I have no words!!! Too many words!!!
Just! AGHHH! The shading!!1 The on-modelness!!! THTEH E OBIOEBOW!!!!!
I have been waiting to gush for, like, six hours!!! Work kept me from tearing into these like a rabid dog, I need to deck something in the face! Affectionately!!!
Thank you sososososososososoosooooooo much, this just made my entire month!! Agh! The details!! I have to go over the details-
ONE- I love the background you did with the chap 8 art, how it looks like smoke strands/ink in water, and how you carried that over to the tendrils themselves!! It's such a cool way of interpreting what they look like, my goodness! And that action word with the red glass breaking effect/cobweb, ughhh, I love it so much!! And the fact that you can't see the counterfeit. But also, how dare you disturb me with my own scene?! I felt dirty looking at what was happening with Sniper, the poor guy. Ugggghhh, if this is payback, well done, I'm thoroughly creeped out.
And just the fact that's it's this scene, man, this may sound crazy but I feel like it's often overlooked? Or that's just from me being the one to write it, chapter eight is one I don't often think about tbh, it's more the latter half and the one before that I think about more. But that just makes this even better!!
TWO- Scout, my beloved~ how dirty he is, the longer, scruffy hair! The fact that his arm's bandages are unraveling and bloodied (cool detail with the bloodied nose too, i love me an injured scoot). And juxtapose him with the Other One, and boy howdy, can I just say that I love how one model your art is? Dude, you are a fantastic artist, I wish I could do what can with a pen and tablet!! Makes me want to draw scenes myself, but anyway
The fact that the Other One's eyes are RED and not BLUE!! Further driving home to the idea that eye color is significant throughout the fic, it's just so good!! And the background! I suck at backgrounds so this is wonderful. When I was writing that scene, I definitely was picturing taller coniferous trees, in order to drive home how small Scout is and is currently feeling, but what you did by making the trees around him small, thus making the Other One seem even taller, more authoritative, and how he's looming over both Scout and their surroundings, AGH! Very cool!
THREE- NOT SCOUT MY TRAGIC BELOVED!! Duuuudddeeee, again with background, I can't get enough of it!!! The way he looks just slightly off, from his piercing eyes, to his torso being far longer than it should, and the spiraling, disintegrating left arm connected to the Boston Basher!! That is just, AGH!
Little piece of trivia: when I was getting near the end of writing ICWTR, I had the idea of calling Not Scout 'Copycat', which would allude to his nature being less malicious the host, The Counterfeit, but by then Not Scout was already set in stone, and the name Not Scout fit better with the off-putting and dreadful vibe the rest of the story had.
Man, there's just so much I want to reply to, and so many little facts and trivia about the creative process I'd love to get into, but idk if that's something you'd be comfortable with. Either way, thank you sososoSO much for making these!!!
Take as much time as you need to finish the story, it's not going anywhere, I promise! I'm not sure where you left it off at, but hopefully what you haven't reached yet will meet your expectations :P
ANYWAYSSS, I really need to finish the sequel, YOU HAVE GIVEN ME MY MOTIVATION BACCCKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!