Webcomic Reviews

Like honestly, Kique isn’t even trying anymore lmfao. Apparently these animals have bones made of rubber, this must have been the “evolution” that was mentioned back in Asmundr lmao.

This is the first jarring example, why the hell is Feaf twisted like that?? It literally looks like she is hugging someone else’s body. Her arm should not be thrown over her back like that?? Does she lack shoulders???? A spine??? Like honestly what the hell is this??

This thing has a straight giraffe neck lol.

I forget the name of this dude here, but he looks like half of his body is just emerging out of the ground here lmao. And another thing, why does he have a sickle? Feel like a knife would have been a better option here, considering that one good push from an enemy would cause the sickle to go into your eye.

Now this one isn’t exactly an anatomy fail, but more of a color scheme fail, because it looks like these two are morphed together at a quick glance lol.

Ever since Ranach has made his appearance in SouthSpear, I’ve always had a bit of a suspicion that he was just using this Tribe for his personal gain to fight back Ronja. I mean to be completely honest, Kique kinda laid that foundation out with how Ranach interacts and acts within the Tribe.

Fast forward a bit, it was a shock when Ranach suddenly wanted to play hero and gather all these Tribes to fight Solar Stag. Of course, I still wondered if Kique was going to continue Ranch down this path. And with the upload of this page, it seems I might’ve been correct. 9/10 I can usually predict how Kique is going to write a plot line, because he is incredibly predictable. Now of course, I’m not celebrating an early victory just yet, but there maybe a few ways this will go.

1. Ranch will win against Solar Stag, then want to rally against Nordgarde with his increased numbers. They will refuse and possibly kill him, or throw him out of his currently position/ Tribe.

2. Ranch will do the same thing as theory one, but instead they will just ignore him and disband and he will get so annoyed that he will just go by himself.

3. Lastly, Ranch will somehow convince them that Nordegarde is bad and we will actually have an all out brawl. Which could explain why Nordegarde is suddenly increasing its numbers, because he is preparing us for something stupid I’m sure.

4. Flamegarde will be more inclined to join Ranch in fighting Nordegarde, if they are made aware of Jahla’s presence. So Ranch may not go entirely empty handed.

5. He actually leaves them alone lol.

Ok, so we’ve all seen and read this page right? Many of us readers were actually excited that Kique FINALLY hinted at a F x F relationship in his primarily M x M comic. It only took 881 pages to finally get SOMETHING new!!!

So fast forward, waiting almost two years and almost 100 pages later for an interaction between these two, this is what we get???

So did Kique forget entirely about page 881? Well here is his stupid excuse for all of this:

Truthfully I feel like he does these repetitive “walk out in the middle of a serious conversation” scenes so he can further stretch the comic to a point of no return ( although we are already there lmao ).

So obviously, we know that Ferah may harbor some fear from her past experiences with relationships. But it was FERAH that mentioned her feelings first about Felidae. She seemed to mention and speak about it confidently, acknowledging her fears and Kargo offering support and advice.. Even though the advice was way out of character of him and just makes him look like another creep in the comic, but that’s a whole different topic.

Anyway, one would think that Ferah would leap and bound at the opportunity that SOMEONE reciprocated her feelings finally, but NOPE! Instead we are further dragged into this shit hole comic waiting for a proper F x F relationship… STILL. Not only this, but I don’t understand why Ferah didn’t just TALK to Felidae, because now they will have a whole awkward silence managing the kill and a whole awkward walk back to the tribe. That could give plenty of time to Ferah to talk to Felidae about why she is turning her down. Or idk, be honest? Maybe say something like “I like you.. I do, but I’m just not ready yet.” It’s also a bit confusing for Ferah to say “I like you… You’re a good friend” ( basically friend-zoning ) when she literally went on a whole ramble about Felidae to Kargo? Ok, wtf. I am also sick and tired of Kiques “one personality fits all” characters. Why is it that just about every character one here avoids serious conversations, or questions? Why can’t we have one that COMMUNICATES?

We could argue that Ferah still has her fears, or that maybe Kique wants to flesh their “relationship” out further instead of rushing it, but naaaah, I don’t buy that. This dude is all about rushing this comic, he just has hater energy for his female characters. Notice how we no longer see Aira?? Yeah exactly.

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Anyone else irritated with the characters of this comic blabbing the same thing to Jahla over and over again?

