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And finally... Page 6 which makes it so that I did...1/4 of the challenge? At least in the lineart form!

When I hit the 28 pages with the storyboard for this challenge, I knew that I wouldn't really get that amount of pages completed >:'3 Then again, I did enter into this challenge with an open mind so... I am honestly not mad that I didn't get any further than this!

When I woke up during my sleep I decided that if I can line up to page 6, I will feel achieved regardless! And I did... So I am really happy and proud about that ^^ What I learned from this challenge was that I perhaps could be looser with my lineart phase :'3

This was fun and if Vilu is down to it, perhaps next year we'll do this again!

These characters are from my "Yellow" -comic that can be read over at my DeviantArt in case you are interested in learning more about them: https://www.deviantart.com/cuteflare/gallery/58539633/yellow-comic

Page 5!

This was the point of the process that I realized how much the previous page ate up of my time since there were six characters in total to draw :I I figured that this would have been easier to get lined and "done with" but NOPE, not really-

These characters are from my "Yellow" -comic that can be read over at my DeviantArt in case you are interested in learning more about them: https://www.deviantart.com/cuteflare/gallery/58539633/yellow-comic

Page 4 and the first hints of bubbles!

Yellow as a comic always starts off slow - which is why I knew going into this challenge with this specific comic of mine would present a challenge of its own! While I don't consider Yellow being the most..."info dumping" comic out there, there's still a decent amount of chitchatting to be considered when putting this together-

Also, perspective once again came to haunt me...>:'3

I think in terms of composition, the first panel is one of my favorites! Such a shame that Michael's stretching pose doesn't come through Tulip and Sabrina since I really liked the rough sketch!

These characters are from my "Yellow" -comic that can be read over at my DeviantArt in case you are interested in learning more about them: https://www.deviantart.com/cuteflare/gallery/58539633/yellow-comic

Page 3!

This was the point where I began to implement "rough sketches - good enough lineart" -method. I actually did copy-paste Michael on the second panel from page 2 and added the smile and eyebrows...

I am a bit unhappy with the size of the bag in the last panel but I didn't have time to fiddle around "what ifs" so it'll have to do-

These characters are from my "Yellow" -comic that can be read over at my DeviantArt in case you are interested in learning more about them: https://www.deviantart.com/cuteflare/gallery/58539633/yellow-comic

Page 2~

The perspective on this one was a bit tricky! However, I was happy with the roughs for the last panel's background that I managed to do! Such a shame that I didn't manage to sketch the backgrounds further on but I am still happy with what I managed to do within the short amount of time!

These characters are from my "Yellow" -comic that can be read over at my DeviantArt in case you are interested in learning more about them: https://www.deviantart.com/cuteflare/gallery/58539633/yellow-comic

Page 1~

Now that the challenge is over, I figured I may as well post the six pages I managed to line and give some thoughts regarding them!

Originally I wanted to go ahead and do rough sketches of the backgrounds as well as the characters! I ended up only doing that for the two first pages before scrapping that and deciding to roughly sketch and line each page one by one!

Despite the rush (and the comic ending up blander than I'd have liked story-wise), I am still decently happy with what I managed to achieve~

These characters are from my "Yellow" -comic that can be read over at my DeviantArt in case you are interested in learning more about them: https://www.deviantart.com/cuteflare/gallery/58539633/yellow-comic