#suedoctah

Heya guys! Skittle here to review another OC! We apologize for our lateness with this, but Chaotic and I both had exams and whatnot. But anyway, on with the show!

Name: Youta Junko Taichi

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Date of Birth: June 16

Born: Akita, Japan

This makes the name acceptable. Age is acceptable in this circumstance as well.

Zodiac: Gemini

Appearance: Long hair

Not really much to work with appearance wise. Long hair isn’t necessarily a Sue trait though. 

Hair: Light Brown

Normal hair color. That’s good, although the Japanese tend to have dark hair unless they dye it. Doesn’t mean it’s impossible though.

Eyes: Brown with red

Stop!

Where did the red come from? That isn’t normal eye color! 

Height: 5′2

Usually wears: Jacket, high tops, jeans

The converse thing is kind of a Mary Sue trait. It may not be if she doesn’t obsess and wear them all the time.

Likes: Sweets, fun, video games, manga, anime, electronics, cooking, wild animals. 

Dislikes: Cinnamon, impostors, changing people, bullying, exercise, orange and spice tea. 

Most of the dislikes are things that people don’t like anyway. I mean, can anyone ever say they’ve liked bullying? Except for maybe bullies themselves.

Hobbies: Watching anime, playing video games, sleeping, cleaning, playing music, cooking. 

Playing music? Is she listening to it or actually playing an instrument? 

Fears: ?

So she isn’t afraid of anything? At all?

Lives: Hoto Apartments

Personality: Caring, funny, smart, independent, trickster, thick skulled when it comes to romantic relationships

You have one bad trait, and I’m not even sure it’s supposed to be negative. 

Facts: Fluent in every language, likes to play tricks, an otaku, and many more.

You’re telling me that a FIFTEEN year old girl is fluent in EVERY SINGLE language known to man? 

So, I’m giving this one a Sue rating. It isn’t the absolute worst I’ve seen, but she definitely needs some work. Suggestions include, make a couple of negative traits, give her some fears, and for the love of all that is good, don’t make her fluent in every language.