HypnoPum

They bit their lip, looking eager, wanting you. “The deeper you fall into my power. Into my control. Into trance. And I want you falling deeper, toy. I want you blank, and mindless for me. It makes you easier to program. Easier to break, and shape, and control.”

Their words were rolling over your mind, smothering your thoughts like a blanket. All that was left was your submission, your obedience. Your arousal. It felt so good, to be blank, and mindless, and obedient for them. They laughed at you, still holding your gaze.

“You look so pathetic like this, toy. You’re drooling. You’re barely able to keep your eyes open. The only thing that’s holding you to conscious awareness is me. I’m the thread, that you’re dangling from. But you’re going to drop deeper, toy. You’re going to plummet.”

Their hand was pulling away from your chin. “And when you do, you’ll be completely open to my words. To my power. Ready? Go.” Their hand slipped away, and your chin dropped, your head followed, and your mind sank with both, into nothingness.

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They held their other hand up before your eyes, drawing attention to their long, sharpened nails. “You’re going to feel these on your body, toy. Buy you’re also going to feel them…” They pressed one nail against your forehead. “Right on your mind.”

They laughed at your gasp of pain. “I’m going to rend your brain, as I rend your skin. And you’re going to love it, aren’t you, prey? My trapped little piece of meat.” Their laughter continued, becoming manic. You felt so small. So trapped. So helpless.

You loved it. They took one nail, and dragged it against your bare chest. You felt it catching in your mind, dragging in time with the nail on your chest. The physical pain made you moan, and the sensation in your brain was… Delectable. The nail moved through your grey matter.

And where it went, a gap was left. Severing thoughts. Destroying willpower. Tearing your mind apart. They added a second finger. You could feel your mind being torn into pieces, as the pain increased. And then they used all five. Each nail leaving its own track in your brain.

You went limp, your mind giving out under the sensations. It felt so good. So nice to be so helpless before them. They were laughing, cruelly, joyously. “That’s it, toy. Give in. Let me tear you to pieces.” They leant down, and began to bite, hard.

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“The way your gaze becomes glued to me.” They moved their head back and forth, and your eyes tracked them, eagerly drinking in the sight of their gorgeous face. “The slight, pleading look on your face. What are you wishing for?” You didn’t know. There was a want inside you.

“Commands? Control? Just… Me?” All of those things. Their voice felt so good, replacing your thoughts. “Because you have me, toy. I’m right here. Before you, putting you in your place. Putting you where you belong, on your knees, as my plaything.”

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Inspired by @hypnanosis, on twitter and bluesky!

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Your partner had just brought you back up, to gloat. But this wasn’t over. Your partner liked to use their words. You were a much more kinaesthetic hypnotist than they were. And whilst their words were… Enchanting. You could feel yourself now, struggling to stay up as they spoke.

All you had to do was take their words away. And you had a trigger that did just that. “Mute!” You said, using all your energy to press a finger to your lips. Your partner went silent, looking at you, impressed. You met their gaze for a moment, then tried to laugh.

Only, your lips wouldn’t part to make noise. A few more moments passed, and then they laughed, triumphantly. “Oh, you should see the look on your face!” They said. “You look so confused! Memory’s such a funny thing. Didn’t you remember me inverting that trigger?”

You… You didn’t. You didn’t remember. But you knew that you couldn’t speak. That one spark of defiance had been turned against you so beautifully. They leant forwards, leaning over you, and smirked. “That was a nice try, toy. I didn’t know you had any resistance left. Drop.”

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Inspired by @hypnanosis, on twitter and bluesky!

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Your hypnotist’s command rippled through you. Your body obeyed, tilting forwards, eagerly. They laughed. You wanted to be servicing them, pleasuring them. Their sex was so close to your mouth. The eager, desperate thoughts spiralled through your mind.

They laughed at you. “Oh, toy. You look so fucking desperate. So fucking needy. You want it, don’t you? You need it?” They laughed again.  “Well, too bad. You’re not allowed to touch it yet. Not allowed to suck, or lick. You just get to watch, my good, obedient pet.”

Their hand slipped between their legs, and as they began to moan, you felt… So many feelings. Blissful obedience. Jealousy. Need. Desire. Want. Lust. Arousal. Your breathing had sped up. “Oh, that’s it toy. Feel it consuming you. Feel how much you want me.”

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“And it feels so good. So good to let your brain slip away.” It did feel good. So good. You needed more of this. You had to give your mind to them. “Why wouldn’t it? Why would you want to think for yourself?” You didn’t. That sounded like too much work.

“Why wouldn’t you let me take over that mind of yours?” It was so much easier to listen to their words. To let their voice wind around your mind, and drag you deeper. “Why wouldn’t you let me pull you deeper into mindlessness?”

You were staring blankly at them, and they laughed. “Awh, can’t you think of a reason?” They leant forwards, looking deep into your eyes. “Can you even remember the question?” You couldn’t. They giggled. “Ehehe, adorable. You’re already so far gone!”

