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On the door at my gym, someone hung a sign that says, âMotivation is what gets you started. Habit keeps you going.â I began working out regularly over 20 years ago. Since then, Iâve dropped about 75 pounds, and Iâve run or walked something in neighborhood of 22,000 miles. I canât even imagine how much Iâve lifted in weights. But think about it, if someone had said to me, âHey, Dave, why donât you go run 22,000 miles?â it would have taken an awful lot of motivation to get me going. However, it only took a tiny bit of habit. Writing is much the same way. A lot of us try hard to get motivated to write a novel. But writing a novel is a lengthy process. Being motivated doesnât help much, but developing good writing habits helps a lot. I learned long ago that exercise is hard when youâre starting out. If you run three days, youâll want to quit at the end of them. Thatâs when muscle aches and fatigue are the strongest. But if you run for a week, youâll begin to notice that you feel better on the days that youâve run. Soon, the day wonât feel complete without some exercise. Writing is much the same. Jumping into a project is hard. Working on a novel for one day doesnât really get you very far into it. But if you try making it a habitâif you bundle all of that motivation up and say to yourself, âIâm going to write for one hour a day this week,â youâll find at the end of the week that you just donât really feel that your day is complete if you havenât spent some time engaged in creative recreation. With my writing workshops, I generally hold them for a week. I try to motivate my students to write daily during that time, if only for a couple of hours. The goal in part is to teach the writers and get them to develop new skills, but just as importantly, Iâm trying to get them into the habit of writing. Quite often it works. Iâve gotten many letters from writers where the writer has said, âHey, Dave, I got into the habit of writing at your workshop last year, and Iâve just finished my first/second/third/fourth novel!â Whenever I see that, I always feel as if the mission has been accomplished. So hereâs the key to become a writer: Use your motivation to create a writing habit. Long after you have run out of motivation, youâll still be writing.
How to easily improve the flow of your writing
When writing a story, your prose can often feel jumbled.
Muddled.
Disconnected.
Like it just doesn't flow.
And for a long time, I never knew a clear, tangible tactic for fixing that problem, except by feel or by trial and error. Then I learned a simple, but effective trick for improving flow:
Go from the known to the unknown: use the last few words of one sentence to set up the information that's about to appear at the beginning of the next one.
Hereâs what I mean:
Think of it like crossing a stream, hopping from rock to rock â each rock acts as both a landing spot and a launching point. Writing and revising your sentences to serve a similar purpose can go a long way in improving the flow of your prose.
Let's start by taking a look at a paragraph (prepared by yours truly) that doesnât do this, resulting in a somewhat bumpy flow:
Vincent Van Gogh's "The Starry Night" had always inexplicably drawn Henry in. The painting was framed as a poster on his wall, and he often stared into its dizzying swirls of blue and yellow, and its fiery cypress tree â marveling at the chaos that entrenched the village scene. Henry had always hoped that Vincent was able to find some peace in expelling this vision from his mind and onto the canvas.
Feels a bit disconnected, doesn't it? Itâs still readable, but there isnât much of a continuity of ideas bridging the sentences â no connective tissue to smooth out your journey through the prose.Â
Now let's look at the same paragraph again, but with some simple rearranging done to ensure that the information that ends each sentence also kicks off the next one (I put these hand-offs in bold):
Henry had always felt inexplicably drawn to Vincent Van Gogh's "The Starry Night." The painting was framed as a poster on his wall, and he often stared into its dizzying swirls of blue and yellow, and its fiery cypress tree â marveling at the chaos that entrenched the village scene. With such a vision expelled from the mind and onto the canvas, Henry had always hoped that Vincent was able to find some peace.
Now that reads a little better, doesnât it? Youâll notice I didnât even change up my word choice. Sometimes youâll have to swap out words or change the order of your sentences, but even just rearranging information can often add a lot connectivity.
This obviously wonât be possible in every sentence and paragraph, but itâs a great rule of thumb when you want to smooth out your prose. IÂ hope this proves as helpful to you all as it has been for me!
Good luck, and good writing, everybody.
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Dialogue Prompts: âTired...â
1. âArenât you tired?â
âNo more than you.â
âNo less either, I imagine.â
2. âIâm not tired.â
â...no one said you were.â
âI know, I know, Iâm trying to convince myself.â
3. âDonât you get tired?â
âOf what, doing what I love? No.â
âYou love dissecting insects. Great.â

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Prince Caspian x OC (title has not been decided yet)
So I have been working on a Prince Caspian fan fiction at the request of my best friend. It is currently in the very very early rough draft stages but I am excited about it. I have been doing a lot of research for this lol. For age and drama reasons, I am mixing parts of the books and the movies, as well as my own tidbits in order to write this. Hereâs a sneak peek?Â
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guys im real unmotivated to do actual writing tonight
who wants to send me questions about WIPâs or characters, so I can still feel like im accomplishing something?