So, I'm about 1/3 done with this, and I can confidently affirm that (so far), this is the best fanfic I've ever read.
First of all, the way the author manages to fuse both universes in this AU, in such a delicate but meaningful way? Wow, just wow. The references, the analogies, the metaphors... it's magic, truly. I could never tbh. ALso, I ADORE the author notes posted at the end of each chapter. First of all, the way it gives more details and at the same time full summaries is extremely helpful, and it makes the reader (me, at least), feel almost engraved in the story. Also, as an author myself, I love seeing Zar giving his experience as writer, like, it's just so amazing. The writing itself is just astonishing, to say the least. Yet again, just the analogies to both universes should win a prize. The only critiques that can come to mind (because I'm a bitch like that) are: the scene distribution, at least for myself. I just feel like the scene and POV placement could be better organized, buttt this is just because I'm a freak for organization, specially in writing. At last, I also have some issues with the distribution of action and dialogue, but again, personal feeling. Just because I feel like sometimes the action can be a bit more developed, alongside the dialogue, just to make a more even platter. But yet again, Bizarrestars managed to write to a fanfic longer than the BIBLE, and an amazing one at that (I'm so honest when I say it's the best fic I've ever read), so I am literally a nobody to criticize.
