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I've written 75% of my novel, but it has a medium-sized cast with quite a few subplots. For a satisfying ending, what do I prioritize for the final act/conclusion, and what details could I afford to skip or leave out? How should I order them and distribute the screen time? Thanks in advance!
Iâm so glad that there are writers out there who have too many subplots! There are infinite ideas available to you at any time, so itâs hard to streamline all those ideas down into a single, cohesive whole.
Managing multiple subplots can feel like juggling while walking a tightrope. You want to give each storyline its time to shine without overwhelming your readers or overshadowing your primary plot. So how can you do that?
Not all subplots are created equal, but they still need to have some tie to your main story. A lot of writers confuse backstory and worldbuilding with subplots. A departure from the main narrative doesnât necessarily make it a subplot, so when writing them, make sure to consider their relationship to these core elements:
Your main characterâs primary arc.
Your storyâs central conflict.
Your novelâs core theme.
Character relationships that drive the main plot.
World-building elements that affect the conclusion.
An effective subplot should have one of these elements to directly tie it to your storyâs goals. And itâs really important that you donât have too many. Too many subplots lead to reader fatigue or confusion, so make sure that your subplot quantity matches your genre. For instance, having a large number of subplots in a multi-book epic fantasy series is much more expected than having that many in a single-book romantic comedy.
Is this really a subplot?
I know itâs not something you probably want to hear, but itâs important to at least ask yourself if every subplot is relevant (or if itâs even a subplot at all). Itâs easy to fall into the trap of creating what you think is a subplot when some simple worldbuilding would suffice, or trying to include a subplot that would work better as a story on its own. So, if youâre including a subplot, always ask yourself if itâs relevant and makes the current story youâre writing better.
Here are some questions to ask yourself:
What function does this subplot serve?
Could this information be conveyed through simpler means?
Do any of these subplots play the same role? And if so, could they be combined?
Does it develop character, advance the plot, or enhance themes in a way that couldnât be achieved otherwise?
How deeply is this subplot woven into your main story?
Would removing it create plot holes or leave character development feeling incomplete?
Does it intersect with other important subplots in meaningful ways?
Will readers miss this subplot if itâs gone?
Does it provide emotional or intellectual satisfaction?
Does it add depth to the reading experience or just complexity?
Could this be a story on its own?
Sometimes what feels like a crucial subplot might actually be better served as background information, a brief scene for flavour, or a completely separate plot from the one youâre writing. Donât be afraid to demote a subplot to a smaller role if itâs not pulling its weight in the larger narrative or cut it out completely to use in a future project!
How to prioritise your subplots
Once youâve decided on which subplots are relevant and that you know you want to keep, youâre ready to prioritise them.
Start by creating a simple diagram or list showing how each subplot connects to your main story. Ask yourself:
Does this subplot affect the protagonistâs final decision or growth?
Will the resolution of this subplot change the outcome of the main conflict?
Does this storyline reinforce or challenge the storyâs central theme?
The more connections a subplot has to these elements, the higher the priority it should receive.
2. Identify emotional investment
Consider which subplots have garnered the most emotional investment from readers. You might even want to enlist the help of beta readers after youâve completed your first draft for this.
Which secondary characters have received the most development?
What storylines have created the most tension?
Which plot threads have raised significant questions that readers will want answered?
3. Look for natural conclusions
Most subplots will reach a natural conclusion before the final act. A good example of this might be a romance arc which will resolve to bring the characters together to face the final antagonist. If a subplot has already achieved its purpose (developing a character, revealing important information, or creating necessary conflict to enhance the theme), then itâs time to resolve it.
Fundamentally, there isnât a single best way to resolve or distribute your subplots in the final act. Youâll need to be guided by your specific circumstances and what your narrative needs. But the rule of thumb is definitely to have all subplots resolved before you get to the storyâs climax. You want your main plot to be the thing that drives the ending, and not have it overshadowed by unresolved subplots.
When managing multiple subplots, remember that less is often more. Each subplot should earn its place in your story by deepening your themes, developing your characters, or advancing your main plot. Donât be afraid to combine similar subplots, demote them, or set them aside completely. âScreen timeâ should be determined by how essential to the plot a specific subplot is. If youâre writing a romance-forward fantasy novel, for instance, the relationship development would have more time. But if youâre writing a fantasy novel with an element of romance, you might choose to give it less space.
Ultimately, how you choose to elevate and demote subplots is entirely unique to you and your story. The only thing that is universally true is that readers need to feel that the subplots youâve developed were worth their emotional investment. Focus on the storylines that truly matter to your core narrative, and youâll create a richer, more satisfying story that keeps readers invested.