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I DID THEM AS THAT ONE ART TREND

What Susie's hiding under her bangs

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Commission for @virtuallyindubitable !

piper is my site btw i designed it and everything...

p.s. tell me if you think anything about a. the site or b. the work itself need work ... like actual criticism not just It Is Bad please ... thank you :)

Your descriptors have gotten more intricate as spoken lines are followed by more vivid imagery. An improvement for sure, even if some lines still felt a little stale from regurgitation. Recognizing the ubiquity of certain speech verbs, such as "asks" or "prods", is important when wanting to improve upon your writing. Finding synonyms for them is essential if you planned on having extensive dialogue in your story. That would apply to adjectives too, even if I can’t think of a specific example from the story right now.

Still, I very much appreciate you for taking my advice and applying them to your writing!

Not what she meant but.

deltarune fandom has no issues with the way kriselle shippers romanticize (and fetishize) a route about abuse, drawing art thats clearly noncon. but suselle shippers cant draw something thats just accurate to how the characters actually act in the game because its slightly racy.