Marta Rereads LOTR: "Fog on the Barrow-downs"
I finally finished reading âFog on the Barrow-downsâ (Bk I Ch 8 of Lord of the Rings) this weekend. Buckle in, because itâs time for some hobbit ghost stories.
For those of you who âonlyâ know the movies, this is the last of the six chapters covering the hobbitsâ journey from Bag End to Bree that Jackson left out. Again, I can hardly blame him: itâs a very different kind of adventure story, and it doesnât really move the larger plot forward. Frodo & Co. finally left the Shire, got waylaid by a magical (or at least mystical; certainly malign, if youâll allow me my own bit of Bombadillish alliteration) ancient willow-tree, and spent a day and change in the house of Tom Bombadil learning some equally ancient prehistory (... ish âŚ) and building up their spiritual strength by being surrounded by good if silly songs.Â
Now theyâve got to continue on their way. But before they can get back on the road and eventually on to Bree, theyâve got to pass the barrow-downs. In the appendices we learn these are ancient graves, some of which built by the âforefathers of the Edainâ (the elf-friends among the Men of Edain; the Numenoreans are descended from one of their tribes). The cairn where the hobbits are held captive is said to house the âlast prince of Cardolan,â one of the kingdoms ruled by Argornâs ancestors. As Tom Bombadil told it (almost in passing), the human remains buried there were essentially reanimated by evil, incorporeal beings: âA shadow came out of dark places ar away, and the bones were stirred in the mounds.â Tolkien doesnât get more specific, at least not in Lord of the Rings; the Tolkien Gateway speculates those spirits are either âperverted Maiar (Ămaiar) or spirits of Orcs, Avari, or evil Men.â
What matters is theyâre almost indefinably evil, and treacherously old. Here, they sort of parallel the Old Man Willow, which Tom told them about in the last chapter: âIn [the Old Forest] there lived yet, aging no quicker than the hills, the fathers of the fathers of trees, remembering times when they were lords. The countless years had filled them with pride and rooted wisdom, and with malice. But none were more dangerous than the Great Willow: his heart was rotten, but his strength was green.â Technically heâs not an ent or huorn like we later meet in Fangorn, though consider the source. Tom Bombadil is nothing if not imprecise, and Iâm not a good enough Tolkien scholar to know how much heâd worked out what we read in the âOf Aule and Yavannaâ chapter of The Silmarillion.
But assuming we take this description somewhat literally, Old Man Willow is an ancienter-than-ancient literal tree thatâs been corrupted by time. Something odd seems to be going on in this corner of the world, whether itâs proximity to Bombadil himself or the effects of Angmar. Things persist longer than they should, they go sour, and they go vicious. Evil is afoot, and itâs not the more political evil of human machinations and power struggles. I donât want to imply too much of a one-for-one parallel (you know, allegory), but the closest description Iâve got is spiritual warfare.
And just after leaving (or being left by) Tom Bombadil and Goldberry, they get into another remarkably Old Man Willow-ish scrape. Theyâre making good progress (again: ish) across the open country between the Old Forest and the Road that will take them to Bree. Theyâre enjoying the sun. They have a big picnic lunch and decide to take a nap. They sleep too long, and are surrounded by a cold, dark fog when at last they try desperately to get past the barrows. Theyâve been warned to make it past the territory before dark. And â speaking here as someone who generally dislikes horror as a genre and doesnât read or watch most of it â we get some of the best written horror that I at least have ever read. This is a bit long, but you all deserve a good taste.
âCome on! Follow me!â [Frodo] called back over his shoulder, and he hurried forward. But his hope soon changed to bewilderment and alarm. The dark patches grew darker, but they shrank; and suddenly he saw, towering ominous before him and leaning slightly towards one another like the pillars of a headless door, two huge standing stones. He could not remember having seen any sign of these in the valley, when he looked out from the hill in the morning. He had passed between them almost before he was aware: and even as he did so darkness seemed to fall round him. His pony reared and snorted, and he fell off. When he looked back he found that he was alone: the others had not followed him.
âSam!â he called. âPippin! Merry! Come along! Why donât you keep up?â
There was no answer. Fear took him, and he ran back past the stones shouting wildly: âSam! Sam! Merry! Pippin!â The pony bolted into the mist and vanished. From some way off, or so it seemed, he thought he heard a cry: âHoy! Frodo! Hoy!â It was away eastward, on his left as he stood under the great stones, staring and straining into the gloom. He plunged off in the direction of the call, and found himself going steeply uphill.
