Drafts

(I use a translator because I have some problems with the language)

Hello everyone, I am currently studying at high school and in the future I want to write my own fantasy book. I hope to get some advice from authors who are already involved in creative work. I already have some sketches and drafts.

Oh, I almost forgot, you can contact me personally as Author or Wanderer.

I'll say in advance that I find it strange that some people address the author by the name of the main character or by the names of the author's OCs

Ru Ver:

(с английским у меня проблемы так что ру фд можете читать смело эту версию поста тут мой мысли более понятные так как я носитель)

Всем привет на данный момент я учусь в старшей школе в будущем я хочу написать свою книгу в жанре фэнтези надеюсь получить советы от авторов что уже занимаются творчеством у меня уже есть кое какие скетчи и зарисовки

О чуть не забыла можете оброщяеться ко мне как Автор ну или Скиталец

Reaper and Raisariel

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And now, a bit about Semeromir.

Semeromir is the living embodiment — in other words, the humanization — of the concept of **Balance**, encompassing cycles, logic, order, change, judgment, logic, and control.

**Preferred pronouns:** It/They/Them

**Less commonly accepts:** masculine pronouns (he/him)

### Core Traits:

- **Absolute Rationality and Logic**: To Semeromir, the world is a set of variables, algorithms, and cause-and-effect chains. It views emotions as system errors and obstacles to clear thinking. Its decisions are always carefully weighed, calculated, and free of any emotional undertone.

- **Cold-Blooded Composure**: It is almost impossible to provoke using standard methods (insults, threats, chaos). Semeromir maintains icy calm even in the most absurd or dangerous situations, acting like an observer simply collecting data.

- **Strategic Mind and Analytical Thinking**: It thinks ten steps ahead, calculating all possible outcomes. This makes it a brilliant tactician, judge, and bureaucrat.

- **Sarcasm and Sharp Tongue**: Its main mode of communication is precise, often painful, logically flawless remarks. This is not emotional rudeness, but a surgical tool for exposing stupidity, hypocrisy, or illogical thinking.

- **Detachment and Closed-Off Nature**: It does not allow anyone into its personal space. Their inner world is a fortress with seven walls (hence the nickname). Attachments and trust are seen as vulnerabilities.

**Deeply Hidden Emotionality**: Beneath all the protective layers lies the ability to feel very deeply. However, this ability was blocked and buried long ago to avoid pain.

### Dangerous System Failure (“Drunken Rage/Melancholy”):

This is a surfacing of its core essence as the deity of change.

When consuming alcohol, its protective programs shut down. A chaotic, uncontrollable personality emerges — the raw aspect of the concept of change — in which the following mix together:

- **Aggression and Destructiveness**: Complete absence of fear and restraining factors. In this state, it is capable of unprecedented violence and destruction.

- **Emotional Lability**: Sharp swings from obsessive affection to deep melancholy and apathy, and less often, but sometimes, to the desire to destroy everything in order to create new beginnings.

- **Loss of Control**: Its greatest weapon — logic and calculation — disappears. All that remains is pure, unfiltered, and dangerous power.

### Key Motivators and Beliefs:

- **Control**: Control over its own emotions, over the situation, over information. Losing control is tantamount to personal catastrophe.

- **Order and Logic**: Chaos and irrationality are its greatest enemies. It mostly strives to bring structure and meaning to everything around it, but understands that balance is needed in all things, so it sometimes lets certain matters run their natural course.

- **Self-Sufficiency**: It relies only on itself and expects the same from others. Requests for help or emotional dependence seem like weakness to it. However, it is capable of building strong relationships without emotional dependence — such as:

- Mentorship

- Professional/work relationships

- Companionship

- Alliances

*(Very, very rarely: mutual respect or even friendship)*

Remember: it is free, relies only on itself, and despises emotional dependence.

- **Contempt for Blind Faith and Worship**: It sees this as a rejection of critical thinking and the root cause of many evils.

### Interesting Facts:

Semeromir is the only deity that, due to personal motives and antipathies, has no priests or servants. It does everything itself. Moreover, its so-called followers are usually quite disgusting psychopaths who deliberately commit horrors in hopes that the Absolute will notice them and personally pass judgment.

Semeromir adores **tea** — specifically tea, nothing else. Its familiar is literally a living teapot with legs and handles — a rather cute creature.

**Philosopher and personal secretary of Semeromir**: **Elder Kipely**

Semeromir’s only best friend is the Nameless Deity **Stargazer**.

