Welcome to another post of me rewriting a show.
Jake Long/American Dragon was a very interesting show, it deserved 3 seasons. Sadly it didn't fullfil it's fullest potential.
The world building needs a little fix.
Hunters should be energy vampires. They shouldn't have a dragon mark, it should be an X bc they are anti-magic, not anti-dragon. You can be a Hunter BC of biology or by turning into one which includes killing a magical being with a dark ritual.
A young born hunter's Mark would be light, they don't have abilities yet and at 15/16 years old they have a choice to make, kill a magical creature and become one with the clan or refuse and become a magical creature, their mark shifting into what they are now and becoming prey to their family.
The origin of the hunters and the dark dragon should be connected.
Dragons should be guardians BC their strength, speed and reflexes are the best to deal with hunters, the hunters can eat fireball BC again, energy vampires. This justifies WHY the hunters have been a threat for so long
Dragon's main magic should be elemental (water, fire, earth, wood, metal), they have affinity to one or two elements usually.
Make witches an umbrella term with different subcategories or straight up say that witches is a foolish non-magical term bc they can't keep up with all the types of nymphs and fae
USE ROSE'S TWIN THAT WAS SUCH A MISSED OPPORTUNITY. IMAGINE THE HUNSTMAN MARRIED ROSE'S MOM WITHOUT KNOWING SHE'S A MERMAID AND THEN THEY FIGURE EACH OTHER OUT, TRY TO KILL THE OTHER, ESCAPE AND EACH ONE KEEPS A TWIN













