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i was listening to "did you hear about them?" and it got me wondering how that scenario of hazel vs luis would play out in your AU, especially with the changes you made to chloe and luis!

would luis brag about his intellect? would chloe side with him instead of the vks?

HEEYYYYY

Thanks for the ask! <3 sorry about the incoming ramble!

So I was thinking about this the other day and I was thinking that yeah Luis 100% brags about his intellect and how it’s helped him and others on dangerous quests (funny enough Luis actually doesn’t even really like his ‘powers’ per say- more on that later if you’re interested) I also imagine Luis brags about his mom too because yeah he’s a mama’s boy 😂 (can you blame him tho?)

Chloe actually sides with the VKs in this song and Red sides with the HKs. Hazel is a bit nicer with Chloe in this version because she was friends with chloe in this timeline- so Chloe gets wrapped into hyping her up (plus I think their friendship kinda returns lol)

In this AU the two (Hazel and Luis) were competing in a game (football/soccer) before the story picks up. Hazel carried her team hard but Luis was able to squeak out a win which he and the other HKs are pretty happy about-)

The two are constantly at each others neck though. Hazel thinks Luis is nothing if he’s by himself and is too reliant on others. Luis thinks Hazel is just overcompensating for an inferiority complex.

Ironically deep down they probably respect each other. Probably. Because they know that either of them can get drastic stuff done when push comes to shove. (Probably why Luis is a bit more lenient with Chloe than most HKs are…)

personally i can enjoy any, even having none, just a big friendgroup is cool too (except max and chloe,, to me chloe's a lesbian 😭)

Honestly? No- it’s kind of an open-ended/ambigious thing.

This version of Luis and Red is up for interpretation.

Pink and Luis are like super close siblings. He sees and treats her like a little sister because she reminds him of his younger cousins (he’s actually kinda homesick)

Max likes Chloe- because this timeline version of Chloe was the only one who wasn’t from the aisle who’s ever given him a chance/prioritized him.

Hazel sees the Shmees and Felix as her stupid younger siblings that she’s gotta protect but deep down loves. (Hazel and Pink get to go on some stupid adventures lol)

do you plan to reduce the main cast (like you did with asha's 7 friends in wish) to just red, chloe, pink, max, hazel and luis, or do you plan for the useless ones (feels harsh to say this but thats what they were lmao) robbie, felix and the smees to have more of a role?

😂😂😂Thanks for the asks- and ngl I appreciate this when I was borderline on the fence rethinking making the fanfic- I think I might go ahead bc it’s kinda divorced from the original- like a lot.

Yep! (Glad you asked this because I started outlining a rewrite today- the hardest part of writing these stories is starting them and now I have to reread Alice in Wonderland which is far from being my favorite fairy tale but it gives you a lot of creative liberties because it’s so weird so it’s like 50/50 ya know?)

I think my ROR rewrite would theoretically be like what? Maybe 2-3 days in the past? I don’t plan on doing a ROR rewrite but just know that I’d do half of what I do to Nadya to them lol

There’s not a lot of room to really make ROR that much longer (Chloe and red definitely interact more before they go back in time)

But how the premise is rn in the WW- is that the whole kidnapping of Bridget/Ella takes place a few days after Aurodon Prep has started.

Some students (particularly the VKs and ones from Abroad like Luis) were given the option to return and get to know each other earlier and build up hostilities/shade.

i wanted to rewrite those movies too but everytime i tried i only stared at my screen and realized my language is visual, not verbal 😭