HypnoPum

“I love how quickly you’ve fallen, babe.” Your partner said, laughing. “You had me right where you wanted me. You were in charge. And then… You gave me an inch, so I took it. I began to slip my words inside your mind.”

They were right. You had had them in the palm of your hand, lost in your eyes, eager to sink deeper, and you had taken a moment to gloat. They had exploited that moment. This was the joys of you both being switches. Your partner had gained momentum.

And now you were lost in their voice. Letting it swirl around your rapidly emptying mind as you stared, blankly into their eyes. “And now look at you, you can’t begin to think of being in charge, can you?” They reached out cupping your chin in one hand.

They shook your head back and forth. “No… No you don’t want to be in charge, you want to be blank, and empty, and obedient. It feels so good to give in. To submit. So why not keep going. Keep sinking.” They paused, thinking. “Or… Come up, up, up!”

Your mind began to reassert itself, slowly. You let out a whine. You didn’t want to be up. You didn’t want to think. They laughed at you, again. “Oh, I know, I know, that’s mean of me. But I wanted to give you a chance to get your thoughts together. To try and regain control.”

You met their gaze, and tried to think a dominant thought. Tried to begin to picture the words to say, the actions to do, to topple them. And… Nothing came to mind. “Oh, toy, you look adorable like this. Such a subby mess for me. It’s okay, don’t worry. Just… Drop.”

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You had given in so quickly. “It’s cute, really. You’ve put all the effort in, all that work. You claim you want to be free, you claim that you don’t want to be my brainwashed thrall…” They paused, their voice becoming a soft purr in your ears, as they walked towards you.

They walked behind you, and then draped their arms around your neck, leaning on you, whispering in your ear. You felt their tail, idly wrap around your leg. The hardness of one of their horns, resting on your head. “But then, you’d be without me.” The idea made you feel… Lost.

“Without the warmth of my control, guiding you. Leading you.” You didn’t want to lose them. You had been stupid to resist. “Maybe it’s time I picked it up a bit. Maybe it’s time that I installed something more… Permanent in your brain?” Their tail unwound from your leg.

“Yeah!” They said, eagerly. I’m going to give you a gift, toy. And you’re going to love it. It might be scary, at first. Their tail pressed against your other ear, pushing something into your mind. “But give it time, and you’ll love what having me inside you will do to you.”

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You were marvelling at their control. That wasn’t a trigger. That was just their power over you. They had decided that you couldn’t speak, and you couldn’t. After a minute or so, your hypnotist turned back to you, smirking. “Like that, plaything?” They asked.

Nodding eagerly, you sat up, trying to present yourself to them. They chuckled, looking around the room, at the rest of the party, before leaning down to your ear. “If I could put you on display as a show of pure, blissful obedience, I would, toy. You’re so good for me.”

Their hands pulled you close, as a hungry, lustful look crossed their face. “I treasure your submission, toy. The way that your body reacts before your mind catches up. It’s a fun treat, that I like to savour. But…” they sighed, “I suppose it’s time to let you speak again.”

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You would be happy to let this warm, blissful comfort steal over you eternally. “Letting my words slip so softly, and sweetly into that submissive mind, like a blanket, covering your thoughts, putting them to sleep. Letting them rest.” Your eyelids were fluttering.

For a moment, you dangled, hanging between awareness, and sweet, blissful surrender, until a gentle finger prodded your forehead backwards, and you slumped, limp, and mindless, into the soft cushions behind you. “There we go toy. Soft mind, weak body. Ready for me.”

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You couldn’t tear your eyes away from them. You were awestruck. Looking at them , drinking in the sight of them eagerly, hungrily. You couldn’t pull away from them. “Good to know that this look does this to you, toy. Leave you open to my words.” Their hand moved before your eyes.

As their fingers began to dance, your mind was reeling, rolling, spiralling down into nothingness. “I love leaving you speechless. Because when you’re speechless, you’re usually thoughtless, and when you’re thoughtless…” They grinned at you. They looked so beautiful.

“I can slip my own thoughts straight into that mind of yours. And you welcome them. You want them. You need my words, inside that head, don’t you?” Their hand moved up and down before your eyes, and your head followed the motion. “Good. Good toy. So obedient for me.”

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They bit their lip, looking eager, wanting you. “The deeper you fall into my power. Into my control. Into trance. And I want you falling deeper, toy. I want you blank, and mindless for me. It makes you easier to program. Easier to break, and shape, and control.”

Their words were rolling over your mind, smothering your thoughts like a blanket. All that was left was your submission, your obedience. Your arousal. It felt so good, to be blank, and mindless, and obedient for them. They laughed at you, still holding your gaze.

“You look so pathetic like this, toy. You’re drooling. You’re barely able to keep your eyes open. The only thing that’s holding you to conscious awareness is me. I’m the thread, that you’re dangling from. But you’re going to drop deeper, toy. You’re going to plummet.”