It felt so good to not be thinking. “Already so very deep. And sinking deeper all the time!” Your brain felt like a lead weight, sinking faster and faster. “That’s okay. It’s where you’re meant to be. You’re meant to be blank, and empty. Controlled, and docile, all for me.

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And now you were trying to resist their control? That didn’t make sense. “No… You gave up your ability to think when you dropped for me.” Your mind was emptying as they spoke. “You gave up your self-control when you admitted that you were mine.”

You remembered those words passing your lips, ten minutes ago. “And you are mine, toy. All mine. To tease, to toy with. Freeze.” Their fingers snapped. You felt your muscles lock in place. They laughed at you, their hands tracing over your body, hungrily.

Their nails were leaving scratches wherever they went, and it felt incredible. To be this helpless, this defenceless before them. “There we go. A toy, a puppet, and I hold the strings. I can bend you, and break you, however I want to. And you want me to, don’t you?”

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Their words, their attention felt like a soothing balm. “You need me, don’t you?” You nodded, and they grinned. “You need my words. You need my control. You need to feel the blissful feelings washing over you, again, and again, and again, don’t you?”

You nodded again, eagerly. Just being in their presence made you feel good. They laughed. “Gods, toy. Remember when we started this? You said you weren’t gonna get addicted.” You… Did you remember saying that? You that felt like a different century.

“You said you were made of stronger stuff. But now look at you, hanging on my every word.” They were right. You couldn’t fight against their voice, flowing into your brain. You didn’t want to. “Letting me change you, shape you, mould you.” You wanted more.

“And you just can’t get enough, can you?” They shook your head for you, still smirking down at you. “No. You’re spiralling deeper into this addiction. Deeper into my power.” You let out a whine. “Shh, I know, I know, it feels so good. Just keep sinking, dummy. You’re all mine.”

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They laughed. “Good! I like an eager plaything. Now…” They tapped you on the forehead. “Drop for me, toy.” Your eyes rolled up, and then closed, your body relaxed into the kneeling position. “That’s it. You’re already mine. I don’t actually need to do anything.”

They were walking around you as they talked, you could hear the click of their shoes on the floor. “But where would be the fun in that? I love seeing you mindless, so that’s what I’m going to do to you. Break your brain, piece by piece.” They laughed.

You felt their hands on your head. They were stood behind you by now, and their fingers began to tap, gently on your skull. “Feel the vibrations, with each tap, toy. Feel them rippling through your brain. And each tap destabilises your thoughts more, and more.”

The rumbling rhythm on your skull was sending your mind into blankness. “Feel it chipping away at your brain. Breaking you, just like I said. Piece by piece.” They laughed, continuing to tap, tap, tap away at your mind. Your brain was coming apart, and it felt incredible.

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The visor flickered to life, the colours, the shapes, swirling, dragging your attention to and fro. Your eyes danced back and forth, and they continued speaking. “You just get to sit, and listen to my voice for a while. We both know how much you enjoy that, right toy?”

You really did. The flourishing pleasure their voice evoked made your thoughts turn to dust. “That’s it. My good, obedient plaything. So eager to submit, so ready to be broken, and brainwashed, and made mindless. And then I get to reshape you.”

The colours began to swirl together, pulling your thoughts out of your head in an endless spiral of bliss. You lost track of their words, as your mind melted into a blank, open canvas for them to mould. And before you knew it, the headphones were being pulled off.

As the visor was lifted away, your eyes snapped to your hypnotist. They giggled. “Oh, look at you, already so attentive. Now, let’s test how well you obey me, huh?” They said, as they undid the restraints. “Kneel.” They pointed down, and you knelt, immediately, obediently.

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“You knew I was coming over, and you managed to get yourself stuck...” You could hear the grin on their face, even when you couldn’t see it. “Stuck, and mindless, and oh, so helpless…” They slipped around in front of you, looking you in the eye.

Their presence before you finally broke the hold the spiral on the screen had over you “Defenceless to my words.” But now that you weren’t looking at the spiral, you had something else to look at. “Ready to be reprogrammed!” Their gleeful eyes were all you could see.

“Now… What to do to you?” Their fingers traced down your chest as they stared down at you. Your mind was spiralling deeper into mindlessness. “What to make you into? A toy? To be played with? A pet? To be oh so good for me? Ooh, how about a drone? To simply obey?”

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One finger on their free hand brushed down your cheek. “There’s something in this moment, plaything. Where I have you, held.” Their hand moved down your bare chest. “Trapped.” Their fingernails left little pinpricks of pain in their wake. “At my mercy.”

You couldn’t look away from their eyes, even as their grin widened. “A small part of your brain, saying: ‘This is wrong, I should try to get away…’” They laughed. “But you don’t want to get away, do you?” You didn’t. You were right where you wanted to be.

“No, you want to stay here, helplessly mine. And awh, every time your brain tries to think, all I need to do is…” They squeezed, slightly, applying a little pressure to the sides of your neck. It made your slowly gathering thoughts fizzle away, quickly. “Helpless prey.”

