A Definitely Normal Fanâs Guide to Papyrus Undertaleâs Dialogue
Do you want to write Papyrus Undertaleâs dialogue? âŠOr just read a way-too-in-depth analysis of his speech habits? Then youâre in the right place! Hereâs a breakdown of some tricks, tips, and copious amounts of analysis I use when writing him.
I made this for myself to reference, but a couple of people wanted to see it, so this is a cleaned-up version.
Disclaimer: I make no guarantee that this is the most accurate thing out there, even if I use lots of references. There is extrapolation in this, so a lot of it is up to interpretation. These are just my personal notes that I made public.
Edited: I fixed the formatting so you can actually read it on tumblr.
Punctuation
Exclamation points!
Papyrus uses a lot of exclamation points⊠He uses them more often than not. He is constantly shouting. Mostly frequently, he uses one. But he also uses more! Like this!! Or this!!!!!
Examples: - âSANS!!! THAT DIDNâT DO ANYTHING!â - âI CANâT BELIEVE YOU SAID THAT!!â - âPURPLE TILES ARE SLIPPERY!â - âTHIS PUZZLE⊠IS ENTIRELY RANDOM!!!!!!â
Scroll through any of the linked references (at the end of the post) to see how often they appear.
But donât let this fool you into using exclamation points for every sentence. He uses periods and other low-energy punctuation occasionally in normal dialogue.
In serious dialogue when Papyrus lets his mask drop for a few sentences, he also uses more periods and other low-energy punctuation.
Geno Route Examples: - âI, THE GREAT PAPYRUS, HAVE SOME THINGS TO SAY.â - âNOT ONLY DO YOU NOT LIKE PUZZLES. BUT THE WAY YOU SHAMBLE ABOUT FROM PLACE TO PLACE⊠THE WAY YOUR HANDS ARE ALWAYS COVERED IN DUSTY POWDER.â - âIF FEELS⊠LIKE YOUR LIFE IS GOING DOWN A DANGEROUS PATH.â
Talking with Undyne Examples: - ââŠWHAT? DID I CAPTURE THEMâŠ? W-W-WELL⊠NO. I TRIED VERY HARD, UNDYNE, BUT IN THE END⊠I FAILED.â - ââŠW-WHAT? YOUâRE GOING TO TAKE THE HUMANâS SOUL YOURSELF⊠BUT UNDYNE, YOU DONâT H-HAVE TO DESTROY THEM! YOU SEE⊠YOU SEEâŠâ - ââŠâ - ââŠâ - ââŠI UNDERSTAND. IâLL HELP YOU IN ANY WAY I CAN.â
This is theorizing based on a couple of sentences, but Papyrus is also much more subdued (low energy punctuation) when he thinks heâs alone with Sans. (*More on this scene later.)
Examples: - âHEY, SANS, HAVE YOU SEEN MYâŠâ - "OH, HELLO. YOU ARENâT SANS.â - âWAIT A SECOND.â
There are a lot more examples of Papyrusâs mask dropping (And therefore his punctuation and speech patterns changing), but I want to move past the first bullet point sometime todayâŠ
Quotation marks
Papyrus quotes things more than onceâhe repeats phrases and such back to the speaker, or makes it clear heâs repeating something someone has said in the past.
Iâm not very confident in my analysis of this section, so I will just give some examples. Make of them what you will.
Examples: - PEOPLE WILL ASK, TO, BE MY, âFRIEND?â - YOU KNOW WHAT âSUP,â BROTHER! - I HAVE MANY âSOCIAL MEDIA CONNECTIONS.â - ARE WE POSTING HOT "PICS???"
These are some of the only appearances of this, so itâs not frequent.
Interrupted/Incomplete sentences/words*
Papyrus often interrupts sentences and words with punctuation, making them grammatically incomplete.
Examples: - âTHEN I'LL!!! BE FORCED!!! TO ASK UNDYNE FOR HELP!!!â - âUN. BELIEVABLE.â - âHA! HA! YES! HUMANS MUST BE VERY INTELLIGENT! IF THEY ALSO FIND JUNIOR JUMBLE SO DIFFICULT!â
Short sentences*
Short sentences. Papyrus uses very short sentences. He also uses a lot of ellipses to trail off earlyâŠ
Examples: - âFRISK⊠TAKE A HIKE. HIKING IS GOOD FOR YOUR BONESâ - âPSST. MAKE SURE TO GIVE HER THIS! SHE LOVES THESE!â - âIâM JUST A DOZEN AWAY⊠FROM A DOUBLE DIGIT FOLLOWER COUNT!â
Scroll through any of the linked references (at the bottom) to see more examples. Itâs everywhere.
