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It is currently year 2067 in London, England where superheroes and normal civilians live under a dystopian society. The origins of the abnormal abilities that started popping up in peopleās DNA all trace back to an unethical procedure called the Hero Experiment that took place in 1984, causing most of the human population to gain superpowers. It was conducted by the Virtue Administration in hopes of turning humans into weapons.
After a societal shift in advanced technology and increased focus on preserving Superhuman genetics occurred, Sectors have been established based on status, wealth, and value. Adam Saliba, the main protagonist, is a former superhero turned vigilante who ābetraysā the Hero Agency and the Administration after breaking the Creed.
He took the life of his ally to save a civilian, which led to his reputation to become tarnished and cause him to rebel against the system. After the brutal killing of Lady Eyrie, he forms an undercover group with his two friends Nicole van Dijk and Diego Maliksi to oppose the corrupt Administration and take down Crimson Eye, who is responsible for the Villain Uprising. However, he falls into a complex and downright obsessive relationship with his nemesis.
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Summary: Eirwyn thinks back to the time Bernadette had punished him after lashing out in anger, reminding himself that he would rather have a family that loves and hurts him than none at all.
He struggles to figure out how to deal with Vincent over breakfast, instantly pushing back on Panyaās preferred methods.
Word Count: 6,700
Content Warning: physical abuse
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āSo, you deliberately disobeyed me. Is that what youāre saying?ā
The smart thing to do would be to admit it. To say that he did disobey, and that he had no other justification for it. Arguing with his sister instead of taking accountability for something he did meant there would be no room for mercy. And Eirwyn knew better than to argue. Surely.
She provided him with a home! Food, shelter, a community. All he had to do in return was follow simple directions. It wasnāt that difficult to behave.
But some days he couldnāt ignore the tight feeling in his chest. Or the simmering pain in his stomach as his muscles tensed. There were only so many times Eirwyn could control himself whenever Bernadette snapped at him or ordered him toā Ah, no. Reminded him not to speak out of turn. Because it was impolite to do so and he needed to know his place.
āSimple respect is all I am asking for dear,ā Bernadette said with a heavy sigh as she rubbed her temples. In her right hand she held a glowing green whip, and the mere sight of the weapon was enough to make Eirwyn stiffen.
āThe least you could do is respond when I ask you a question.ā
Despite the whip being in Eirwynās peripheral view, he remained kneeling down in front of her with his head held high. Taking a deep breath and remembering to choose his words carefully. He forces a placid grin on his face, one befitting of Bernadetteās right hand man.
Right hand manā¦It would be funny if it wasnāt so delusional.
He was actually her servant. Her rabid dog put on a leash. Thatās what everyone else in their organization would call Eirwyn.
āYouāre right sister. I shouldāve known my limits instead of taking a risk like that,ā he explained, doing his best to keep his voice at a calm level. āBut in my defense, I didnāt realize how heavily guarded the club was. I thought it would be easy to take her out and get the DNA we needed beforeāā
Bernadette raised a hand up, and Eirwynās lips were immediately shut. Her gaze was cold. Unamused.
āYou know thatās not what I asked.ā
Of course. Eirwyn knew that. And he could tell by how Bernadetteās normally quiet voice hissed that his answer was unacceptable. The plastered smile on his face fell as he feels his energy dissipate, unable to keep up the facade. His fists tightened, resisting the urge to tell his sister that he didnāt even finish and that he was getting harsher treatment compared to his colleagues. He worked harder than any of those good for nothings thugs, and was far better at strategizing. But the single moment he made a mistake, it was apparently the end of the fucking world.
It was ridiculous. He was so loyal, so dedicated to her, and this is what he got in return for carrying all of these useless layaboutsā
āā¦!ā
A sharp crack of a whip broke the silence. And that strike just happened to land on Eirwynās face. The harsh welt was enough to make him reel back and fall to the floor, leaving a fiery hot sensation on his cheek.
He choked back a sob, rubbing the bloody red spot on his flesh as he trembled. Donāt cry. Donāt cry. Those words repeated in Eirwynās mind while slowly lifting himself up on the ground, despite his head pounding like hell.
It took him a while to process the pain, along with realizing everything he was just thinking was said out loud. He covered his mouth, unsure if he was trying to told back another whimper or stop himself from saying anything else that could get him in trouble.
āYou really do have some nerve.ā
The womanās icy words somehow had a way of crawling up Eirwynās spine and keeping his body frozen in place. He didnāt look up, not wanting to meet her vicious stare.
