into her being nonhuman, her origins. Sometimes characters with such quirks can dip into the Mary Sue type of area, mystifying body art and unearthly eyes, I think yours for her works well enough to stray away from that trope.How they play them — I really love how much attention you put into your writing, there is a lot of good solid details, and it breathes life into your muse. I can’t say I read enough where I was able to get a sense of who she was from the words alone. But hopefully in the future that will change. She curses a lot?I think from me to you, you don’t need to try to be poetic or use bigger words, because I believe your writing naturally flows and would be able to stand on its own without the additions. “A city constructed from bones of enemies slain”, you used that line in a reply and I loved it so much that it literally like stuck in my brain for a good ten minutes. People don’t apperciate things like this because they find it simple in comparison to purple prose; but in reality, it’s this type of writing that really pulls a reader in. I was pulled in and it allowed for me to see into her head, she’s old as hell, seeing the world through this type of lense shows not only her age — but her personal views on the world that she NOW is in. Those are character insights that I think are refreshing overall.

The Mun —

Do I;RP w/ them — Not yet! I learned she is my mobile soulmate and she was singing to me.Want to rp w/ them — We plotting, when I get my life together;

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Bastille - Things We Lost in the Fire

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Probably the most famous kiss there is, the French kiss is an open-mouthed kiss where one person’s tongue touches the other person’s tongue. Also called a “tongue kiss,” the French kiss easy enough to execute, but it can take years to master.

2. Butterfly Kiss:

To give someone a butterfly kiss, get close to them so the tips of your eyelashes are touching theirs. Then blink very fast so your eyelashes flutter together like butterfly wings. It’s a fun, cute thing to do while you’re catching your breath from more traditional kisses. You can also give someone a solo butterfly kiss by fluttering your eyelids against their cheek.

3. Single-Lip Kiss:

To give someone a single-lip kiss, take one of their lips between yours and gently suck or tug on it. It’s an awfully romantic kiss, and if you do it right, you’ll send tingles up and down your sweetie’s spine.

4. Spiderman Kiss:

Based on the kiss in the 2002 movie Spider-Man, the Spiderman kiss involves kissing someone whose face is upside-down from yours, so your top lip kisses their bottom lip and vice versa.

5. Earlobe Kiss:

A great kiss to to perform while you’re taking a break from lip kisses, the earlobe kiss involves taking someone’s earlobe lightly between your lips and tugging gently downward. For a more intense earlobe kiss, add a little bit of tongue, or use a gentle sucking motion on their earlobe.

6. Lip Gloss Kiss:

This is a fun, flirty kiss for girlfriends to give their boyfriends. Put on a healthy amount of lip gloss or ChapStick, then rub your lips on your partners’ lips until theirs are coated, too. For extra fun, surprise your partner with a sweet, fruity lip gloss flavor.

7. Eskimo Kiss:

In an Eskimo kiss, two people rub their noses back and forth against each other. It’s based on real kisses that people in Eskimo cultures give their friends. Just like with lip kisses, Eskimo kisses are best executed with your eyes closed.

8. Cheek Kiss:

The cheek kiss is exactly what it sounds like - a closed-mouth kiss against someone’s cheek. Cheek kisses can be used as friendly greetings, flirty thank-you’s or cute, unexpected ways to say good-bye to your boyfriend or girlfriend.

9. Hickey:

A hickey technically isn’t a kiss; it’s a red mark (a bruise, really) left on the skin after someone sucks hard enough on it. Hickeys hurt a little to get, but some people think the sucking feels good, especially on the side of the neck. It can be embarrassing to walk around with a hickey, so before you start sucking, get permission first.

10. Secret Message Kiss:

In the middle of a French kiss, spell out a secret message with the tip of your tongue against their tongue. It might feel a little funny to the other person, but at least you’ll be getting your message across.

11. Vampire Kiss:

The vampire kiss is a deep kiss on someone’s neck that can involve sucking or light biting on the skin. Since some people find it painful rather than sexy, and since the sucking might leave a hickey, always ask permission before you give someone a vampire kiss.

12. Wet Kiss:

Wet kisses are any open-mouthed kisses, with or without tongue. A little bit of wetness during a kiss can be sexy, but try not to overdo it: too much saliva is sloppy. Alternate between wet kisses and closed-mouth kisses and single-lip kisses, and be sure to swallow occasionally so you don’t accidentally drool all over your partner.

13. Lizard Kiss:

The lizard kiss involves flicking your tongue in and out of your partner’s mouth in tight, quick strokes (picture the way a lizard moves its tongue). This is a silly kiss you can try just for fun, but it generally should be avoided because it feels kind of creepy to get.

14. Air Kiss:

The air kiss is a sophisticated gesture you can use as a greeting to your friends and relatives. To give one, rest your cheek against their cheek and make a kissing sound with your lips.

15. The Biting Kiss:

The biting kiss is a more aggressive form of the French kiss. Like the French kiss, it’s open-mouthed and incorporates tongue, but as you pull back, your teeth lightly grab onto your sweetie’s tongue for just a second. Try it once and see how your partner responds. Some people love it, but others think it’s painful or weird.

16. Angel Kiss:

To give someone an angel kiss, kiss them very gently on their eyelids or on the spot right next to their eye, using just your lips. It’s a very romantic way to wake someone up or say goodbye.

17. Neck Kiss:

After French kissing for a while, some people mix it up by trailing their mouth down and “Frenching” the other person’s neck. To execute a neck kiss perfectly, go light on the saliva, focus on the motion of your lips, never stay in once place for very long and never suck hard enough to leave a hickey.

18. Jawline Kiss:

To plant a jawline kiss on someone, give them a firm kiss on the bottom of their jaw, right where their face meets their neck. If they respond well to it, make a path of jawline kisses up to their ear and give them an earlobe kiss.

19. Breath Kiss:

The breath kiss is a fun, silly kiss that’s almost more of a game than a kiss. To do it, open your mouth, inhale deeply and lock lips with your sweetie (like you’re performing CPR). Slowly exhale into their mouth while they’re inhaling, “passing” the breath to them. Without moving, slowly inhale while your partner exhales. Keep passing the breath back and forth until one of you runs out of breath or you both erupt in giggles.

20. The Love Kiss:

The love kiss is any kiss that you give while thinking tender, loving thoughts about your partner. You might not realize it, but your kissing style can be influenced by whatever’s on your mind. Smooching with love on your mind will make your kisses extra soft and sweet. Whether it’s on your partner’s mouth, neck, ear or forehead, the love kiss is the most romantic kiss you can give.

21. The Dementor: