So people of Unsounded Discord started discussing who qualifies as a magical girl in the comic and they were coming up with bad ideas like āMikailaā. They were all obviously wrong, so I decided to take the matter in my own hands. I am so sorry.
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So people of Unsounded Discord started discussing who qualifies as a magical girl in the comic and they were coming up with bad ideas like āMikailaā. They were all obviously wrong, so I decided to take the matter in my own hands. I am so sorry.

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"You can say what you will about how abrupt and threatening Rilursa was with him, but his responding by outright having her murdered was just a little unhinged." Come on, I know you like to tease a bit here, all in good fun, but nobody's going to fall for that one. It couldn't have been anything she said -- the evidence against is too recent. You just showed us that the plot to have her murdered was well under way before she ever spoke with him.
Yeah, I phrased that poorly. Beadman had the assassination components in place and had almost no doubt that his Ulestry suggestion would be shot down, but on the bizarre chance that it hadnāt been he could have kept the fatal events from playing out and prevented her death. Inviting her to stay for dinner and sending word to Nary to call off his men and tell the lizards to cool it woulda done that.
But what I mostly meant to do there was compare Beadman and Rilursa. A lot of people were ragging on Rilursa for shoddy diplomacy but no one seemed to mind that Beadmanās idea of diplomacy was uh, murdering the diplomat? There are political and long-term economic reasons for it, but itās still pretty sociopathic and dare-I-say evil to plan someoneās demise so coldly.
Also, I'm sorry, but I forget! Have you said what the suffixes -lyne and -shane mean? Wild guess - are they a rubbed-down version of the Continental for 'land' and 'shire'?
Precisely so. I donāt know that theyāre Continental per se, but they definitely come from older Kasslynian languages.
"both of whom might be dead now not saying who knows" Hah. Can't fool me with your trolling, lady. Toma and Elka ain't dead yet, they're too much storytelling fun. (Not expecting an answer to that.) But that makes me want to ask... what's your approach in general to character death? How do you avoid making readers feel cheated when a character they've been given some investment in, dies? Because you do avoid that pitfall. Very well. So how do you manage it?
Youāre right: killing off a character can be a total hack move. Sometimes it means nothing more than the writer doesnāt want to have to think of a way to move the character satisfyingly from the narrative. Thereās a real art to short term secondary characters, the kind that flow into the protagonistās path and then exit again after having served their purpose. Me, I just gauge how I personally feel about that character and their exit. Do I feel satisfied that they did what they needed to do and may now leave the story?Ā āCause if I feel satisfied probably the reader will too.
Sometimes character death is what is best for the characterās arc, like with Elan. He was a dead man walking and it was only fear that kept him from accepting it, that made him do things he was never happy with in order to stay alive. Hanging out with Toma and Elka made him find his courage - courage to fight with and for them, and courage to accept his death. Elan didnāt die the sickly, suffering straw death he was so terrified of. He died quick and awesome, offering himself to someone he respected. Total victory. And pretty satisfying, I thought.
I saw a lot of fear that Iād kill one or both of the Ripaās at the end of last chapter which would have been sooooo laaaaaame. Rather than needing to die, they needed encouragement to live, which they were able to give each other, allowing them to float their fiery way from the story.
So yeah, if youāve given a character a problem or some kind of motivation, you need to deal with that before you dismiss them, or itās not satisfying. And death may solve every problem, but itās rarely interesting and it tends to be artistically bankrupt if you arenāt using it right.
I'm unclear on geography. More than one person in Ethelmik seems to have thought that running to the mountains would be a viable option for getting away from Crescian state authority, (One of the cops, and Dawn.) Does that involve crossing a border? If wilderness land is unsuited for massive farming does Cresce just ignore it? Are there roaming bands of outlaws? Squatters who cultivate tiny patches of soil? ...Miners? What's a model to go by? Should we think, Appalachians?
Actually, yeah, I was thinking the Appalachians! They were my model for Ulestry, kind of; civilised valleys with large swathes of isolated lawless, mountain communities. The border between Cresce and Ulestry is fuzzier up there, and if you were going to hide from the authorities itās not a bad place to try and get lost. I donāt know that itās ignored so much as itās impractical and difficult to try and keep tabs on it. And itās probably somewhat dangerous to outsiders to boot, with insular natives and, you know, grebbers, water women, stormbringers, giant man-eating guinea fowl... other fantastic creatures we could devise to endanger our beloved cast...