āā¦Get up.ā
And so he does, shaking a little and trying to recover from the whiplash. Stay composed. Youāre stronger than this.
Bernadette spreads a soft smile, tilting her head as if she was training a pet. Pleased at watching it successfully follow a command.
āGood boy,ā she purred, reaching out to gently stroke his cheek. The delicate touch made his skin crawl. āNow, let us discuss fixing your little error.ā
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The warm smell of fluffy pancakes fills the air, and for some reason the sweet aroma interrupts Eirwyn from his line of thought. Itās a strange time for him to linger on such a memory. He didnāt think ill of his sister or judge her for putting him in line when it was needed. But then he thinks about the other night with Vincent, another person he loved who would hurt him without any sympathy.
They were both his family. All he really had in this world. What right did he have to complain when theyāve treated him so much better than his birth parents ever did? He already knows heās unworthy of love. Itās a miracle they even paid attention to him in the first place.
ā¦He shouldnāt care about how much they hurt him. Because at the end of the day, their love and care make up for everything.
Panya sets the plate of food in front of him, and Eirwyn thinks it almost looks appetizing. Usually he loved to indulge in sweet things. He rarely ever got the chance to. But right now, it didnāt feel so comforting.
He takes a small bite thatās drizzled with syrup, and does the best he can to swallow it without having any nauseating thoughts. Trying to think of ways he could apologize to his boyfriend. Without making him so angry heāll beat him to a pulp again.
āYou donāt have to go back to him you know.ā Panya suddenly speaks up, taking a sip of her coffee. Eirwyn is silent and starts picking at the rest of his pancake with a fork.
āI mean it. You can stay here for a while if you need to.ā
What is she going on about now? Eirwyn thought she was making a way bigger deal out of this than it actually was. Sure, Vincent was more violent with him than usual that day, but he was just in one of those moods. The man was actually a sweet person underneath. He didnāt understand why Panya couldnāt see that.
āNo thank you,ā Eirwyn replied, wanting to scoff at the mere suggestion. āIām going back to his place to apologize. Iāll get him a gift or something toā¦I dunno.ā
The boy wasnāt entirely sure what he could do to make up forā¦refusing to have sex with him one time. But he could figure something out. He watched Panya let out a huff, firmly putting down her cup on the table.
āIām sorry, but thatās not an option.ā
āExcuse me?ā Thereās a sudden look in Eirwynās eye that becomes wild as he meets Panyaās gaze.
āYou donāt tell me what to do. I do what I want.ā
The darkness in the boyās tone doesnāt appear to phase the woman, who simply hums in response.
āIf you want to fight me, then go ahead. But Iāll do anything to make sure you donāt do anything stupid and put yourself in danger again.ā
That didnāt make any sense. She shouldnāt even care. She had to be doing this for some kind of benefit in some way, Eirwyn just couldnāt figure it out yet.
āI canāt just hide from him forever Pon, thatās pointless. Weāre still allies working under sister, weāre going to have to talk to each other eventually.ā
āā¦Thereās one solution to that problem.ā
Thereās a pause.
āDonāt kill him.ā Eirwyn would probably beg, but he was far too tired for that.
āHe hasnāt given me any reason not to so far.ā Panya grunts, her expression growing intense as she looks at the firearm placed on the kitchen counter. Thatās enough to make Eirwyn lean in with a deep scowl.
āIf you kill him, thereās no telling what Iāll do to you.ā
The threat in Eirwynās tone lingers in the air for a moment. Panya just looks at him with disappointment, but itās not similar to the look his sister would give him. Itās a different kind of frustration. Not, āOh, I canāt believe you failed me.ā Itās more like, āI wish you made better decisions for your sake.ā It was weird, and Eirwyn couldnāt make sense of the feeling it gave him.
āAnd Iām sure youāre serious about that. Iām willing to take that risk.ā
Eirwyn shakes his head in disbelief, laughing a little. āWhy? This has nothing to do with you in the first place.ā
āYour pancakes are getting cold, boy.ā
He looks down at his plate, dropping his fork to the side and crossing his arms. āIām full actually.ā
Panya pushes his plate forward a little. āDonāt be like that. You have to eat, remember?ā
Actually, he didnāt have to do anything at all! Eirwyn stuck his tongue out at Panya, only to earn an eye roll and a simple sigh.