ALL GODS OF AIERIN ARE GENDERLESS, as they are a humanization of concepts and their derivatives.

(The only ones who have a gender are Genesis and Raisariel)

### In Marriage:

- Aero and Eco

- Decht De La Anxelan and Laift De Robus

### Siblings:

- Eco and Terrastalphalhrat

- Reshiram and Reaper(twins)

- Lunarakt and Stargazer (half-brothers on the side of the God of Light)

- Genesis and Stargazer (half-brothers on the side of the God of Darkness)

### Children:

- Aero + Eco = Semeromir (lawfully born)

- Decht De La Anxelan + Laift De Robus = Reshiram and Reaper (twin brothers)

- Laiter Se Fal (God of Light), creator father → Lunarakt (created son)

- Darkht (God of Darkness) + Laiter Se Fal = Stargazer

*(created from blood and divine energy)*

- From the union of a mortal and a god:

Reaper + Ariael (former and greatest priest of the Seven Paths of Fate) = Raisariel

- Darkht + Nevertima (former priestess of the God of Fire) = Genesis

### Best Friend Duos:

1. Eco and Aquarius

2. Aero and Volt

3. Agni and Terrastalphalhrat

4. Semeromir and Stargazer

### Groups & Companies:

- **Supreme Court**

"Semeromir, Lunarakt, Raisariel"

- **Lords of the Sky**

*"Aero, Volt, Aquarius"*

### Sworn Enemies (cannot stand each other):

- **Laiter Se Fal** and **Darkht**

Stargazer: A Profile

Story 1: Birth of an Error

When Light and Darkness spun in a bloody dance—shadows bleeding into light and sparks igniting within the dark—an "Error" was born upon the battlefield. From the fusion of dreams and blood, desire and hatred, and the divine energy of creation, a child emerged with unique eyes.

The Right Eye: A black abyss containing a white sun.

The Left Eye: The very light of hope and dreams, marbled with the darkness of loss, destruction, and war.

He was the Error abandoned by the world in a desperate wish to forget and destroy him.

Story 2: The Nameless God Who Found a Name

A child of war and a product of chaos, he desired nothing but a home. Yet, to his misfortune, he was despised and rejected by all. Wanting to help, he appears to those at rock bottom and offers a choice, much like a devil: accept the star’s light to rise and follow dreams and hope, or refuse and remain. Those who chose to stay remained mired in the darkness of sin and ruin.

Loved ones who could not accept the loss or the choices of their kin began to call the child the "Demon of Destruction and War."

But one day, the Nameless God met a child afflicted by the curse of the Eternal Crystal. The boy’s flesh and bone were turning into amethyst. On his final night, the child said:

"You are like a Stargazer. You know every spark in the infinite dark; you count them and ignite new dreams. You are a god judged out of fear of the unknown, one who survived without followers, faith, or love. But you accepted me, and I accepted you. Thank you for everything. I love you, friend."

The next morning, the boy turned into an amethyst crystal. From that day on, the Nameless God took the name Stargazer—a name he wears with pride and honor, cherished by those who still know how to dream despite the ruin.

His Symbol: A seven-pointed amethyst star, representing his first and best friends: Semeromir and the Cursed Boy.

The Meeting: Semeromir and Stargazer

Their first encounter was... unconventional. Semeromir arrived to judge Stargazer for his "sins" as a Demon, while Stargazer came to beat some sense into Semeromir for being a "soulless machine." By the end of the fight, they had nearly killed each other, leaving everything within kilometers decimated.

They lay in a pool of their own blood and—like two idiots—started laughing. Semeromir had severed Stargazer’s legs and an arm; Stargazer had torn off Semeromir’s wings.

S: "I honestly don't know how we survived..." (Hysterical laughter, coughing up blood)

Sem: "Heh... sorry. I get it now. I was wrong. We are..."

S: "Alike. To the point of aching ribs. God damn it."

Sem: "Want to be friends?" (Hysterical laughter fueled by raw emotion)

S: "Sure. I'm in, Birdy."

Sem: "Will you help me put everything back the way it was?"

S: "With pleasure."

Afterward, they restored the landscape to its original state and stitched each other's limbs back on.

🌠 Character Traits: Stargazer

Cynic with a Golden Heart: He laughs at the world and himself, but he never fails to help those who weep.

Sarcastic Observer: Witty and sharp, he comments on events like a spectator—slightly mocking, but always hitting the mark.

Tender Core, Caustic Shell: His words can cut, but they are meant to heal.