Their hand was pulling away from your chin. “And when you do, you’ll be completely open to my words. To my power. Ready? Go.” Their hand slipped away, and your chin dropped, your head followed, and your mind sank with both, into nothingness.

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They held their other hand up before your eyes, drawing attention to their long, sharpened nails. “You’re going to feel these on your body, toy. Buy you’re also going to feel them…” They pressed one nail against your forehead. “Right on your mind.”

They laughed at your gasp of pain. “I’m going to rend your brain, as I rend your skin. And you’re going to love it, aren’t you, prey? My trapped little piece of meat.” Their laughter continued, becoming manic. You felt so small. So trapped. So helpless.

You loved it. They took one nail, and dragged it against your bare chest. You felt it catching in your mind, dragging in time with the nail on your chest. The physical pain made you moan, and the sensation in your brain was… Delectable. The nail moved through your grey matter.

And where it went, a gap was left. Severing thoughts. Destroying willpower. Tearing your mind apart. They added a second finger. You could feel your mind being torn into pieces, as the pain increased. And then they used all five. Each nail leaving its own track in your brain.

You went limp, your mind giving out under the sensations. It felt so good. So nice to be so helpless before them. They were laughing, cruelly, joyously. “That’s it, toy. Give in. Let me tear you to pieces.” They leant down, and began to bite, hard.

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“The way your gaze becomes glued to me.” They moved their head back and forth, and your eyes tracked them, eagerly drinking in the sight of their gorgeous face. “The slight, pleading look on your face. What are you wishing for?” You didn’t know. There was a want inside you.

“Commands? Control? Just… Me?” All of those things. Their voice felt so good, replacing your thoughts. “Because you have me, toy. I’m right here. Before you, putting you in your place. Putting you where you belong, on your knees, as my plaything.”

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Inspired by @hypnanosis, on twitter and bluesky!

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Your partner had just brought you back up, to gloat. But this wasn’t over. Your partner liked to use their words. You were a much more kinaesthetic hypnotist than they were. And whilst their words were… Enchanting. You could feel yourself now, struggling to stay up as they spoke.

All you had to do was take their words away. And you had a trigger that did just that. “Mute!” You said, using all your energy to press a finger to your lips. Your partner went silent, looking at you, impressed. You met their gaze for a moment, then tried to laugh.

Only, your lips wouldn’t part to make noise. A few more moments passed, and then they laughed, triumphantly. “Oh, you should see the look on your face!” They said. “You look so confused! Memory’s such a funny thing. Didn’t you remember me inverting that trigger?”

You… You didn’t. You didn’t remember. But you knew that you couldn’t speak. That one spark of defiance had been turned against you so beautifully. They leant forwards, leaning over you, and smirked. “That was a nice try, toy. I didn’t know you had any resistance left. Drop.”

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Inspired by @hypnanosis, on twitter and bluesky!

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Your hypnotist’s command rippled through you. Your body obeyed, tilting forwards, eagerly. They laughed. You wanted to be servicing them, pleasuring them. Their sex was so close to your mouth. The eager, desperate thoughts spiralled through your mind.

They laughed at you. “Oh, toy. You look so fucking desperate. So fucking needy. You want it, don’t you? You need it?” They laughed again.  “Well, too bad. You’re not allowed to touch it yet. Not allowed to suck, or lick. You just get to watch, my good, obedient pet.”

Their hand slipped between their legs, and as they began to moan, you felt… So many feelings. Blissful obedience. Jealousy. Need. Desire. Want. Lust. Arousal. Your breathing had sped up. “Oh, that’s it toy. Feel it consuming you. Feel how much you want me.”

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“And it feels so good. So good to let your brain slip away.” It did feel good. So good. You needed more of this. You had to give your mind to them. “Why wouldn’t it? Why would you want to think for yourself?” You didn’t. That sounded like too much work.

“Why wouldn’t you let me take over that mind of yours?” It was so much easier to listen to their words. To let their voice wind around your mind, and drag you deeper. “Why wouldn’t you let me pull you deeper into mindlessness?”

You were staring blankly at them, and they laughed. “Awh, can’t you think of a reason?” They leant forwards, looking deep into your eyes. “Can you even remember the question?” You couldn’t. They giggled. “Ehehe, adorable. You’re already so far gone!”

It felt so good to not be thinking. “Already so very deep. And sinking deeper all the time!” Your brain felt like a lead weight, sinking faster and faster. “That’s okay. It’s where you’re meant to be. You’re meant to be blank, and empty. Controlled, and docile, all for me.

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And now you were trying to resist their control? That didn’t make sense. “No… You gave up your ability to think when you dropped for me.” Your mind was emptying as they spoke. “You gave up your self-control when you admitted that you were mine.”

