/Tsuji was in front of TOYBOX's entrance, fretfully sprinkling water around.
He seemed restless, like he was frantically cleaning the entrance rather than watering anything./
[NOTE: The part about his shadow looks like it came from "sugata ga aru", "his form was". The translator here must've been extremely out of their depth, maybe somebody grabbed from another project to fill in here, because that phrasing is standard throughout the game for pretty much every scene where it says "you saw this character".]
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「汚い汚い汚い！
ネコめ！ あのネコめ！」
辻はイライラと掃除しながら、
アツキの方まで寄って来た。
”Ｈｏｗ ｆｉｌｔｈｙ！ Ｔｈｅ ｃａｔｓ！
Ｔｈｏｓｅ ｓｔｕｐｉｄ ｃａｔｓ！”
Ｔｈｅ ｐｅｒｓｏｎ ａｐｐｒｏａｃｈｅｄ
Ａｔｓｕｋｉ ｗｈｉｌｅ ｆｒｅａｋｉｎｇ ｏｕｔ．
[TSUJI, off screen:] "Filthy, filthy, filthy! That cat! That goddamned cat!"
/Tsuji came up to Atsuki as he continued fretfully cleaning./
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どいてよ！ 邪魔だよ！
早くしないと、この辺り一体が
けがれてしまう！
早くどいて！
Ｍｏｖｅ！ Ｙｏｕ’ｒｅ ｉｎ ｍｙ ｗａｙ！
Ｉｆ ｙｏｕ ｄｏｎ’ｔ ｈｕｒｒｙ ｕｐ，
ｙｏｕ’ｌｌ ｄａｍａｇｅ ｔｈｅ ａｒｅａ！
Ｈｕｒｒｙ， ｍｏｖｅ！
[TSUJI:] Move! You're in my way!
If you don't hurry up, this whole area will be contaminated!
/As he spoke, Tsuji started to sprinkle water relentlessly around Atsuki's feet./
[TSUJI, off screen:] "That stupid filthy flat-faced cat...!"
[NOTE: This was a long time ago, but as I said in a later scene that talks about Mint, the "flat face" doesn't seem to be anything gory, just the standard unhealthy flat face that some breeds of cat have. This doesn't align with the actual art we have of Mint, where she's a Siamese with a normal Siamese face, but apparently it's how she appeared to some people.]
/Tsuji's mind was rapidly filled by a Thought of hatred./
[NOTE: This is a really weird one. I think the translator must have understood "michi" (満ち, "mix") as "michi" (道, street)? I don't see how that could possibly happen unless they were having the script read aloud to them, because 満ち is actually being combined with another verb here, and 道 is... really not written like a verb would be.
It could also be that they misinterpreted Tsuji's name, which is written with the kanji for "crossroads", but that's already been used in this scene multiple times.]
A feeling of fear and anxiety after being scared by a recent meeting with a creepy cat.
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なんだってんだよ
こっちを見るな
不気味な奴
Ｗｈａｔ？
Ｄｏｎ’ｔ ｌｏｏｋ ａｔ ｍｅ
Ｃｒｅｅｐｙ ｏｎｅ
What?
Don't look at me
Creepy thing
顔が潰れてる
あいつは賢い
普通の動物じゃない
Ｃｒｕｓｈｅｄ ｆａｃｅ
Ｈｅ’ｓ ｓｈａｒｐ
Ｎｏｔ ａ ｒｅｇｕｌａｒ ａｎｉｍａｌ
Face is all smooshed
That thing is smart
No ordinary animal
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ネコ
死神
見るな！
来るな！
Ｃａｔ
Ｄｅａｔｈ
Ｄｏｎ’ｔ ｌｏｏｋ！
Ｄｏｎ’ｔ ｃｏｍｅ！
Cat
Grim Reaper
Don't look at me!
Stay away!
[NOTE: For whatever reason, the "Cat" and "Death" lines are completely out of order in the file, sprinkled in randomly among the other lines.]
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あっちへ行け！
視線を感じる
追い払っても来る
Ｇｏ ａｗａｙ！
Ｉ ｆｅｅｌ ｈｉｓ ｇａｚｅ
Ｋｅｅｐｓ ｃｏｍｉｎｇ ｂａｃｋ
Go somewhere else!
Can feel it staring
Comes back when I chase it away
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あいつは死神だ
助けて
怖い
Ｈｅ’ｓ Ｄｅａｔｈ
ＨＥＬＰ ＭＥ
Ｉ’ｍ ｓｃａｒｅｄ
That thing is the Grim Reaper
Help me
I'm scared
[NOTE: "He's Death" was also out of order, and "HELP ME" comes after "I'm scared". In the game, they're shown right beside each other and HELP ME is on the left, so if you're reading in English, it looks like that should come first to create "HELP ME I'm scared".]
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とにかく掃除しなくちゃ……。
またアイツが来る……。
アイツが来る……。
Ｆｏｒ ｎｏｗ Ｉ ｇｏｔｔａ ｃｌｅａｎ．．．
Ｔｈｅｙ’ｌｌ ｃｏｍｅ ａｇａｉｎ．．．
Ｔｈｅｙ’ｌｌ ｃｏｍｅ．．．
[TSUJI:] Just gotta keep cleaning... It's gonna come again...
