Bonjour mon ami! Just wondering how close your Nile screenplay will be to the Shaeffer/Green versions.
Bonjour/Bonsoir! As my amateur screenplay currently stands, Iâm about to get into Simon Doyleâs first interview alongside Bessner and Louise Bourget. In terms of comparing it to Shafferâs and Greenâs script, Iâd say Iâve leaned more into the novel for more specific portions and sequences than either of their scripts. However, I did borrow a bit of Greenâs condensing Simon, Jackie and Linnet meeting at the bar, a couple of lines that stuck out to me, the Euphemia/Mrs Allerton stand in being a painter, and the general concept of having the majority of the suspects being part of an expedition because theyâre friends of Linnet. As for anything borrowed from Shaffer, it would be Bowers and Salome having a motive.
However, the real point of adaptational liberty that I am trying to figure out is what to do if I still want to keep Bouc as I have him so far with Rosalie and try to manufacture an arc for him as opposed to Poirot (since he already had his in Orient Express)
Rewrite his scenes to fit the original Tim Allerton back, rewrite Poirotâs introduction in Egypt and make Cornelia Robson the central character who has to go through an arc.
Iâm leaning towards the latter because think of it. Nileâs main two themes are love, greed and bit of classism. Cornelia Robson is the perfect fit. She is stuck with her snobbish classist cousin, she buys into the glamour and not so genuine kindness of Linnet Doyle, she is finding love with Bessner, she has very cordial and polite interactions with Poirot (Papa Poirot moments, mon ami, the more the better!) and by the end she decides to take a stand and make an independent decision to go with Bessner to start anew and be completely disillusioned with her cousinâs beliefs and Linnet being this idol to her.
The fact that in the almost 90 years that this book has existed, that no adaptation has taken of making Cornelia a more prominent character and the heart of the story and a contrast to someone like Jackie is crazy!
I merged Bessner and Ferguson into Dr. Carl Bessner, the Anglo-German who became a marxist during his studies in the late 1920âs.
I made Colonel Johnny Race into Colonel Youseff Race and am currently trying to involve the shipâs crew in the story more often since Nile doesnât really have a real prominent Egyptian character. You know, in the story set in Egypt.
Also a couple of things Iâm keeping under wraps for the moment. And once Iâm done with this Nile script, Iâll do MotOE just to have Bouc have an arc in that alongside Poirot.