You remembered those words passing your lips, ten minutes ago. “And you are mine, toy. All mine. To tease, to toy with. Freeze.” Their fingers snapped. You felt your muscles lock in place. They laughed at you, their hands tracing over your body, hungrily.

Their nails were leaving scratches wherever they went, and it felt incredible. To be this helpless, this defenceless before them. “There we go. A toy, a puppet, and I hold the strings. I can bend you, and break you, however I want to. And you want me to, don’t you?”

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Their words, their attention felt like a soothing balm. “You need me, don’t you?” You nodded, and they grinned. “You need my words. You need my control. You need to feel the blissful feelings washing over you, again, and again, and again, don’t you?”

You nodded again, eagerly. Just being in their presence made you feel good. They laughed. “Gods, toy. Remember when we started this? You said you weren’t gonna get addicted.” You… Did you remember saying that? You that felt like a different century.

“You said you were made of stronger stuff. But now look at you, hanging on my every word.” They were right. You couldn’t fight against their voice, flowing into your brain. You didn’t want to. “Letting me change you, shape you, mould you.” You wanted more.

“And you just can’t get enough, can you?” They shook your head for you, still smirking down at you. “No. You’re spiralling deeper into this addiction. Deeper into my power.” You let out a whine. “Shh, I know, I know, it feels so good. Just keep sinking, dummy. You’re all mine.”

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They laughed. “Good! I like an eager plaything. Now…” They tapped you on the forehead. “Drop for me, toy.” Your eyes rolled up, and then closed, your body relaxed into the kneeling position. “That’s it. You’re already mine. I don’t actually need to do anything.”

They were walking around you as they talked, you could hear the click of their shoes on the floor. “But where would be the fun in that? I love seeing you mindless, so that’s what I’m going to do to you. Break your brain, piece by piece.” They laughed.

You felt their hands on your head. They were stood behind you by now, and their fingers began to tap, gently on your skull. “Feel the vibrations, with each tap, toy. Feel them rippling through your brain. And each tap destabilises your thoughts more, and more.”

The rumbling rhythm on your skull was sending your mind into blankness. “Feel it chipping away at your brain. Breaking you, just like I said. Piece by piece.” They laughed, continuing to tap, tap, tap away at your mind. Your brain was coming apart, and it felt incredible.

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The visor flickered to life, the colours, the shapes, swirling, dragging your attention to and fro. Your eyes danced back and forth, and they continued speaking. “You just get to sit, and listen to my voice for a while. We both know how much you enjoy that, right toy?”

You really did. The flourishing pleasure their voice evoked made your thoughts turn to dust. “That’s it. My good, obedient plaything. So eager to submit, so ready to be broken, and brainwashed, and made mindless. And then I get to reshape you.”

The colours began to swirl together, pulling your thoughts out of your head in an endless spiral of bliss. You lost track of their words, as your mind melted into a blank, open canvas for them to mould. And before you knew it, the headphones were being pulled off.

As the visor was lifted away, your eyes snapped to your hypnotist. They giggled. “Oh, look at you, already so attentive. Now, let’s test how well you obey me, huh?” They said, as they undid the restraints. “Kneel.” They pointed down, and you knelt, immediately, obediently.

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“You knew I was coming over, and you managed to get yourself stuck...” You could hear the grin on their face, even when you couldn’t see it. “Stuck, and mindless, and oh, so helpless…” They slipped around in front of you, looking you in the eye.

Their presence before you finally broke the hold the spiral on the screen had over you “Defenceless to my words.” But now that you weren’t looking at the spiral, you had something else to look at. “Ready to be reprogrammed!” Their gleeful eyes were all you could see.

“Now… What to do to you?” Their fingers traced down your chest as they stared down at you. Your mind was spiralling deeper into mindlessness. “What to make you into? A toy? To be played with? A pet? To be oh so good for me? Ooh, how about a drone? To simply obey?”

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One finger on their free hand brushed down your cheek. “There’s something in this moment, plaything. Where I have you, held.” Their hand moved down your bare chest. “Trapped.” Their fingernails left little pinpricks of pain in their wake. “At my mercy.”

You couldn’t look away from their eyes, even as their grin widened. “A small part of your brain, saying: ‘This is wrong, I should try to get away…’” They laughed. “But you don’t want to get away, do you?” You didn’t. You were right where you wanted to be.

“No, you want to stay here, helplessly mine. And awh, every time your brain tries to think, all I need to do is…” They squeezed, slightly, applying a little pressure to the sides of your neck. It made your slowly gathering thoughts fizzle away, quickly. “Helpless prey.”

They had stepped closer. They were so beautiful. They examined you, looking at you like you were a tasty meal for them, before finally, pulling you forward by your neck. “Drop, toy.” They said, and the motion, and the sensations, and the feelings fell away, as you sank into trance.

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