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[ANAN, off screen:] “Mmm~! Ah, jeez, my shoulders are stiff!”
In front of TOYBOX, Atsuki saw a man stretching.
[note: One of the biggest “Uh... what??” moments in the EN version... At first glance, the construction does kind of look like it’s saying “a man, and Atsuki’s eyes, were there.” But obviously that makes no sense.
What happened here is that this is the construction, [x] to... me ga au. It roughly means, “eyes met with [x]”. The TL thought to meant “and”, and atta was a conjugation of aru rather than au.
Writing it as アツキの目が合った would have prevented this, but, honestly... so would a few moments of thought on the TL’s part.]
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あんれ？ キミ見ない顔だねぇ。
ボクの店には来ないよね？
ゲーム好きじゃないのかな？
Ｈｕｈ？ Ｗｈｏ’ｒｅ ｙｏｕ？
Ｉ ｈａｖｅｎ’ｔ ｓｅｅｎ ｙｏｕ ｂｅｆｏｒｅ．
Ｄｏｎ’ｔ ｙｏｕ ｌｉｋｅ ｇａｍｅｓ？
[TSUJI:] Oho? Haven’t seen you before.
You never been to my shop? Must not like games, huh?
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ボクはここを経営している
辻アナンて言うの。
ヨロシクネ！
Ｉ’ｍ ｔｈｅ ｍａｎａｇｅｒ ｏｆ ｔｈｉｓ
ｐｌａｃｅ， ｔｈｅ ｎａｍｅ’ｓ “Ａｎａｎ．”
Ｎｉｃｅ ｔａ’ ｍｅｅｔｃｈａ’！
[TSUJI:] I’m the manager here. Name’s Tsuji Anan.
Nice to meetcha!
[note: The EN version omits his surname, with the result that he introduces himself as “Anan”, and the dialogue box immediately starts displaying “Tsuji” instead.]
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それにしても、今日は
客の入りが悪いよ…。
いつもの常連の姿もなし。
Ｗｅｌｌ ｔｈｅｒｅ ｈａｖｅｎ’ｔ ｂｅｅｎ
ｍａｎｙ ｃｕｓｔｏｍｅｒｓ ｔｏｄａｙ．．．
Ｎｏ ｒｅｇｕｌａｒ ｃｕｓｔｏｍｅｒｓ．．．
[TSUJI:] Y’know, I haven’t had many customers today.
Not even my regulars.
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まあ彼らも、何考えてるのか
分からない連中だけど。
本当に最近は変な人が多いね。
Ｉ ｗｏｎｄｅｒ ｗｈａｔ ｔｈｏｓｅ ｇｕｙｓ
ａｒｅ ｔｈｉｎｋｉｎｇ？ Ｎｏ ｃｌｕｅ．．．
Ｌｏｔｓａ’ ｗｅｉｒｄｏｓ ｌａｔｅｌｙ．
[TSUJI:] Not that I can ever tell what those guys are thinking anyway.
Lotta weirdos around these days.
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おっと少し話しすぎたかな？
仕事戻らなくちゃ。
じゃあね！
[TSUJI:] Oops, I’ve been talkin’ too much, huh? Gotta get back to work.
The manager of TOYBOX. Wraps his head in a bandana. He wears a T-shirt with a print of Pumpkin Witch’s [mascot] character, Jack O Lan-tan. One of THOSE types, it would seem.
[note: -tan is a cutesier version of the -chan suffix.]
He wears a T-shirt with a faded print. When on earth is he going to replace it? It seems like high time to buy a new one. Could it have some kind of meaning to him?
He can sometimes be seen hanging around in front of Pumpkin Witch. As for what he’s up to... it’s staring at Hu Meiling. Anyone who sees him is advised to report him immediately.
Wanders around, shaking nervously. Assistant Inspector at the Kisaragi Police station. One wonders if he’s capable of acting decisively. What has him so worked up? Can he see something that ordinary people can’t?
If he’s carrying tea, the tea will get spilled on documents. When he’s putting documents together, they get stapled on both sides so they can’t be opened up. He’s a truly incompetent person. Watching him makes you nervous.
Him being the serial killer can only be described as the mystery of the century. Was all of that an act? If it was, he’s quite an actor. It’s enough to make your jaw drop.
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[Tsuji:] Yeah. Listen to this. This one customer just now...
対戦に負けたことが腹立った
みたいで相手殴ったんだよね。
おかげで店の中はプチパニック。
Ｌｏｓｔ ａ ｂａｔｔｌｅ ｏｒ ｓｏｍｅｔｈｉｎｇ
ａｎｄ ｈｉｔ ｈｉｓ ｏｐｐｏｎｅｎｔ！
Ｉｔ ｒｅａｌｌｙ ｌｉｔ ｕｐ ｔｈｅ ｊｏｉｎｔ．
[Tsuji:] He got pissed after losing a match or something, and hit the other guy.