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rapture definition: according to merriam-webster, it is a feeling or āstate of intense joy, ecstasy, or overwhelming emotionā. it can be described as something magical, like being transported to another world. it is also an event where Christian believers will be resurrected or brought to heaven during the āend-timesā.
this religious/spiritual concept overall heavily relates to the themes of SAVIOR because of superheroes being put on pedestals like literal gods, and when the Uprising occurs and most of them are killed, the world is thrown into chaos and many civilians fall to madness. especially when Lady Eyrie is made as an example and brutally killed. that moment can heavily relate to Jesus Christ being sacrificed on the altar to many of the fans that literally worshipped her.
in this world, where everyoneās lost all hope, people can only depend on those with abilities that surpass the average person. even if it means giving up their own agency and taking actions for themselves, they believe they can only rely on their saviors. because that is what the Administration has conditioned everyone to believe. that they are powerless without their manufactured gods and should risk everything for them to be āsavedā.
anyways i made an opening theme song based on this idea, like if SAVIOR were to become a fully animated show basically. thereās even an instrumental on YouTube i picked out that sounds like it would fit, iād probably record myself singing but i am not the best at it lol. it would be called āThe Raptureā and these would be the lyrics so far:
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i know you said that you didnāt believe
thereās a god up above
but what if i told you one day weāll
be saved, believe in his love
if you have faith in the divine, then rejoice
turn those cries into prayers, let him hear your voice
purge the tears from your eyes, be a new sacrifice
CW: blood, past trauma, mentions of addiction, binge drinking, suffocation
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It was a miracle that Adam had managed not to get suspended after the third morning of being late to drills. The structured routine and brutal nature of training at the Academy kept him on his toes, thankfully keeping most of his worst habits at bay. But it didnāt keep him entirely disciplined. As the obnoxious beeping of the alarm blared in his ears, he groaned.
āTime to wake up!ā An annoying high-pitched voice chirped, causing him to immediately wave away at the digital Avatar from his screen hovering over him. āIt is Tuesday, 6:00 a.m.! Currently a chance of Red Fog. Please be mindful and wear mask due to hazardous conditions.ā
Ah, great. Ever since those stealth suits were being developed for members of the Agency, more industries were taking advantage of the resources around them to provide them with the newest tech. Regardless of how the air pollution was impacting communities.
The masks werenāt that effective for Powerless, and most Superhumans were not immune to the fog. But they were less likely to get sick, aside from a few respiratory symptoms. And no matter what, young trainees were expected to follow schedule as usual.
Adam didnāt have to worry too much though. As long as he didnāt further damage his own bodyā¦
Maybe it was thanks to his age, or simply his helpful genes that his body remained stable in spite of the substances he put inside of it. He got through most of his high school years with alcohol, and he sure as hell wasnāt about to give it up during his Recruitment Period.
And despite everything, living away from his aunt and uncle, no longer having to worry about being pestered by them has offered him a little more freedom. Especially since they still somehow believed his lie about being a Powerless when he was really just a late bloomer. It kept things easier. Convincing them he was just attending a normal college and living a normal life. Staying out of trouble.
Instead of being a good for nothing waste of spaceā
A pounding in Adamās head resurfaced as he got up from bed and got dressed. Knowing that his headaches would only get worse when he went outside, he started to regret his late night drinking.
Once he headed inside the building and joined everyone in his class, he could see everyone far ahead in their laps. A young dark-skinned male zipped right past him, going faster than lightning. Probably one of the youngest in this class. Made Adam wonder if that was the new prodigy student everyone was whispering about.
A raven-haired girl lagged behind him as her body turned invisible, running next to another student and phasing right through them to get ahead.
The instructor blew the whistle. Adam didnāt have to look.
He could feel the piercing glare from them as he subtly joined everyone else, allowing the shadow to cloak his body for a moment as he tried to catch up. Tendrils jumped out in front of him as he jogged, jumping along the track to move ahead. Some of the slower trainees gave him dirty looks, but he couldnāt care less.
Until he was suddenly hit with an energy blast that sent him flying across the gymnasium.
A loud ringing similar to the one he was used to hearing every morning started. The very moment he slammed head-first into the hardwood floor. The metallic smell filled his senses as blood dripped down his nose.
Shit.
āSorry about that,ā the mocking voice jeered from across the room. āI didnāt even realize you were there.ā
A chorus of laughter followed. Adam chuckles a little himself. The reaction was to be expected. He knew his abilities made him seem like a monster. He knew what a lousy trainee he was. His unkempt appearance, the tardinessā He deserved to be treated this way.
