psychoanalyzing people isn't a good habit to get into, but by god do romantasy writers make it tempting. oh, every other woman in your story is a bitch and a meanie? and the only positive female characters are the mother of the protagonist (naturally sexually inaccessible to our male love interest, although still expressing how hot and sexy he is to reaffirm the universality of his alpha appeal) and the soon-to-be dead, angelic mother of the love interest? and have you considered taking this manuscript to your therapist? no, it's nothing. just curious.