So it’s kind of a crisis area in there.
はぁ……ほんと、
カンベンして欲しいよね……。
ま、まあ！ そ、それで
その相手の方は？
Ｕｇｈ．．． Ｓｅｒｉｏｕｓｌｙ．
Ｓｐａｒｅ ｍｅ．．．
Ｗ，ｗｏａｈ！ Ｔ，ｔｈｅｎ ｗｈａｔ
ｈａｐｐｅｎｅｄ ｔｏ ｈｉｓ ｏｐｐｏｎｅｎｔ？
[Tsuji:] Sigh... like seriously, give me a break...
[Aoi:] O-oh, my! S-so, what happened to the other person?
ん？ 殴られた方？
まだ殴られてるよ？
だからこうして危ないから
ボク避難してるわけじゃない。
Ｈｍ？ Ｔｈｅ ｐｅｒｓｏｎ ｗｈｏ ｇｏｔ
ｈｉｔ？ Ｈｅ ｇｏｔ ｈｉｔ ａｇａｉｎ？
Ｔｈａｔ’ｓ ａ ｒｏｕｇｈ ｓｉｔｕａｔｉｏｎ，
ｓｏ Ｉ ｃｈｅｅｓｅｄ ｉｔ！
[Tsuji:] Hm? The guy who got punched? Still getting punched, I guess?
That’s why I’m getting out of the danger zone.
まあ、周りの人が
止めてくれてるから大丈夫だよ。
お客さんがケンカしてるのに、
店主のあなたが逃げてるんですか？
Ｗｅｌｌ， ｔｈｅ ｐｅｏｐｌｅ ｉｎ ｔｈｅ
ｖａｃｉｎｉｔｙ ｗｉｌｌ ｓｔｏｐ ｔｈｅｍ．
Ｅｖｅｎ ｔｈｏｕｇｈ ｃｕｓｔｏｍｅｒｓ ａｒｅ
ｆｉｇｈｔｉｎｇ， ｙｏｕ ｒａｎ ａｗａｙ？
[Tsuji:] It’ll be fine. The people around them will put a stop to it.
[Aoi:] The manager is running away while customers fight?
はは……だってさ、危ないでしょ？
ボク、力とかないしさ。
そういう問題じゃありません！
Ｈａｈａ．．． Ｗｅｌｌ， ｉｔ’ｓ
ｄａｎｇｅｒｏｕｓ ａｎｄ Ｉ’ｍ ｗｅａｋ！
Ｔｈａｔ’ｓ ｎｏｔ ｔｈｅ ｐｒｏｂｌｅｍ！
[Tsuji:] Ha ha... well, it’s dangerous. I’m not a strong guy.
[Aoi:] That’s not the problem!
いいですか？
店主がお客さんの
安全を確保するのは当然のことです！
Ｉｓ ｉｔ ｏｋａｙ？
Ｔｈｅ ｍａｎａｇｅｒ ｏｆ ｔｈｅ ｓｔｏｒｅ
ｈａｓ ｔｏ ｇｕａｒａｎｔｅｅ ｓａｆｅｔｙ！
[Aoi:] Are you sure about this?
Managers obviously have a responsibility to keep [their] customers safe!
それを投げ出されたとは
どういうことですか！？
だ、だってさ……
危ないし、止めれないし……。
Ｓｏ， ｗｈａｔ ａｂｏｕｔ ａｌｌ ｏｆ ｔｈｏｓｅ
ｐｕｎｃｈｅｓ ｌａｓｈｉｎｇ ｏｕｔ？！
Ｌ，ｌｉｋｅ Ｉ ｓａｉｄ．．． Ｉｔ’ｓ
ｄａｎｇｅｒｏｕｓ． Ｉ ｃａｎ’ｔ ｓｔｏｐ ｉｔ．
[Aoi:] How can you give up on that?!
[Tsuji:] L-like I said... It’s dangerous. I can’t stop it...
[note: 投げ and 出す can both relate to things being thrown, but 投げ出す means to abandon something. それ , “that”, isn’t talking about the punches or the situation inside, but about the responsibility she just mentioned.]
なら警察を呼ばれたら
良いでしょう？
逃げてばかりだと、
いざという時大変ですよ。
Ｈｏｗ ａｂｏｕｔ ｃａｌｌｉｎｇ
ｔｈｅ ｐｏｌｉｃｅ？
Ｉｆ ｙｏｕ ｊｕｓｔ ｒｕｎ ａｗａｙ，
ｔｈｅｒｅ’ｓ ｓｔｉｌｌ ｔｒｏｕｂｌｅ ｎｏｗ．
[Aoi:] Then why don’t you call the police?
You can’t just run away at the important moments.
[note: いざ can be an interjection meaning “well...”, “now...” or things of that nature, but it’s not used to talk about actual time. いざという時 is a phrase meaning at the important moment/hour of need/etc. The 大変, “trouble”, at the end is being used to say “it’s trouble if you do this”, i.e., you shouldn’t/can’t do it.]