PAPSLOCK
Papyrus speaks exclusively in capslock. (Thereâs a bit about how I deal with this in the âMiscellaneous Tipsâ section later.)
*A note on both the short sentences and interrupted/Incomplete sentences/words: Both the short sentences and a few of the interrupted sentences are most likely due to Papyrus's text size and dialogue box. He CANâT say long sentences or it wonât fit! When he has more space to talk, he does so, as seen in the Valentine's cards sent out in the Winter 2024 Newsletters. It may also may be because long sentences in all caps are much harder to read. The ellipses especially appear to be less of a characterization thing, and more of a "making longer sentences actually fit in a text box" thing. So feel free to play around with sentence length if you arenât trying to fit his dialogue in a tiny box! Often times, dialogue that works in a text box is too stilted and short in fic format.
How Papyrus refers to People
Referring to himself
Papyrus refers to himself in a variety of ways! The most common is âTHE GREAT PAPYRUS,â but thatâs not the only one.
Examples: âTHE GREAT PAPYRUSâ âMASTER CHEF PAPYRUSâ âPAPYRUS: UNPARALLELED SPAGHETTOREâ
The point isnât to grab these directly (though you can!) But that he doesnât just call himself great. He makes up random titles!
In the genocide route confrontation he switches from using âTHE GREAT PAPYRUSâ to simply âI, PAPYRUS,â This also happens during the date/hangout with him, when heâs turning the human down.
In the English version of the game, Papyrus doesnât typically speak in third personâhe introduces himself.
Examples: - âAND I, THE GREAT PAPYRUSâŠâ - âHUMAN! I, THE GREAT PAPYRUS⊠WILL GO ON A DATE WITH YOU!!!â - âI, THE GREAT PAPYRUS⊠HAVE NEVER BEEN BEATEN AT DATING, AND I NEVER WILL!â - âBUT ALAS⊠I, THE GREAT PAPYRUS⊠HAVE FAILED.â - âI, THE GREAT PAPYRUS, WILL SOLVE THIS CONUNDRUM!â - âFRET NOT HUMAN! I, MASTER CHEF PAPYRUSâŠâ
He puts âIâ in front of itâthere are a lot more examples Iâm not grabbing.
Most of the time he simply introduces himselfâhowever, there are a few uses of third person. Typically, itâs in places where third person makes sense to use in the context of the sentence.
Examples: - âPAPYRUS! HE SMELLS LIKE THE MOON.â - âPOWERFUL! POPULAR! PRESTIGIOUS!!! THAT'S PAPYRUS!!! THE NEWEST MEMBER⊠OF THE ROYAL GUARD!â
When he does use third person (from what Iâve seen) itâs never paired with âThe Great Papyrus.â If heâs calling himself that, heâs introducing it as a title after saying âI.â
Referring to Others
Papyrus doesnât use nicknames very often⊠unless you count the mangled âFlowyâ and âHappstablookâ (which isnât wrong. Itâs just his headcanon.)
When talking about Sans to other people, Papyrus sometimes refers to Sans as his brother. He also just calls him by his name.
Examples: - âMY BROTHER ALWAYS GOES OUT TO EAT. BUT⊠RECENTLY, HE TRIED 'BAKING' SOMETHING.â - âMY BROTHER WILL⊠WELL, HE WON'T CHANGE VERY MUCH.â - "I WILL NOW SEND YOU TO THE CAPTURE ZONE!! OR, AS SANS CALLS IT⊠OUR GARAGE???" - âHEY, SANS, HAVE YOU SEEN MYâŠâ
But when Papyrus is talking directly to Sans, he just calls Sans by his nameâexcept for once, at the very start. The famous quote: âYOU KNOW WHAT âSUP,â BROTHER!â which is seemingly for humorous purposes.
From what Iâve seen, Papyrus calls Undyne by her name, Alphys by her name, Asgore by his name, etc.
