lonely hearts club

it feels like it was written with chat gpt and it came from a fresh account with no posts ir bookmarks..

for context this is my fic summary:

“Ever since the dawn of quirks, Yokohama has sealed itself away from the rest of Japan. No one could legally get in or out of the city without a special kind of pass. When a pro hero somehow sneaks into the city while following a villain, they’re found dead outside of the border with a warning from the Port Mafia, the heroes must find the culprits and bring them to justice. Upon entering the city, however, the Pros can’t ignore the two injured children begging for an escape.

OR!

Due to the increase of outsiders, Mori assigns the infamous Double Black to investigate the outside as hero students.”

and this is the line in my fic that made me question the comment:

“The quirkless city of Yokohama, despite the rumors of being unruly and overrun by villains and a corrupt government, was silent and beautiful.”

OKAY

I HAVE SOME THOUGHTS!!!!!!

so i listened to tpf s3 ep17 twice (2) so i could gather my thoughts

first of all, veda being dramatic when telling charles he has an ability made me giggle a bit (like yes veda we had this conversation already lmao)

i still don't really trust dr. veda all that much to be honest. i don't think theyre completely on charles and the gangs side, but i think their goals might align FOR NOW. i think veda has their own plans and is in their own league.

second, i almost feel like graves knew that was charles and not one of their guys, but if thats the case then why would he leave charles alone with eli? is he still on their side but acting like he's on the clear minds side, or did he genuinely not know? idk just the way he was interacting with charles was sus

okay now...

HOLY SHIT OLEN????

bro his ability is so fucking cool wtf

first you cant die, which like of fucking course cus why would you

but his ABILITY??? it fits him so well wtf he's so fucking sick! THAT WHOLE TIME MY JAW WAS LITERALLY ON THE FLOOR CUS WHAT

and finally... eli.

sighhhhhhh

i understand where eli is coming from. he's the pacifist and im guessing he's never seen his father like that before? hes someone who is so against killing and seeing the man who he thought was so kind, so murderous(??? i dont think thats the word im looking for) was probably shocking. so many things has happened

and im not saying that charles and the gang are the good guys. it's a bit more nuanced than that and not at all black and white. but clear minds as also killed. theyre literally a big evil corporation and probably killed much more than the gang has. but i dont think eli has really witnessed that yet right? he's only heard about the bad not seen the bad?

and then him making the cannon and setting it off at the end there. i'm so nervous for the next episode !!!!

but man i feel for eli... poor kid :( he's witnessed so much and hasn't really had the chance to be a normal teenager and experience normal teenager things :((( i wanna give him a big hug :((((

i was right about travis betraying them even tho he was either playing them from the start or brainwashed

I WAS RIGHT ABOUT SOMETHING BIG HAPPENING

I WAS RIGHT ABOUT DR VEDA DOING SOMETHING TO H GREY

dude as soon as i heard graves voice i fucking cried i won’t lie

i’m so sad he’s brainwashed i hope they can undo it 😭😭

so a few things

the amnesia plot is growing on me. there are very few amnesia plots i like, and the one with h grey is so well written

i feel like dr. veda implanted something in h grey. they had him for like a month or longer right? yeah, they got h grey out, but doesn't veda have a way to track their "projects" so to speak? i feel like h grey being held captive by veda was too quickly blown over by them... idk i just feel like something big is going to happen

also charles ability fits him soooo well like omg. i feel like its a bit more than just erasing the paranormal tho. he's way too good with numbers, he can make maps just from description and visualizing.

that being said, i have complicated feelings about charles using his ability on lucian. on the one hand, lucian kinda deserved it. on another hand, idkkk i just feel like thats going to blow up in his face at some point?? but i am glad he's finally accepting that he has an ability and standing up for himself

random side note, i hope they go back to the city at some point soon. i know they will eventually, and it might not even be this season, but i'm interested in if anything will change when they go back to the city. because doesn't the rule of the city changes whenever someone who is aware goes into it??

i hope h grey gets his memory back soon 😭😭

it’s just a quick sketch but i’m proud of it

it’s charles!!

spoilers for the end of tpf s2

wHAT

what the fuck do you mean graves is gone??

he was literally one of my favorite characters

got me crying at work bro 😭😭

talbot, haley, and travis: what’s the worse that can happen?