Apr 28, 2020
Another look at my editing process
I literally just rewrote an entire page worth of dialogue and I’m no where near complete with this round of editing.
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Another look at my editing process
I literally just rewrote an entire page worth of dialogue and I’m no where near complete with this round of editing.
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Did I really just removed three scenes from my script and replace them with smaller moments to add to the tension between to characters? Yes, I fucking did and I regret every moment in it.
Hopefully, changes will add to the change my MC plans and the big reveal at the end.
Trimming the fat from scripts
Painful but in a good way. I now have chapter 2 back down to 30 pages. We've had enough monologuing (thanks Wise Man) for one chapter.
This is why sometimes, I need hiatus. Cutting junk. Build in the good bits later if they make sense. There's a line about orange shoes I'm a bit sad to cut. Later ...
This just makes it a faster, nicer read for you! And gives our main trio some proper "together" time!
Huzzah!
That only took 50 pages ... *grumble grumble* should have trimmed this thing back in Chapter 1 *grumble*