He has called Alphys âThe Great Dr. Alphys.â
He called Toriel âMOMâ once.
He calls Frisk âHUMANâ for most of the game, however, he switches to âFRISKâ as soon as he learns their name.
Examples: - âWOW, FRISK⊠THIS REALLY PUTS OUR RELATIONSHIP IN A NEW LIGHT.â - âIT'S OK FRISK! I'VE GOT YOU COVERED!â - âIT SEEMS LIKE YOU REALLY BOTCHED YOUR QUEST, FRISK.â - âFRISK, WHY DON'T YOU TAKE A WALK AROUND?â - âYEAH, FRISK, WHY DON'T YOU FLY?â - âFRISK⊠TAKE A HIKE.â
So⊠As an overview: Papyrus doesnât really use nicknames for anything other than humorous purposes or on one off occasions. (That we see.)
Papyrusisms
I donât know how else to describe this⊠Papyrus really loves language and playing with it. The level of language manipulation Papyrus does is most definitely on purpose. Here are some of his vocal quirks that make his voice distinct:
Alliteration/Rhyming
Papyrus often uses alliteration and rhyming. Things that make sentences roll off your tongue!
Frequently, the alliteration is paired with either Made-Up Words, or Esoteric Words. (Seen later in this section) Wanna make Papyrus use alliteration but canât think of a good one??? No problem. Just. Make up a word!!!
Examples: - âNO! I'VE BEEN DOGBURGLED BY THAT PERNICIOUS PUP!â - âI'M SO ENTHUSED BY YOUR ENTHUSIASM!!!â - âWOW⊠YOU'RE TRULY A PUZZLE PASSIONEER!â - âNOT AS PERSISTENTEST AS PAPYRUS, THE PERSISTENTESTEST!â - âSO INSTEAD I CRUISE WHILE I SNOOZE.â
Weird metaphors, Made up Idioms, changing common sayings
Thatâs the best way I can think of to categorize this. He uses odd metaphors, makes up idioms, and messes around with common sayings, and just⊠in general says incredibly odd things.
This one is more practice and a mindset shift than anything. You can try to recycle some of the canon phrases, or make up your own. Donât be discouraged if you canât think of anything, though! Itâs⊠really hard to match Papyrusâs sheer level of out-of-pocket eccentricity. Practice makes perfect!Â
(Personally, Iâm better at messing around with existing sayings than I am making weird metaphors. I like to use a saying, and then ask myself, âhow could Papyrus use this in a literal fashion jokingly?â)
Examples: - âWE REALLY ARE BOUND TOGETHER. TWO BONES IN THE SKELETAL ANATOMY OF FATE!!!â - âSEEING AS THIS SPAGHETTI IS STILL HERE SOMEHOW⊠I HEREBY DONATE IT TO THE PUBLIC. IT'S LIKE A PLAYGROUND FOR YOUR MOUTH!â - âAH-HA! INTERESTED IN MY FOOD MUSEUM? PLEASE. PERUSE MY CULINARY ARTSHOW.â - âPREPARE YOURSELF!! FOR HIGH JINKS! FOR LOW JINKS!â
Puns/Jokes
Papyrus tells a LOT of jokes and puns! He bemoans Sansâs, but actually makes more than Sans. (Though, Papyrus has a LOT more dialogue than Sans, so itâs not a fair comparison. If I wanted to get into the actual frequency Iâd want to do a percentageâhow many lines do they have vs. how many jokes they make. But then itâs skewed because Papyrusâs text is larger, so he has less text per box, so really it should probably be joke to sentence ratio instead⊠âŠYeah Iâm not doing that. But Papyrus makes a lot of jokes, okay?)
Papyrus is the guy at the party who plays up hating the jokes, and then makes his own right after. âŠIncreasing the humor of it dramatically when he does.