Weary but Alive: He has seen it all—blood, gods, destruction—yet he hasn't lost faith in the light within people.

The Provider of Choice: He never imposes. His help is not a sentence, but an invitation to rise.

Wise and Ironic: He’ll drop a joke that is simultaneously hilarious and deeply philosophical.

The Radiant Watcher: He views life like a play where he is both the audience and the backstage screenwriter.

Painfully Honest: If he speaks, it’s the truth—no matter how unpleasant.

Perpetually Caring: He expresses concern through sarcasm or "poisonous" wit, but it always stems from kindness.

In His Own Words:

"I don’t save people. I just stand nearby while you remember that you can save yourself."

He never intervenes by force, even if he sees someone sinking. He simply holds out a light—an opportunity, not a finished solution. To him, the choice must come from the heart:

ALL THE GODS OF AIERIN ARE GENDERLESS, AS THIS IS A HUMANIZATION OF CONCEPTS AND THEIR BRANCHES

Married:

Aero and Eco

Deht De La Anxelan and Laift De Robus

Siblings:

Eco and Terra (Terrastalfalhrath is the full name)

Reshiram and Reaper

Lunaract and Stargazer

Half-brothers on the side of the god of light

Genesis and Stargazer

Half-brothers on the side of the god of darkness

Children:

Aero + Eco = Semeromir

Born in marriage and love

Deht De La Anxelan + Laift De Robus = Reshiram and Reaper Twin brothers born in marriage and love

Laiter Sho Fal (god of light) creator father – Lunaract creation son

Darth (god of darkness) + Laiter Sho Fal = Stargazer

Created from blood and divine energy, he is not recognized as a child due to a mistake.

From the union of a mortal and a god

Reaper + Ariael (former and greatest priest of the Seven Paths of Destiny) = Raisariel

Darth + Neverthima (former priestess of the god of fire) = Genesis

Duos Best friends

1. Eco and Aquarius

2. Aero and Volt

3. Agni and Terra (Terrastalfalhrat)

4. Semeromir and Terrastalfalhrat

Groups and companies

Supreme Court

“Semeromir, Lunaract, Raisariel”

Trio without status

“Vant (Elusa Volt) + Mirshi (Elusa Eco) + Reaper”

Lords of the Sky

“Aero, Volt, Aquarius”

Enemies who can't stand each other

Laiter Sho Fal and Darth

Terra (Terrastalfalhrat) and Aero

Ru Version:

Айэрин чудесный мир духов, богов, демонов, ангелов тут встретишь как и смертных людей так и проклятую на муки нечисть

В этом мире правят боги каждый из них живое воплощение своего элемента и его ветвей у каждого элемента свои изначальный дух Элуза первое творение богов

Изначальные боги

Верховные боги (Выше по статусу и влиянию)

Первый бог жизни энергии развития и эмпатии Лайф Де Робус

Второй бог смерти полного конца краха и полного дна Дэхт Дэ Ла Анкселан

Третьи бог экосистемы природы порядка мудрости историй знаний Эко

Изначальные боги

Четвертый бог тьмы магий и грехов Дархт

Пятый бог света тепла смирения доброты лояльности и принятия Лаитер Сё фаль

Шестой бог воздуха ветра и небес свободы воздуха и революции Аэро

Седьмой бог огня и жара кузнечного дела очага трудолюбия и страсти Агни

Восьмом бог воды во всех ее формах облаков и адаптации Аквариус

Девятый бог электричества скорости прогресса стремления и Электромагнетизма Вольт

Десятый бог земли и миниралов богатств торговли плодородия стойкости Террасталфалхрат

Боги верховного суда

1 Верховный суд баланса и равновесия Семеромир бог баланса цикличности порядка перемен суда логики и полного спокойствия

2 Морально материальный суд

Лунаракт бог солнца и луны исцеленея морали наказаний провосудия и идеалов

3 суд душ и перерождения

Райсариэль богиня путников проводник в загробные миры Хранительница душ и воспоминаний

Боги судьбы

Реширам бог судьбы истории и путей обещания нестандартного мышления тот кто пишет судьбы в текст его превращяться в алую нить судьбы

Жнец бог смерти душ перерождения владыка загробных миров

Загробный мир

Вечного блаженства и отдыха Ракуа

Загробный мир мучений и страданий

Шинцир

Бог что изначально был им лишь на половину

Генезис бог наркоты галлюцинации экстаза болезней мучений формацевтики и верности

Безымянный бог

Звездочет бог надежды и мечтаний

Aerin is a wonderful world of spirits, gods, demons, and angels, where you will encounter both mortal humans and evil creatures condemned to torment.