As he struggled on he called again, and kept on calling more and more frantically; but he heard no answer for some time, and then it seemed faint and far ahead and high above him. âFrodo! Hoy!â came the thin voices out of the mist: and then a cry that sounded like help, help! often repeated, ending with a last help! that trailed off into a long wail suddenly cut short. He stumbled forward with all the speed he could towards the cries; but the light was now gone, and clinging night had closed about him, so that it was impossible to be sure of any direction. He seemed all the time to be climbing up and up.
Only the change in the level of the ground at his feet told him when he at last came to the top of a ridge or hill. He was weary, sweating and yet chilled. It was wholly dark.
âWhere are you?â he cried out miserably.
There was no reply. He stood listening. He was suddenly aware that it was getting very cold, and that up here a wind was beginning to blow, an icy wind. A change was coming in the weather. The mist was flowing past him now in shreds and tatters. His breath was smoking, and the darkness was less near and thick. He looked up and saw with surprise that faint stars were appearing overhead amid the strands of hurrying cloud and fog. The wind began to hiss over the grass.
He imagined suddenly that he caught a muffled cry, and he made towards it; and even as he went forward the mist was rolled up and thrust aside, and the starry sky was unveiled. A glance showed him that he was now facing southwards and was on a round hill-top, which he must have climbed from the north. Out of the east the biting wind was blowing. To his right there loomed against the westward stars a dark black shape. A great barrow stood there.
âWhere are you?â he cried again, both angry and afraid.
âHere!â said a voice, deep and cold, that seemed to come out of the ground. âI am waiting for you!â
âNo!â said Frodo; but he did not run away. His knees gave, and he fell on the ground. Nothing happened, and there was no sound. Trembling he looked up, in time to see a tall dark figure like a shadow against the stars. It leaned over him. He thought there were two eyes, very cold though lit with a pale light that seemed to come from some remote distance. Then a grip stronger and colder than iron seized him. The icy touch froze his bones, and he remembered no more.
âNothing happened, and there was no sound.â â This always struck me as absence as a positive thing. No-sound has existence. Darkness isnât just the absence of light or sight, itâs an oppressive being, and itâs powerful. This is why Iâm personally of the view that the zombifying spirits that took over those Dunedain corpses are powerful, probably minor former-Maiar that served Morgoth and then Sauron after him. Theyâre more built for immortality than Old Man Willow, maybe, but theyâre corrupted, and theyâve bound themselves into some very human bones for way too long. Thereâs a finitude about them, a physicality, and itâs gone sour af.
Frodo at least is better equipped to face them, though. Heâs spent the last two nights having what I can only describe as fortifying dreams, or perhaps visions. The chapter opens with him hearing âa song that seemed to come like a pale light behind a grey rain-curtain, and growing stronger to turn the veil all to glass and silver, until at last it was rolled back, and a far green country opened before him under a swift sunrise.â Iâve often heard this described as a vision of Valinor, which it might have been. I wonder if itâs more like an echo of the Great Song that started creation in the Silmarillion, the same song Legolas hears when he comes to Gondor that awakens his sea-longing. Whatever it is, itâs almost from outside time, again almost unaccountably ancient (or timeless) but without the corruption Old Man Willow and the Barrow-wights carry with them.
Heâs also been listening to singing quite a lot. It matters that Tom Bombadil is almost constantly slipping in and out of song. In Tolkien, song and dance is a kind of magic, certainly a kind of power and a spiritual power at that. Think of how the Old Forest got riled up when the hobbits started singing even before they met Tom Bombadil, or looking further back how Luthienâs songs broke Sauronâs enchantments when she rescued Beren from him, and lulled even Morgoth to sleep. Frodo seemed best able to follow Bombadilâs half-sung history, and he sometimes (not always, but sometimes) seemed to answer with a more singsong rhythm to his speech.Â
The hobbits are captured by the barrow-wights and held in the graves of that last prince of Cardolan, like I said. Merry, Pippin, and Sam are all asleep, or perhaps deathly unconscious, but Frodo wakes up halfway during the night. Again, this is long but is worth quoting a long piece of it. This is one of those chapters where you lose the flavor if you only look at snippets.