Examples: - âAS FOR YOUR WORK? PUT A LITTLE MORE, "BACKBONE" INTO IT!!!!â - âSO LET'S LET BYBONES BE BYBONES.â - âI CAN'T BELIEVE I'M FRIENDS⊠WITH A BONE-A-FIDE OPERA STAR!!!â - âWAIT, WHY ARE THEY A ROYAL GUARD AND NOT ME!? I LOVE TO BE PET TOO!!! SIGH... IT'S ALL JUST A PUPULARITY CONTEST.â
(I included the full quote, not just the pun, because I LOVE THIS QUOTE. PET THE SKELETON, OKAY? SOMEONE PET HIM AND TELL HIM HEâS A GOOD BOY. HE DESERVES IT. HE EVEN PLAYS FETCHâ) (âŠAhem. Sorry. Wrong post for this. Next time Iâll put my âProof that Papyrus Undertale is Actually a Dogâ up. (/half joking. I do have a document like this. I probably wonât post it, though. I donât normally post any of my analysis. (does that COUNT as analysis???)(AHEM AGAIN. SORRY. BACK TO PAPYRUS PUNS.)
- âI ALWAYS MAKE PEOPLE FEEL BETTER... WHEN THEY'RE DOWN IN THE DUMPS!!!â (Said when you call him from the dump.) - âOTHERWISE, I'VE ALWAYS BEEN INTERESTED IN THE XYLOPHONE. SOMETHING ABOUT ITS SOUND⊠TICKLES MY RIBS.â (Interview 1)
There are more, but I think you get the ideaâŠ
Made-up Words/Phrases
Papyrus makes up words and short phrases! As a disclaimer, I may make mistakes and mix up âmade-up wordsâ with âesotericâ words. (Shown in the next section.)
Examples: - âNYEH HEH HEHâ (The amount of âHEHâs differs) - âNYOO HOO HOOâ - âLOOKSYâ (âTAKE A LOOKSY!â) - âWOWIEâ - âDOGBURGLEDâ (âNO! I'VE BEEN DOGBURGLED BY THAT PERNICIOUS PUP!â) - âPASSIONEERâ (âWOW⊠YOU'RE TRULY A PUZZLE PASSIONEER!â) - âREADIED-UPâ (âOKAY! ALL READIED-UP TO HANG OUT!?â) - âCHECK IT OUTIE!!!â - âNYEHFULLYâ (âNYEHFULLY YOURS, PAPYRUSâ) - âBONETROUSLEDâ (âWHEN YOU WENT MISSING I GOT WORRIED SICK!!!- SLIGHTLY BONETROUSLED, PAPYRUSâ) - âPERSISTENTESTâ/âPERSISTENESTERâ/âPERSISTENTESTESTâ (Incorrect grammatical forms of the word âPersistentâ)
(Want some help on how to make up words or phrases and otherwise manipulate the English language? Check out: this post (1) (itâs phrased as an article for advertising, but the advice in it is very useful), this post (2), or this post (3). Or try playing a game like Balderdash )
(Huh. Writing this post has given me a new headcanon. I bet Papyrus would LOVE Balderdash and Scrabble and word games. âŠI really wouldnât want to play against him, though)
Papyrus frequently:
Changes nouns into verbs (or vice versa) (ie. How Papyrus of you!)Â
Adds prefixes and suffixes
Invents the word he needs (Bonetrouseled)
Esoteric Words (or words otherwise not typically used in everyday English by most people)
Papyrus uses a lot of odd words that most people rarely use! Older words, or just specific ones!
Examples: - âALASâ (He pulls this from a Shakespeare quote⊠you could add in a few of those) - âCURSES!!!â - âPERNICIOUSâ (âPERNICIOUS PUPâ) - âBOONDOGGLEâ - âLOATHSOME SCOUNDRELâ - âHEREBYâ - âJAPEDâ - âPONDERâ (âWHO COULD HAVE BUILT THIS, YOU PONDERâŠâ)
My List of Funny Words I Think Fit the Bill for Papyrus to Use:
Discombobulate
Fuddy-duddy
Kerfuffle
Ornery
Rambunctious
Rigmarole
Skedaddle
Skullduggery !!!!!!!!! (DOUBLE PURPOSE PUN!)
Bodacious
Gnarly
GoggleÂ
Malarkey
Balderdash
A list of more funny words
When Iâm using really odd words, I try not to use them too often, and when I do, I (try to) make sure context is clear so people donât have to pause and look up the word if they donât want to. I donât want to go around bamboozling my readers! Nobody enjoys the rigmarole of stopping to figure out what kind of malarkey I'm spewing and being discombobulated by needing to stop to find a definition every five sentences.Â
Improper word usage?
