Elliot

Guess who's back here again

I don't know if my perception of myself is how I ACTUALLY perceive myself or if I'm feeding off of the negative feedback I get from other people

People already believe I'm no good and that I'm a criminal, so am I purposely self sabatoging myself because I can't bother to change how they perceive me?

I just want people to hate me for a valid reason instead of because I'm gay or trans, or because of the lies of someone else.

Uhhhhhhhhh I will offer any advice I have!

Also ajdhahhd thank you 🥺

Remember to change paragraphs whenever your 'camera' moves, whenever you switch to a different person or subject, and whenever dialogue starts

I work with the 'white room' analogy. Essentially, if you read what you've written and it could take place in a white room without anything missing really, you've gotta explain some things about the scenery.

Some writers say that said is your worst enemy, I say otherwise. You just gotta switch it up every once in awhile, you don't have to use overly descriptive words unless you want to

If you find that something in the story isn't working out, try changing the setting or the weather, I've found that that can sometimes help me write