Obviously, Kique is famous for his repetitive scenes, but Christ. And I honestly wouldn’t doubt if there was more scenes of this crap. OBVIOUSLY there is a reason why Jahla may NOT want to go see her brother?

Oh idk, seems like this person answered that question:

Okay, one thing I need to pin point here. Why is Father doing absolutely ARSE about this situation? OH that’s right, Kique and his mini me have just the perfect excuse for it!!

So good boy Kique there even mentioned himself that essentially father is a fookin’ idiot. So of course, this opens a range of topics.

1. Father is suppose to be a god, yeah? I suppose Kique forgot that Asmundr existed before Home.. Clearly, Father was able to fight back against Marduk and win, so what the hell was stopping him this time?

2. Father literally made these dogs HIS responsibility when he decided to yeet them from Earth, so that’s his own damn fault. Also, he is clearly aware of the ghouls as he mentions in page 937, so why not WARN anyone before dropping them off on an unknown planet?

3. Again, the Akuilfr are literally FATHERS RESPONSIBILITY. They are literally HIS CREATIONS. But again, Father is shown as a neglectful POS, because this wouldn’t be the first creation he’s just upped and abandoned.

AUGH, ANYWAY.

My biggest tiff is Father here, he created the Akuilfr and recognizes that mister Rohgir there may pose a PROBLEM. So, instead of being a responsible adult, wtf does Father do? Dump the load onto Jahla, just like Lifa. Father literally has the power to shut sh*t down, but instead, it’s “he needs you.” And don’t give me that “I lose time on Earth” sh*t. Kique has run so far outta excuses as to why Father can’t be helpful, it ain’t even funny anymore. Commenters and die hard fans are finally starting to notice it, so Kique and mini me there pulled these silly excuses outta their arse. Honestly, I feel plenty of people tackled these issues in the comments, only a matter of time before the chieftain turns them off again.

Aside from all that. Why have we not seen the status of Rohgir? We HEAR about how bad he is, especially from Argeirr here

So WHY are we not SEEING anything? The issue of Rohgir has been spanning for HUNDREDS of pages and yet, the last time we saw him was what? Page 391 I think? Anyone with a brain can see this is a problem. Is Kique ever going to actually show the issue with Rohgir? Or is this one of his stupid “edge of your seat” situations that he CLEARLY sucks at. I’m still waiting for him to tackle the “lone wolf” topic that he drudged up, possibly relating TO Rohgir.

I have to say, I am rather pleased that the constant abuse Khellir, err I mean, Marduk has dealt with is finally over. And I’m not saying he is a great guy, but the simple fact that Kique can now stop bestowing his hater energy to J-Harper.

With this though, what is Kique to do? What is his plans with Asmundr? So far, it seems they move in with Ronja, but what is their roles in the story? Aside from basically being retired and just filler at this point. Marduk at least gave SOME purpose to the Asmundr plot, even if it was entirely a bullshit purpose lol.

Although I don’t really feel the passion from Jahla killing Marduk, I can definitely feel the hater energy flowing through the panels from Kique lol. Beheading him like that? Tell me how you really feel bud.

You know, I thought the same exact thing for a while. It was kinda weird how Pralig did what he did, then it was brushed under the rug. Unfortunately Kiques die hard fans are delusional AF and give me the impression that he could legit murder someone in front of them and they would still worship the ground he stood on. All of them have blinders on, Kique and Pralig know this because they’re good at manipulating people with one brain cell.

So I read this page a while ago and one thing that stood out to me was what Marduk said here in panel 4. He explains that the species worshipped him, built statues and temples… My first thought was, okay Kainan and co have been on Aedra for about 100 and plus days.. ( Idk the exact days I’ll be honest, but I know it’s more than 100 ) and I was like okay, hol’ up, how tf did they do all of that in such a short span of time on Earth?

Well, someone else had the same exact thought process and here is the stooges lazy answer:

So that would mean that time on Aedra moves VERY slow, meaning that years would be much longer, days would be much longer, including nights, weeks, you name it. I am kinda thinking on how our solar system works and how the further planets work, for time to be slower here. If we’re speaking scientifically here, that would mean that Aedra is far away from the sun, or whatever star it is orbiting. The star would be extremely far away, causing Aedra to probably be in a polar state, probably not even able to have any life at all given the ecosystem, in comparison to earth at least.

Not only this, but according to the wiki, it would seem time moves faster on Aedra, than it does on Earth…