TheArcaneWanderer

Hey everyone, I am starting to do comissions do try to raise extra money.

Here is a piece I drew for my favorite background character of all time, Vinyl Scratch

If you are interested in commissioning me, give me a DM on here. My prices vary. SFW only please.

A Twilight meme I made in a few minutes for practice.

The “lol so random” humor of the early 2010s. 2011-2012.

God, I miss that era. For many reasons, but one is the internet of old.

At least back then you could know that, for all the badly drawn fanart art ( like this) and fanfiction and such, it was real amd authentic.

No AI slop. Far, far less bots. Heck, I recall way less subscriptions in everything and even ads!

You’d see stuff like this or something often.

Man I feel old. But it was nice to tap into those fond memories.( probably some rose tinted googles but still)

Glad the author is doing well and all that. And glad it's back

Let's be a bit contrary to the endless praise and glazing of this comic, shall we? Here is a hot take:

Nothing that happens in this scene could possibly make up for the horrible pacing and meandering of this chapter. I said it a million times, but the ENTIRE STORY was derailed and the main cast was thrown out the window. For this apparently????

What on earth is so vital about this page I wonder?( Guess we will find out when the entire scene is out to public)

Full scene is not yet public yet I somehow doubt that its is gonna be imporatnt, given how the rest of the chapter was. Feels more like overhyping a big nothing that is irrelvaent to the plot.

I do hope I am wrong and being cynical, yet I see no prior evidence. And frankly, like I said, nothing could make up for this shitty as pacing and excessive meandering? (4 years and 165 pages, like multiple chapters of a graphic novel worth, for what? dragging out the same plot points?)

What is this "doozy of doozies" or whatever? That Kira's parents died? As if we did not know that? As if its not already in her character bio or whatever? It's so weird this "huge reveal" even belongs to Kira, she is not even important to the story! Even less than Cur. She was barely even in Chapter 5 execepti the start of it and now the end of it!

(See? From the start of chapter 4, page 188. We already know this info, did the authors forget? What is the "new angle" that suddenly changes everything, I wonder)

Is just so VITAL to the story we have a dragged-out subplot in the middle of all the other things going on about side characters no one but maybe 5-10 people in the server actually give a shit about!

And like...why on earth are these reveals not relating to the main protagonists or coming from them, especially considering all the big hints and such to Tamberlane's origins in the end of chapter 4? (her flashback, the mysterious figure saving her, mentions of her previous caretaker "Vee")

No, screw her and screw teh maic chracter and main plot! Cameos galore ( I am fine iwth cameos if they are backgroudn but why give a paid cahracter a role in the main plot?)

Their bullshit excuse for their own bad pacing and storytelling choices! Complete hubris! If its so bad you have to make a post like this, acknowledge how stupidly long and dragged out this chapter is with nothing happening... maybe consider tightening the focus or removing/ shortening scenes?

No way all this is necessary! Like the cat sibligns yabbering for like ten pages on end:

Or the fucking foxes doibg breathign excerises, during another poinltess subplot where a hoard of side characters and cameos search for yet another pointless side characetr no one really likes (outside of the Discord) with neither hide nor hare of a single one of the main family:

Pure hubris.

Already have the animatic.

As for Kickstarter: it helps me fund this comic. I am offering it limited background cameo slots. Also I offer PDFs of the chapters.

Gotta get word out of the comic and fund it somehow.

I am just gonna be honest, this would help A TON. I am not a professional artist( hopefully in future) , I am a writer. My best shot of getting this comic made and making it good was hiring one like I did.

If you are interested in this story and want to help its production, consider supporting the Kickstarter and perhaps the Patreon.