No idea how to classify this one, but sometimes Papyrus doesnât use words in their proper ways! Iâm just pulling examplesâmake of it what you will. (He doesnât do this very often.)
Examples: - âYOU DIDN'T DO A VIOLENCE!!!â - âYOU SHOULD LEARN A PRIVACY.â
A few characterization notes
Stuttering/Stammering
I know some people avoid writing stutters out like this in fics, but for analysisâs sake: Papyrus has moments of stuttering, stammering, and using filler words when nervous.
Examples: - âH... HI, UNDYNE! I'M HERE WITH MY DAILY REPORT... UHHH... REGARDING THAT HUMAN I CALLED YOU ABOUT EARLIER... I THINK, UH... HOW DO I...â - âY-YES! OF COURSE I DID!â - âW-W-WELL...â - â... W-WHAT?â - âSO, UH, JUST WALK BACK THERE, AND...â (Walking through a puzzle in a geno route.) - âR-REALLY??? WOWIE!!!â
He gets flustered a decent amount in game.
Confidence!!!
Is it false bravado? Is it real? Iâm sure you have an opinion (I certainly do), but this post isnât about what Papyrus thinks. Itâs about what he says! And Papyrus certainly says a great many things about himself! Wanna toss in some self-deprecation as well? Please do! (Heâs got a few lines of bashful modesty in canon as well!) But heâs got a level of thick-skinned, ballsy self-confidence⊠well. At least his words do!
âŠBut Papyrus gets flustered if you compliment him. On the flip side, if you insult him, his response is immediate and unflappable deflection and confidence.Â
Example response to insults: - âYOUR BARBS HIDE A HIDDEN AFFECTION! YOU EMOTIONAL CACTUS!â - âHOW SELFLESS... YOU WANT ME TO FEEL BETTER ABOUT FIGHTING YOU... THERE'S NO NEED TO LIE TO YOURSELF!!!â
Example response to positive things (flirting, or just being kind if you go the hangout route): - Youâve got all the stammering after flirting and such, but also⊠- If you say yes to hanging out: âR-REALLY??? WOWIE!!!â - (If you compliment him:) âNO!!! A GENUINE COMPLIMENT...!!!â
Most of it is pretty silly, but even if the fluster is for show, itâs there. And more importantly: it doesnât just happen when flirting. It happens if you do friendship, too! Which means heâs just⊠responding that way to positive things.
(I could ramble about the implications of Papyrus not blinking twice at insults, but scrambling for a composed response to praise, and what that implies heâs used to⊠but that is rambling about character analysis, not observations. He breaks my heart and I love him, your honor.)
Self-Aggrandizing Language Unlinked to an Insult or Compliment:
âWELL...! HUFF IT'S CLEAR... YOU CAN'T! HUFF DEFEAT ME!!! YEAH!!! I CAN SEE YOUÂ SHAKING IN YOUR BOOTS!!! THEREFORE I, THE GREAT PAPYRUS, ELECT TO GRANT YOU PITY!!â
âOH NO!!! THAT HUMILITY... IT REMINDS ME OF, MYSELF!!!â
âDON'T BE SO JUDGMENTAL, UNDYNE. MY SHACK IS A FOUR STAR ESTABLISHMENT.â (Unused text in game) (Some modesty! âŠAnd yet still confidentâŠ?)
âWAIT! I KNOW WHERE TO LOOK!!! IN MY COLLECTION! NYEH HEH HEH!!! SOMETIMES, I'M A GENIUS. ALL THE TIME.â
(Note: everything in these parentheses is my headcanon/character analysis. You didnât ask for this. Terribly sorry for straying from cold, hard, canon-provable fact for a bit.) (But I feel like thereâs a common thread among how Papyrus talks about himself and the technique heâs using⊠Check this post out (CW: discussion of suicidal thoughts) regarding using self-aggrandizing to build self-confidence. (Can also be used as a defensive mechanismâŠ) This appears to line up with the way Papyrus boasts. Especially when you consider the joking lines that are more modestâ (four star establishment!)) (Personally, treating Papyrusâs humorously cocky statements like this helps me write them in a way that I think feels in line with canon. Heâs not actually arrogant in a way that makes him act like heâs better than other people. He just talks like heâs great, and so is everyone else.)
