The Shadow of Kyoshi is here...now imagine my disappointment when I looked to the jacket and read, “The conclusion to...” when here I was thinking this would be a three part series. [SPOILERS AHEAD]
That aside, The Shadow of Kyoshi is an astounding follow up to The Rise of Kyoshi and it makes me want more from F.C. Yee. We know so little about the past Avatars outside of Roku but this brief series makes me want to explore more about the lives and legacies of the Avatars that came before. And to be clear, I don’t mean a prequel that reconceptualizes Avatar: The Last Airbender or Legend of Korra, or a type of “before story” that tells the absolute origins of every Avatar ever. Just continued brief snippets into the challenges that each individual Avatar had to face because The Shadow of Kyoshi, almost makes me like Korra. It doesn’t quite get there but in the very least I can say that “maybe Korra wasn’t the worst Avatar ever.”
Which isn’t to say that Kyoshi is, but this novel really highlights the many mistakes of the newly found Avatar. In The Last Airbender, we only ever saw Roku and Kyoshi at the height of their respective Avatarness and while Roku royally fucked up by letting Sozin live (and choosing to make his home on a VOLCANO) for the most part he seemed calm, cool and collected as though he had an innate wisdom as the Avatar that allowed him to know better for the world. And from what we saw of Kyoshi this also seemed to be the case, she was assured in her position and what she had to do for the world...but that ain’t it here.
Kyoshi, my poor volatile baby, just makes mistake after mistake. She is brass, impulsive, insanely powerful and still not afraid to smite a bitch. It just AMAZES me that in some capacity Aang could come out of this. Fan girling aside, when we get to the heart of the story, Kyoshi has to deal with becoming the Avatar, she has the power and skill but lacks the knowledge required to function diplomatically as this massive authoritative figure to the Four Nations.
We start the novel with her taking down more petty criminals, which makes sense from Kyoshi’s point of view but not on the larger scale of things. Realistically, Kyoshi cannot confine herself to the underbelly of the Earth Kingdom and luckily, her girlfriend, Rangi, has all the honor of the Fire Nation to lead her way. And I emphasize honor, because we all thought this was a Zuko specific trait but it is not children. Unlike the other three, the Fire Nation is incredibly dedicated to customs/traditions and instilling honor through following these things.
And honestly, it’s that of worldbuilding that makes me love this novel and it’s predecessor. The Legend of Korra tells us virtually nothing about the individual nations, focusing instead on the colony turned city so to return to those roots and use Kyoshi’s rise as the Avatar as a lense to gain better understanding of the “order” of the world is fantastic...but it’s not perfect.
If there is one thing about this novel that you could argue is weak, it’s Yun. I understand why he is there, Kyoshi is holding very tight to her past/origins and it actively prevents her from becoming the Avatar she needs to be, HOWEVER in my opinion - you can have Kyoshi coming to the aid of the Fire Lord and establishing order in the Nation or you can have Yun come back from the spirit world and have him be an obstacle to Kyoshi accepting what it means to be the Avatar. It’s not terrible by any means, but it felt like two pieces of a puzzle that could fit together even though they weren’t to be. It doesn’t ruin the reading experience by any means, but it felt like too very big stories fighting for Kyoshi’s attention.
I give The Shadow of Kyoshi by highest recommendation and ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ stars out of five.