This world is ruled by gods, each of whom is the living embodiment of their element and its branches. Each element has its own primordial spirit. Elusa is the first creation of the gods.

The primordial gods

The supreme gods (Higher in status and influence)

The first god of life, energy, development, and empathy, Life De Robus.

The second god of death, complete end, collapse, and rock bottom, Deht De La Anxelan.

The third god of the ecosystem of nature, order, wisdom, stories, and knowledge, Eco.

The original gods

Fourth god of darkness, magic, and sin, Darth

Fifth god of light, warmth, humility, kindness, loyalty, and acceptance, Laiter Sho Fal

Sixth god of air, wind, and the heavens, freedom of the air, and revolution, Aero

Seventh god of fire and heat, blacksmithing, the hearth, hard work, and passion, Agni

The eighth god of water in all its forms, clouds, and adaptation, Aquarius.

The ninth god of electricity, speed, progress, aspiration, and electromagnetism, Volt.

The tenth god of earth and minerals, wealth, trade, fertility, and steadfastness, Terrastalfahlrat.

Gods of the Supreme Court

1 Supreme Court of Balance and Equilibrium Semeromir, god of balance, cyclicality, order, change, judgment, logic, and complete tranquility

2 Moral and Material Court

Lunaract, god of the sun and moon, healing, morality, punishment, justice, and ideals

3 Court of Souls and Rebirth

Raisariel, goddess of travelers, guide to the afterlife, guardian of souls and memories

Gods of Destiny

Reshiram, god of destiny, history, and paths, promise of unconventional thinking, the one who writes destinies into text, transforming them into the scarlet thread of fate

Reaper, god of death, souls, rebirth, lord of the afterlife

Afterlife

Eternal bliss and rest – Rakua

Afterlife of torment and suffering – Shinzir

Genesis, the god of drugs, hallucinations, ecstasy, illness, torment, formativics, and fidelity

The Nameless God

The Stargazer god of hope and dreams The keeper of the stars, but at the same time the one who will bring destruction and war

Ru Version:

Айэрин чудесный мир духов, богов, демонов, ангелов тут встретишь как и смертных людей так и проклятую на муки нечисть

В этом мире правят боги каждый из них живое воплощение своего элемента и его ветвей у каждого элемента свои изначальный дух Элуза первое творение богов

Изначальные боги

Верховные боги (Выше по статусу и влиянию)

Первый бог жизни энергии развития и эмпатии Лайф Де Робус

Второй бог смерти полного конца краха и полного дна Дэхт Дэ Ла Анкселан

Третьи бог экосистемы природы порядка мудрости историй знаний Эко

Изначальные боги

Четвертый бог тьмы магий и грехов Дархт

Пятый бог света тепла смирения доброты лояльности и принятия Лаитер Сё фаль

Шестой бог воздуха ветра и небес свободы воздуха и революции Аэро

Седьмой бог огня и жара кузнечного дела очага трудолюбия и страсти Агни

Восьмом бог воды во всех ее формах облаков и адаптации Аквариус

Девятый бог электричества скорости прогресса стремления и Электромагнетизма Вольт

Десятый бог земли и миниралов богатств торговли плодородия стойкости Террасталфалхрат

Боги верховного суда

1 Верховный суд баланса и равновесия Семеромир бог баланса цикличности порядка перемен суда логики и полного спокойствия

2 Морально материальный суд

Лунаракт бог солнца и луны исцеленея морали наказаний провосудия и идеалов

3 суд душ и перерождения

Райсариэль богиня путников проводник в загробные миры Хранительница душ и воспоминаний

Боги судьбы

Реширам бог судьбы истории и путей обещания нестандартного мышления тот кто пишет судьбы в текст его превращяться в алую нить судьбы

Жнец бог смерти душ перерождения владыка загробных миров

Загробный мир

Вечного блаженства и отдыха – Ракуа

Загробный мир мучений и страданий – Шинцир

Генезис бог наркоты галлюцинации экстаза болезней мучений формацевтики и верности

Безымянный бог

Hello everyone, sorry for disappearing for a couple of days (no internet).

Happy New Year, everyone! I wish you luck, happiness, health, success in new endeavors, stable finances, and strong nerves so that everything works out in life, there is less crap (this also applies to shitty people who stick their noses into other people's business, so that there are fewer assholes in your life), and you remain beautiful.

Ru Version:

Всем привет, извините, что пропала на пару дней (не было интернета).