Serious moments and dialogue!
I talked about this a decent amount back in the punctuation section, but is worth talking about again down here. Papyrus isnât as over the top in more serious segments (E.g. Parts of the geno route confrontation, when at home with Sans, when talking to Undyne about the human, when talking to the human after Undyne is hurt/killed, when turning you down after a date/hangoutâŠ)
Itâs not just his punctuation that changes during these times. Heâs also less inclined to use Papyrusisms. There can still be some quirk to his language, but itâs much less over-the-top.
An example of a more subdued Papyrusism: - âHEY, I⊠REALLY DOUBT WEâRE GOING TO BE ABLE TO HANG. ITâS HARD TO IMAGINE, BUT⊠YOUâLL HAVE TO SPEND TIME WITH NOT ME.â
The type of fanwork Iâm making is a large determination of the type of punctuation and amount of Papyrusisms he uses. Hurt/comfort that takes place mostly in front of Sans? Probably much less enthusiasm. Fluff taking place with the entire cast? Copious amounts of Papyrusisms and exclamation points. Longer form fics where heâs a main character have both.
That one scene in Sansâs room
I said Iâd talk about this more. So here we are! In the game, if you get the key to Sansâs room, you get a very short cut scene with Papyrus. For a very brief, but telling time, Papyrus thinks you are Sans and says:
âHEY, SANS, HAVE YOU SEEN MYâŠâ
âOH, HELLO. YOU ARENâT SANS.â
âWAIT A SECOND.â
This dialogue is worlds away from his usual way of talking, even in just three sentences. English speaking fans probably pick up on thatâbut the Japanese localization confirms that Papyrus speaks entirely differently when he thinks itâs just him and Sans.
Here is a quote from the official Legends of Localization book for Undertale in regard to it:
âPapyrus always uses the pronoun ore-sama - except in one scene. If the player enters Sansâ room, Papyrus will barge in to ask Sans about an action figure. In this one scene, when Papyrus thinks itâs safe to be his true self, he refers to himself as boku. This detail adds charm to Papyrusâ personality not present in the English line.â
He basically entirely drops the whole âThe Great Papyrusâ shtick. If youâre interested in it, hereâs a post that goes more into the Japanese localization of the game, and how Papyrus speaks. Itâs got some interesting character notes!
(Also, I highly recommend reading the Legends of Localization book for Undertale. Itâs very interesting and contains a lot of behind-the-scenes info about stuff!!!)
Skin/Hair/Muscles�
Papyrus references skin! And hair! And muscles!
Examples: - The very ripped snow skeleton⊠- âI'D LIKE TO DRIVE DOWN A LONG HIGHWAY. WIND IN MY HAIR⊠SUN ON MY SKIN...â - âYEAH, BUT I COULD STYLE MY HAIR!â
Itâs done on rare occasion, and seemingly always for humorous purposes. I could have probably lumped those quotes into the "joke" section... Oops.
Miscellaneous Tips
PAPSLOCK
This is a take it or leave it thing when making fan content! Most people use all caps, but not everyone does. It can be hard to read. Personally, I post my fics in sentence case for accessibility, but then use a custom work skin and HTML on Ao3 to make Papyrusâs font and PAPSLOCK optional to toggle on or off. (Iâve found some screen readers struggle with all uppercase.) When making comics or short-form content (and therefore no HTML), I put it in caps. This is a personal preference. Capitalization can be fun to play with. Just like Sans switching from talking like a lazy texter to speaking in grammatically correct sentence case with the creepy spacing⊠it's fun to have Papyrus drop to sentence case sparingly when he always uses uppercase. When using all uppercase, I like to shorten those sentences, make them less complex, and break them up somehow if Papyrus is rambling for a long time. All uppercase is hard to read, especially if it goes on for more than a line or two.
When in doubt, recycle quotes from canon! You donât have to overdo it, but occasionally finding a good quote or line to sprinkle in can make it seem more like Papyrus.
