#ofbourbonrpg

hello darlings!! this might be a bit late, but you can definitely get an opinion, yes!!

ok first of all, to start off with the theme — i don’t like it at all. i don’t know if tumblr is just being a bitch rn to me and displays it in the wrong way, but what i am seeing here doesn’t fit my taste at all, unfortunately. though that is, of course, just my personal opinion. the graphics however, are absolutely beautiful to be completely honest. i wouldn’t change a darn thing about them and it goes well with the historical vibe. when it comes to the plot, i actually really like it. i don’t really do historical rps so i have no idea how original it is, but as a person who did not understand one single thing in my history classes in high school ( and was not interested in it whatsoever ),  i have to say that you did a great job in making it understandable for me. when it comes to your rules, i think you should definitely include an activity limit, so that your members know how much time they can take with their replies and it’s simply better to have a specific limit, so that nobody can come at you if you reopneded a role after two days of inactivity but another after four days, you feel?? i also don’t really get the smut rule aka ‘if you are not comfortable with smut this may not be the place for you’, because it sounds like the members have to write smut and then a sentence later you say that underage players are not allowed to write it?? of course i’m not saying you should allow it, but it just makes it all sound weird idk cuz legal players can fade to black as well. also i would include something about godmodding. and i have no idea if you guys allow nonbinary characters, but if you do you should definitely include a gender section in your app form.

all in all i’d say this might be great for people who are into historical rps, but it definitely needs some small improvements in my opinion. however, i still wish you the best of luck and hope you get some more apps, because the idea of it sounds cool as heck!!