β Fremionorge (Fred x Hermione x George) β Setting: 1-7th year of Hogwarts β 88 chapters β My score: β€β€β€ (enjoyable) β Rating: M β Language: ***** (close to no mistakes)
Hermione's just discovered she's a witch and is to attend Hogwarts. There, she meets a family of strange redheads, a group of pranksters and Quidditch players, the chosen one, along with meddling professors and ghosts. All of who, change her life. What will happen when long-kept secrets are revealed? Will the saviours needed come to light?
My notes: Allright, my first fic going from first to last year and I don't think it's for me. I think the author put a lot of time and effort in lt, but it was way too detailed. Nobody cares what Hermione eats for breakfast every single day or what floor Mr and Mrs Weasley sleep on. Second issue, ans this is just something I personally dislike, is how Hermione is some kind of supergirl that can do everything and knows everything. She got credit for every single good thing someone else did in the original story, she fixed all problems and saved everyone and I kind of hate it. Last thing is some small mistakes in the storyline, for example her calling Voldemort snakefaced, but he hasn't returned yet so no snake at that point in time.