MY GUIDING PRINCIPLE WHEN WRITING PAPYRUS:
âA localization team member explained the goal for Papyrusâ text early on: "You can Google a lot of Papyrusâs lines and he is the first search result because no one else has ever said anything like it. Thatâs the kind of dialogue we should be striving for with him.â (âLegends of Localization Book 3: UNDERTALEâ p.120) (I just spent 2 hours looking through my physical copy of Legends of Localization to get this quote exactly right and not paraphrased. CTRL F DOES NOT EXIST IN PAPERBACK. ALAS.) This concept has completely changed the way I tackle Papyrusâs dialogue (when heâs being silly). Make it unique! Things never said before!
On a note of âLegends of Localization Book 3: UNDERTALEâ â I just really recommend reading it if you want a better grasp of how Papyrus or any of the characters talk.
Localization is different from translation â instead of being direct, it adapts languages to the culture of the place itâs meant for. Which means the localization team had to come up with a BUNCH of brand new sentences! And still keep the core of what Toby wanted! Which means the book is FILLED with Toby helping the localization team learn how to write like the characters! And thereâs a crap ton of explanation for Tobyâs reasons behind saying thingsâwhich really, really helps writing new dialogue, even in English! Whoâda thunk?
To test the Papyrusyness of my sentences, I write in sentence case!
If it looks like something Papyrus would say in sentence case, I can be sure it will when itâs uppercase. Most writing programs have a tool to switch to uppercase afterwards. I also reread it in caps locks after writing in sentence case just to double check it seems right.
You can get creative with Papyrus's inner thoughts!
Whatâs Papyrus like at home? How does he act around other people, and how does that change from person to person? He masks so hard itâs impossible to say what heâs like in a million different situations. But if his characterization and vocal habits are different from canon in most of a fanwork because of the tone or location, I find it helps to maintain his speech patterns in some situationsâit makes it clear that when you put him in a different situation (e.g. being angry, being at home, being comfortable) that itâs still the same character. Personally, if Iâm writing something super serious where Papyrus just⊠isnât throwing on a mask, I still try to fit in a short scene with his canon vocal habits (even if itâs just for a sentence or two as he claws for normalcy). Or I fit a few subdued Papyrusisms in there.
Bonus Points for RPG References. If you want to go the extra mile and really add some Toby Fox flare, reference old RPGS. There are so many references in Undertale.
I donât know any old RPGs so I really canât do this⊠But! I try to add my own kind of flare by occasionally referencing either games I do know, or!!! By referencing popular Undertale Fandom content!!! Meta⊠or at least I try. On this note: disclaimer. Some of the Papyrusisms in this post may be accidentally mis-categorized references that I didnât recognize.Â
It's easy to fall into the trap of making Papyrus too formal, or using only eclectic words. But Papyrus uses casual language, too! Itâs what makes him feel realâhis silly language is used to spruce things up, but underneath it he still has moments where he talks casually. It takes him from being a caricature to being a person.
(There are notes on this in Legends of Localization, (in regard to all the charactersâsomething along the lines of âthey talk like cartoon characters, but then they turn around and talk casually and thatâs what makes them feel realâ) but Iâm not going through it for hours again to find it.) Papyrus also says âWOWâ instead of âWOWIEâ several times. Those Papyrusisms arenât all the time.
And just a general tip on writing voiceâŠ
I often write my entire fic or chapter without worrying about Papyrus's dialogue AT ALL. Sometimes it comes naturally. Sometimes it doesnât. I donât let myself stress if I have a large section of conversation where his voice doesn't shine. Instead, I finish everything, and THEN, when Iâm editing, I come back to this paper, reread it to refresh my brain, scroll through some of his phone calls to pick up the right vibes, and then I go back and tackle his dialogue. Most of the time I can keep the message the same but make it sound more like something he would say.
Overwhelming post? Donât know where to start? Have no idea how to incorporate this naturally, but you do want to? Try grabbing a few things from the âPapyrus-ismsâ section and adding them or replacing things.
E.g. changing âWOWâ to âWOWIE,â or âLOOKâ to âLOOKSY.â Add in a weird metaphor, or alliteration, or an esoteric or made-up word. Pick one thing to add at random and see if it helps! You could also try sneaking in some in-game dialogue.Â
Take it slow. Thereâs no need to overwhelm yourself. The most important thing is to have fun!!! Take or leave WHATEVER you want from this.
THE MOST IMPORTANT TIP!!!!
