[image description: a 8 page comic starring saiki. he's sitting at a booth, eating coffee jelly.
saiki: this is great. no annoying friends, no annoying family. some silence, and my coffee jelly. something is wrong here. Multiple things, in fact.
saiki: thereās nothing beyond the booth I'm sitting at. It's all blank. the line work could be better. and is the lettering handwritten? Good grief. I do break the fourth wall, but isn't this too much? I'm going to be out of character. And would it kill this artist to use a straight edge? its no problem for me since Iām an esper, but other people could trip on these uneven panels. The coffee jelly's fine, thankfully.
An example is shown of kaidou tripping. Kaidou: woah!
Saiki, not seeing kaidou walking towards him: itās a good thing the artist is too lazy to draw anyone else. I can handle this, but with other people it could get dangerous.
kaidou, tripping on the panel: hey saiki- woah!
kaidou knocks saikis coffee jelly off the table.
he sees saikis expression. kaidou, nervous: haha... I'll talk to you later!
kaidou runs off. Saiki thinks: How come I didn't notice Kaidou was right there? I don't have the germanium ring on, so i should've heard- could this artist be so careless that they didn't bother to write his thoughts in?
saiki, holding the coffee jelly in its glass: like i said: dangerous. i just barely caught the coffee jelly with my telekinesis off page.
saiki, looking at how the table looks the same as the start of the comic: but all the other stuff should still be on the floor. how hard can it be to keep props consistent in an eight page comic.
he looks to the side, and sees that theres another coffee jelly on the table, since the table is as it was in the beginning.
saiki, eating the new coffee jelly: good grief. i need to do something before this gets out of hand. seems i should investigate further. End ID]
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