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SPOILER ALERT, IF SOMEONE DOESN'T WANT TO KNOW ABOUT THE STORY AND ITS LAST CHAPTERS 

Wow. What an adventure. Really, I didn’t expect it to be such a suspenseful, tear-jerking and emotional story from beginning to end. You broke my heart so many times that I lost count. But I don’t regret it, because I enjoyed reading this amazing fic. Also, thanks to Geronimo Saga and Unstoppable, I finally watched for the first time all the episodes (not just some of them) of Darkwing Duck (and read for the first time the comics) last year. I understand much better why it's so popular even now.

I wrote in my first review my feelings until chapter 24 (all the pain that I suffered until that chapter). After that chapter, it was (once again) an emotional roller coaster. First of all, the plot-twists and revelations. Many of them. The biggest would be the truth about Ratigan and Gosalyn’s grandfather, of course. That chapter, auch. The pain was so big. I didn’t expect the truth to be so tragic (And poor Gosalyn, watching all those memories. The description of her emotions when she found out how her parents died was so sad😭).

Also, I’ve cried a lot with many moments of the new chapters that touched my heart🥺. If I had to choose a few moments to describe, will be: 

Chapter 29: Gosalyn talking with Goofy (I cried reading that moment between those two) and later with Negaduck (I loved it. Especially after all the pain they’ve suffered in the fic). Gosalyn really needed moments like those after everything that happened to her.

Chapter 34: Once again, the plot-twist about Thaddeus Waddlemeyer. All the pain that caused his actions and mistakes, and Gosalyn watching all of them was so painful.

Chapter 36: the beginning with Tim’s flashback. I-I cannot express how I felt reading those memories without exploding because of that horrible Mortimer! I hate him! I hate him so much!

Chapter 39: the last scene. Seriously, I felt so many feelings reading the thoughts and emotions of Timothy (Poor kid 🥺😭), then Gosalyn and Max talking to him, and then… then that last moment of the three together, as a new family. 

"…The warmth of a family…"

I was so, so happy reading that scene that I couldn’t stop crying for minutes.

There are more moments, of course. But if I wrote all of them, I wouldn’t know when to stop writing.

The end of Ratigan that you showed… Wow.  Negaduck feelings and thoughts described very well that moment. I couldn’t enjoy that villain’s end like I expected because of the situation in his last moments.   

Nega-Scrooge’s story is a conflict of emotions to me as a reader. He did horrible things to Gosalyn just to take revenge on Negaduck. However, his pain for his loss was so real. (And it’s more tragic with the revelation that Negaduck spoke to Scrooge). I felt sad with the last scene of him talking with Tim.

The discussion between Darkwing and Darkwarrior (another big surprise in the last chapter!) was very interesting (I read it many times)

In addition, I loved the moments of information, revelations and connections (I really like those moments in your fics, Zoe^^). Chapter 39 resolved so many mysteries of the story (even some that I almost forgot^^’) that I enjoyed it.

Once again, I loved how you introduced new Original Characters (It was a surprise to discover new OCs even in the last chapter). Also, I don’t forget all the new mysteries that you showed in the end. They have the potential for new stories.

Thank you for sharing this incredible story of Darkwing Duck, Zoe. I really enjoyed reading it.

(Sorry for any misspelling^^’)

First of all, wow. When I started to read the story, I really couldn't stop. Seriously, I’m accustomed to reading long stories in a few days if I love them very much: when I started it, you had already published 23 chapters, and I read them in three days!!

Omg! I'm used to the emotional roller coaster that all your long fics have, but I've felt pain since the first chapter.

The plot is crazy. So many plot twists (I lost count), so many painful moments (also anguish, sorrow, etc), besides the description of characters' feelings and thoughts: so powerful. That's why I also enjoyed very much those scenes of humor between all the drama (you always find the balance of genres in your fics)

SPOILER ALERT, READERS

Poor Gosalyn. She has suffered so much. All the pain, because of those horrible villains. The few moments of calm were very emotional and important.