Is this stressing you out??? Does trying to integrate this advice suck the joy out of creating? IF SO. Throw It All Away! Close this post and forget it exists. You create fanwork for fun, not profit. Or maybe you do it to process your emotions, or maybe youâre doing it for a friend. Whatever the reason is, you shouldnât allow âproper characterizationâ or âproper dialogueâ to get in the way of creating, or to suck the joy out of it for you. (And this whole analysis is all some random personâs interpretation, anyway. Like. This is not an authority.) The right way to write him is the one that makes you happy. No one other than Toby Fox himself can write Papyrus the exact right way, so who cares how close you get? Donât let your fear of writing something OOC stop you from creating. (An old, but relevant comic I made.)
Now with that said!
Final Notes and Links
One last note:
I feel the need to disclaimâI definitely missed some stuff here, and got some wrong. Iâm sure I misinterpreted at least a few things! Thereâs just⊠so much. So, so much. These are just the points I try to keep in mind when writing Papyrus (and Iâm not always the best at following!) I wrote this for my personal reference, so itâs biased around my interpretations and headcanons and the things I focus on. I just polished it up and shared it because I heard from a few people that they wanted to read it.
âŠOne extra last note:
If anyone tells you that Papyrusâs dialogue is easy and you should be able to do it no problem⊠give them four middle fingers, okay? Two from you and two from meâŠ
Itâs fucking HARD! So just have fun about it and donât stress too much.
AHEM. âŠWith that said! Uh. If you found this post helpful or actually end up using it to help you write Papyrusâs dialogue, please consider letting me knowâŠ? Iâm really curious if anyone actually finds this mess of an info dump useful.
Canon Papyrus Dialogue!
https://hushbugger.github.io/dialogue/#Papyrus (Papyrus)
https://hushbugger.github.io/dialogue/#Papyrus%20(call) (Papyrus Call Dialogue)
http://pcy.ulyssis.be/undertale/calls (All Papyrus and Undyne Calls - I recommend using this one over the link above, because you can see what Undyne said as well - it provides context)
https://hushbugger.github.io/dialogue/#Papyrus%20(note) (Papyrus Notes)
https://hushbugger.github.io/dialogue/#Papyrus%20(Undernet) (Papyrus Undernet)
https://hushbugger.github.io/dialogue/#Papyrus%20(label) (For completenessâs sake - Papyrusâs sign on his bedroom door)
https://toby.fangamer.com/interviews/papyrus/ (Papyrus Interview 1)
https://toby.fangamer.com/interviews/papyrus2/ (Papyrus Interview 2)
https://undertale.com/alarmclock/papyrus/ (Papyrus - Winter Alarm Clock)
https://toby.fangamer.com/interviews/nine/ (Number 9 Interview)
https://undertaleqa.tumblr.com/post/150442760868/questions-complete (Undertale Q&A "Papyrus whats your favorite food")
https://toby.fangamer.com/comics/grillbys/ (Grillbyâs Rouge Gallery (Newletter) - Doesnât contain direct dialogue, but references speech habits - More useful for characterization than direct dialogue)
https://toby.fangamer.com/newsletters/winter22/ (First newsletter - contains comic and single line of Papyrus text outside of that)
(I believe Iâm missing some items from earlier newsletters, released before I was in the fandom. In addition, canon-adjacent dialogue is missing from this list - Kickstarter, Trailer Videos, etc.)
Valentineâs Day Cards -Â
DEAR VALENTINE,
IF I KEPT YOU IN MY SHED, I WOULD FEED YOU CAT FOOD INSTEAD OF DOG FOOD!
DEAR VALENTINE,
IF YOU SEE SANS, PLEASE TELL HIM TO TAKE DOWN THE HEART-SHAPED BALLOON STUCK IN THE CORNER OF THE HOUSE FROM LAST YEAR!!! A DOG KEEPS GETTING TIED UP IN IT AND BECOMING A FLOATING 100 POINT HAZARD!!!
DEAR VALENTINE,
I READ YOUR LETTER! I UNDERSTANDâŠ
YOU ARE CHALLENGING ME TO SEE WHO THE BEST VALENTINE IS!!! WELL, I WONâT LOSE!!! MEET ME OUTSIDE AS SOON AS YOU READ THIS! AND TELL SANS TO BRING THE RED FRILLY CONSTRUCTION PAPER!!



