But no matter how justified it was, it didnāt make him any less pissed off.
Before Adam could stop himself, his hand reached out and a shadow tendril grabbed at the neck of the boy that attacked him. Wrapping around his neck and strangling him. Choking him as he gasped for air.
The laughter turned into gasps of fear.
He waited, waited, and waited to let go of the boyās neck. Wondering if he should crush it instead. It isnāt worth it. Adam lets go of the other kid, seeing everyone else quickly surround him with worried expressions. Comforting him. Even the instructor runs to check on the boy, even though he was the one who started it.
Adam touches his bruised arm, the searing pain of the blast feeling more present the ever. He knows to brace himself for a scolding and slowly begins to stand up. Then, he feels a touch on his shoulder.
āHey. Are you alright man?ā
Instantly jerking away from the touch, Adam glares up at the stranger. Only for his gaze to slightly soften once he notices the worried expression on the young manās face. He also realized it was the same guy who dashed ahead of everyone at high speeds, wearing a confident smile.
The fellow trainee reaches a hand out. Adam hesitates to take it, wondering if this was genuine sympathy or just pity. āIām fine,ā he shrugs, deciding to stand up on his own. āJust caught me off guard is all.ā
Thereās a slight pause before the stranger smiles a little, raising a skeptical eyebrow.
āYeah, well. Your arm looks pretty busted,ā he replied, putting his hands on his hips as he turned to look at the other student on the ground crowded by his concerned peers. āIām gonna be honest. I think he got what he deserved.ā
It was a nice sentiment, but it didnāt really do much. After all, he couldāve been lying just to make him feel better. Or avoid facing Adamās wrath if he lost his temper again.
āSo what? Itās not gonna matter. Iām still gonna be penalized for thisāā
āDonāt worry. Iāll vouch for you.ā
Adam blinks, completely uncertain of what that could mean. The other boy waves it off as if to reassure him.
āNow, I havenāt been here long or nothinā but⦠I have a bit of influence here based on my Rank. I canāt promise that you wonāt get penalized but, I can convince the Instructor to give you another chance.ā
Adam narrowed his eyes and tilted his head in interest. The prodigy leans in and whispers, āPretty sure Teach over there is only biased because that other kid is supposed to be an Elite. Pretty wealthy tooāā
The boy glances over at the instructor and the injured rich kid. āSo, I would be surprised if someone like me persuading him didnāt work out.ā
It wasnāt too far-fetched of a theory. Elites were certainly treated better than most, no matter what Sector you were in. But Adam was pretty convinced it had more to do with his overall performance than status.
āOh, yeah? And what exactly do you get out of doing this?ā
The teen prodigy shrugs, smiling brightly as he did before. āIsnāt it our job to help people? Thatās why weāre here after all.ā
Adam scoffed. Pretty naive. He was definitely still a teenager. But somehow he seemed pretty sure of himself. The prodigy reached his hand out again.
āNameās Diego by the way! I see you mostly out on your own most of the time so, maybe we should hang out after our sessions are done.ā
Having friends was a completely foreign concept to someone who had spent so much of his life being alone. Completely used to the lack of social connection or any kind of close relationship with anyone. Something he believed was some kind of cruel joke after his parents had passed.
No one wanted to get involved with Adam. Mostly because he was a troublemaker, just like his mother. A scandalous legacy she left behind that he wanted nothing to do with.
But this random boy approached him regardless of what he just witnessed. He shouldāve been afraid. And yetā¦
āMm. Guess Iāve got nothinā better to do,ā Adam gruffly replied. āSure, why not. Just donāt get too excited. I donāt plan on spending too much time with you.ā
Thinking about it a bit more, as an older Academy student in his early twenties, it wouldāve looked rather strange for someone like him to be hanging out with a person like Diego. And perhaps a bit pathetic.
After all, no one closer to his age was willing to be his friend. But at this point, rumors were rumors. He didnāt have much to lose, and maybe once he joined the Agency things would eventually change. At the very least, it didnāt hurt to have Diego as an ally or even a training partner.
āAwesome!ā Diego beamed, seemingly uncaring of the dismissive response Adam just gave. āTake out your Pad. Iāll share my Code with you first so we can chat.ā
āArenāt you afraid of being seen with me?ā
āNah. Why would I?ā
Adam falls silent. He decides not to push, taking out his Pad as the screen hovers in his hands.