They had stepped closer. They were so beautiful. They examined you, looking at you like you were a tasty meal for them, before finally, pulling you forward by your neck. “Drop, toy.” They said, and the motion, and the sensations, and the feelings fell away, as you sank into trance.

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“I have been keeping track of every bit of sass you gave me.” Oh. “Every bratty moment, for the last two weeks.” Oh no. You hadn’t been good at holding your tongue recently. You had been needy! It wasn’t your fault. They looked down at you, malicious intent on their face.

“You’ve been writing a cheque, sweetie. And now, I’m going to cash it in.” You’ve been demonstrating so much self-control, toy.” You hoped it wouldn’t be too high. How bad could it be? “Wilful disobedience.” Maybe, what, twenty, thirty times? “Ninety-eight times.”

Fuck. That was more than you had expected. What were they going to do to you? “So how about being fractionated ninety-eight times?” Oh. That sounds good. “That won’t be too bad, will it? Or maybe you’ll be reduced to a drooling mess by the end of it?”

They gave you an alluring look. You couldn’t wait to find out. “And then…” They reached over to the side table and picked up your favourite paddle. “Ninety-eight hits. To make sure the message sinks in.” You felt anticipatory arousal flooding you. This was going to be fun.

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“Oh, I know, it feels so good, doesn’t it, toy?” Your hypnotist said, looking down at you, writhing on the bed, your hand between your legs. “All that arousal, taking over. Your brain’s so fucked right now. There’s no space for anything but the pleasure!”

You couldn’t pull your hand away. You just needed more. “It’s so hard to think… And I know, I know, I said I wasn’t going to let you cum tonight. But I have a deal for you.” They leant down, studying your face, smiling a malevolent smile that made you feel so small.

“I could let you cum tonight, but you need to promise not to cum for the next week afterwards. That sounds fair, doesn’t it?” Did it? You weren’t sure. You were struggling to get any thoughts together. “Oh, silly me, you don’t have a brain to think about it.” Your thoughts ceased.

They ran hand down your cheek. “It is fair, toy. It’s totally fair. You should take the deal.” That made sense. You’d take the deal. “And hey, once you’ve promised it, you won’t break your promise, will you? No. You’re a good toy. A good plaything. You’ll honour your promise.”

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“Where you don’t need to think. You don’t need to do anything but sink, and drift, and drop for me.” Every word they said pulled you deeper. “Because it feels so very good. So very wonderful.” Your eyes had closed, your body was relaxed, and your mind was filled with pleasure.

“My sweet, obedient puppet. Isn’t this easier, than thinking for yourself?” Their hand took you by the chin, and nodded, up and down, agreeing with them. “Yes… You let me fill your head with thoughts that I want you to think. I get to make changes. Alter you.”

You wanted them to alter you. Reshape you. “And it’s all for the better, because I’m doing it. Because I’m in control. And it feels so very good. So, keep on sinking, toy. Keep on dropping, and drifting. I’m going to remake you, into the perfect little toy for me.”

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Your eyes opened – what – what was happening? You felt lust, clawing at your body like an animal. Your hypnotist laughed. “Oh, toy, I love how malleable your memory is.” They said, peering down at you on the bed. “How easily I can bend, and break it.”

What had you been doing? The arousal in your head was making it so hard to think. “Awh, what’s wrong toy?” They asked, at the confusion crossing your face. “Don’t you remember? What we were doing? Ask yourself, why do you feel so horny?” You tried to piece it together.

Something fell into place. Them riding you, fucking you. Skin on skin, the heat of your bodies, your moans of pleasure filling the room. “Why do you remember us fucking?” It was so clear, you had been fucking, just a few moments ago. Your hands traced down your body.

And found fabric. “But… But… Your clothes are on.” They said, in mock distress. Your mind was spinning. “Oh, that doesn’t make sense! Are you confused? A bit hazy, and foggy on the details?” You nodded. They pressed a finger to your lips. “Shh, it’s okay, I can help. Just drop.”

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You looked at the spiral, and instantly, you couldn’t look away. “You’re just watching TV with a friend… Some really interesting TV. You should keep watching. Stare at the screen, silly. Is it working?” It was. You felt yourself relaxing, unable to resist the urge.

“Stare, and feel your brain slowing down. Becoming more agreeable. There you go. Doesn’t that feel better?” You nodded your head slightly, and you heard them laugh triumphantly. “Just giving in, rather than being confused, asking all those silly questions.”

Any questions you were going to ask had faded from your mind by now. “Just stare. Just sink. I saw your search history the other day.” Your brain didn’t question that. “I knew I could take advantage of it. You know what the spiral is doing to your brain.”

You were helpless to resist. The spiral was sucking your thoughts away. “I can see the effect my words are having. I’ve known you’ve had a crush on me for a while.” That was true. “Today, I’m going to help you realise all the things that crush will make you do for me.”

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