I hate Ratigan. I hate him so much. That rat is the worst. The way he manipulates the truth with lies in order to make his victims suffer. He’s so evil. The other villain that I hate a lot is Nega-Launchpad. I felt so much pain when Gosalyn couldn’t kill him, because when she saw his face, she remembered Launchpad. And, that monster had traumatized her so much that she reacted so badly when she saw Launchpad, even though she knew that the pilot would never hurt her.

I love one of your original characters of the fic: Timothy Cratchit. I’ve become a fan of that little mouse since his first appearance. I didn’t expect the story of his past and how his parents died (Also, the connection with Living On A Prayer, my favorite fic of the Geronimo Series. That was incredible). I love so much the development of the bond of Tim and Gosalyn. I can’t wait to read more scenes of Tim with Gosalyn and other characters like Negaduck and Max.

I’ve cried a lot reading the story. Especially with two scenes:

Chapter 16: The reunion of Gosalyn and Max. I was very afraid that the incident at the hospital at the beginning of the story would damage the relationship of the couple (or at least, that their next moments would be very uncomfortable because of the memory and 'the truth' about Gosalyn). But then I read how Max never blamed her for what happened, and didn't change his opinion of her after he heard about what she was. I cried so much with his declaration of love for her, and Gosalyn’s reaction.

The ending of chapter 24. Pain. So much pain. It was like a punch in the stomach. Such painful (but also incredible) connection to the pilot of the original series. The thoughts and emotions of Gosalyn were such chaos. My heart. She had suffered a lot in the last hours, and now THAT last part of the chapter?! It was too much for her. Her last thoughts were so depressing. I want so much that Gosalyn gets her happiness back.

I'm a new fan of the Geronimo Series, and I wanted to write my review about this incredible saga.

Sorry for any misspelling. My language is Spanish, and, even though I'm very good with reading (I read all your saga in 3-4 weeks), Writing is my Achilles heel.

I read about your fics a long time ago, on Tumblr. However, since I didn't remember about the original series very much, I wasn't sure of reading it. But, after seeing a lot of beautiful fanart of the saga by your fans, I said "I'm going to read it".

I will admit that it was difficult to picture (in my mind) the first fic (I have to thank @thezoe611​ for helping me to remember details of the series and the characters. DW's ego is really big, isn't it?. LOL). But, I was thrilled when I read the Bay's incident at the end. Wow. That was a spectacular moment, and for me, the real beginning of Gosalyn and Negaduck's bond.

Stella. There are no words to describe that terrible and at the same time, incredible manipulative villain. His actions had serious consequences for the rest of the series. It was so difficult for me to read the time in Oblivion (Negaduck's thoughts were so descriptive and painful. Especially when he was tortured). But, it was also amazing, very emotional, and I don't regret reading it.

My favorite fic is Living On A Prayer. For me, it was the fic in which I felt the structure of the series being complete at last (characters, places, plot, etc). After that, I think the saga only got better.

I really loved how you wrote the characters (Launchpad is too good for this world). The balance between the bonds of Gosalyn with other characters was so good. In fact, I was worried that with the expansion of Gosalyn's bond with Negaduck, that DW would appear less time. Fortunately, it didn't happen. I loved your balance of those main characters.

That’s Christmas To Me was an emotional roller coaster. The chapters where you described the emotional state of the characters that believed that Gosalyn (SPOILER), those were so painful (And, for a second I was glad of Nega-Stellar's fate. Because I felt terrified to think of the possibility that Nega-Stellar and Posi-Ana could have formed an alliance).

Another incredible and painful detail: characters' emotional state (like Negaduck and Gosalyn). I could feel their emotions while I was reading. You wrote their traumas so good, that I felt they were very realistic.

Oh. I also loved your Multiverse (I'am a big fan of these Space-Time plots). Especially how it was so important for the series, and not just the possibility of cameos.

Thank you so much for this series. I enjoyed it so much, and it also made me like the original series much more.