As [Frodo] lay there, thinking and getting a hold of himself, he noticed all at once that the darkness was slowly giving way: a pale greenish light was growing round him. It did not at first show him what kind of a place he was in, for the light seemed to be coming out of himself, and from the floor beside him, and had not yet reached the roof or wall. He turned, and there in the cold glow he saw lying beside him Sam, Pippin, and Merry. They were on their backs, and their faces looked deathly pale; and they were clad in white. About them lay many treasures, of gold maybe, though in that light they looked cold and unlovely. On their heads were circlets, gold chains were about their waists, and on their fingers were many rings. Swords lay by their sides, and shields were at their feet. But across their three necks lay one long naked sword.
Suddenly a song began: a cold murmur, rising and falling. The voice seemed far away and immeasurably dreary, sometimes high in the air and thin, sometimes like a low moan from the ground. Out of the formless stream of sad but horrible sounds, strings of words would now and again shape themselves: grim, hard, cold words, heartless and miserable. The night was railing against the morning of which it was bereaved, and the cold was cursing the warmth for which it hungered. Frodo was chilled to the marrow. After a while the song became clearer, and with dread in his heart he perceived that it had changed into an incantation:
Cold be hand and heart and bone, and cold be sleep under stone: never more to wake on stony bed, never, till the Sun fails and the Moon is dead. In the black wind the stars shall die, and still on gold here let them lie, till the dark lord lifts his hand over dead sea and withered land.
He heard behind his head a creaking and scraping sound. Raising himself on one arm he looked, and saw now in the pale light that they were in a kind of passage which behind them turned a corner. Round the corner a long arm was groping, walking on its fingers towards Sam, who was lying nearest, and towards the hilt of the sword that lay upon him.
At first Frodo felt as if he had indeed been turned into stone by the incantation. Then a wild thought of escape came to him. He wondered if he put on the Ring, whether the Barrow-wight would miss him, and he might find some way out. He thought of himself running free over the grass, grieving for Merry, and Sam, and Pippin, but free and alive himself. Gandalf would admit that there had been nothing else he could do.
But the courage that had been awakened in him was now too strong: he could not leave his friends so easily. He wavered, groping in his pocket, and then fought with himself again; and as he did so the arm crept nearer. Suddenly resolve hardened in him, and he seized a short sword that lay beside him, and kneeling he stooped low over the bodies of his companions. With what strength he had he hewed at the crawling arm near the wrist, and the hand broke off; but at the same moment the sword splintered up to the hilt. There was a shriek and the light vanished. In the dark there was a snarling noise.
Frodo fell forward over Merry, and Merryâs face felt cold. All at once back into his mind, from which it had disappeared with the first coming of the fog, came the memory of the house down under the Hill, and of Tom singing. He remembered the rhyme that Tom had taught them. In a small desperate voice he began: Ho! Tom Bombadil! and with that name his voice seemed to grow strong: it had a full and lively sound, and the dark chamber echoed as if to drum and trumpet.
Frodo sings a song of power Bombadil had taught him, and Bombadil comes back to save them. In a weird way it reminds me of Gandalf using the light to turn the trolls into stone back in The Hobbit, but both Tom B. and the barrow-wight and so much more ancient and other-worldly, the comparison just highlights what a different kind of story this is.Â
What most struck me is how Frodo is also something of a vessel for thoughts and impulses not his own. âA wild thought of escape came to him.â âThe courage that had been wakened in him.â For all that, though, heâs much more intentional than he was when the other hobbits were first seized by Old Man Willow. Then he just ran down the path and cried out wildly for help because he couldnât find anything else to do; now, he knows the right songs to sing, and he summons Bombadil. He invokes him, almost in a religious sense. For all that heâs enabled by almost external thoughts and virtues coming upon and into him, heâs the one manning the wheel. To a point; but as much as anyone could expect any mere mortal to manage against a corrupted, arguably timeless spirit.
And itâs about damned time, and a good warm-up for what Frodo more than any of them will be up against. to quote another story entirely:
.... You're in one.
As a P.S., Iâve written no less than three fanfics (two stories and one poem) about the barrow-downs. The first two were some of my earliest fanfic and really need to be rewritten, but the third is still a good read if I say so myself. Do check out âHeed No Nightly Noises,â about the nightmares I imagine Pippin might have been put through during that dark night.
Also- Poking around on YouTube, I found the great Christopher Lee doing a suitably spooky version of the Barrow-wight's curse. He does have a knack for the spooky.

