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While the subject of reading is open, I know you don't have much time for it these days, but when you do, are there any books that are, like, guilty pleasures? Stuff that you know is totally cheesy, but you love it anyway? As one writer (I forget who) put it, "Steak is great, but sometimes you just want a tuna fish sandwich." What would be your tuna fish sandwich reading?
I do this with movies, which I can have on while I work or work out. I love bad movies.
I canāt think of any guilty pleasure novels though, outside of some bad erotica stories that Iām going to plead the Fifth on.
I suppose one comic kind of comes to mind- Thor:Vikings. Itās a very goofy one-shot about a bunch of zombie vikings invading NYC and then Thor and Doctor Strange have to take care of them. Drawn by Glenn Fabry, one of my favourite artists. Even this book isnāt BAD though, since the art is so fantastic.
Hm!
What you've shown so far about Iori and Rahm seems spot-on believable to me. I was 14 when my youngest brother died. I saw what it did to my parents. My father grieved separately, privately. He tried to bury it, and to the end of his days he never did heal. My mother needed to talk. Though they still loved each other, it drove a wedge between them. Have you seen this yourself in RL?
Iām sorry to hear you had to deal with that. I have two younger brothers myself and Iād rail and carry on against the world if anything ever happened to them.
Rahm and Iori take a bit from my great uncle and aunt. They lost a son years ago and both became alcoholics. She died of liver cirrhosis about a decade ago - nasty way to die, you bloat up and lose your mind, donāt do this to yourself - but she was one of the coolest people in my otherwise shitty extended family. Personality-wise though, Iori takes much more from my great grandma. Even her ugly wooden necklace is almost exactly like one I remember my great grandma wearing.
My great uncle lost his mind two years ago the day after Easter, tried to burn his foreclosed house down, took a few shots at the cops when they showed up, then was shot himself. Heās in prison now. I send him stamps (theyāre like currency in prison), buy him commissary treats twice a year, and write him letters. The bullets messed his hands up so heās all crippled and doesnāt write well but heās doing much better these days and has interesting prison stories. Heās always been a Right Wing conspiracy theorist type so our shared interests are limited but sometimes I just type whatever the hell I want into the letter. Nothing like a captive audience!
But yeah.
This is going to sound a little weird probably, but Iāve also gained insights from watching those hoardingĀ āreality shows.ā Almost all of those hoarders start out doing what they do because of a loss. They turn inwards, and build up a fantasy world around themselves, blocking out reality with distractions and objects of comfort and familiarity. This is a huuuuge theme in Unsounded; less so with physical hoarding and physical rearrangement of the world - though Iori does have her fake ghostly grandbabies and Rahm camps out in that underground workshop - but with psychological hoarding, blocking, and boarding up. Everyoneās fashioned these Best Worlds, and they donāt have a lot of interest in stepping outside of them. There are very few honest actors in Unsounded, and the villains are often people who want to wrench our protagonists out of their Best Worlds. Interpret that how you will.
Itās everywhere though. Sette, Duane, Toma, Quigley, the Ripas; every one a thin trembling skin over an internal sea of boiling misery and uncertainty and ugly memories. Theyāre each a microcosm of the dyspeptic khert and its complaining ghosts. No one wants to dive into this crap or acknowledge it, but most of us sure like crossing our fingers and hoping it will remain in existence forever.
The greatest gift the universe ever gave us is transience, I think.
How completely illiterate is Sette? She knows that's not how you spell "dog" -- too many letters? Does that mean she has the notion of one sound more-or-less equals one letter? If she stopped being so scornful and put her mind to it, how hard would it be for her to learn to read?
Setteās fairly illiterate but I do think she recognises a few letters, has a vague notion of how writing and reading works, and could potentially learn if she really sat down and had someone very patient work with her. Sheās got the attention span of a gnat when it comes to such pursuits though so as smart as she is, it probably would be a challenge. Maths are easier; thereās something very practical and intellectually tactile about numbers and sums. They appeal to her in a way that reading really never has.
But Duaneās only going to tolerate her illiteracy for so long before he holds her down and shoves the alphabet into her ear like those glowing parasites from The Beastmaster that create the Death Guards.
Or something.