World: Alternia! Same AU as Renuti.Ā
!! Hihi! Oh man I remember Renuti so well; I think you last updated your fan adventure at the end of 2020 and I saw that you used his updated appearance for it! I know itās been a while since youāve gone back to the well but I do hope you pick it back up some time; I love seeing people creating their own fan adventures and I like the themes you were exploring in yours.
Name:Ā Prodit Narcor. Prodit is probably from the Latin root for loyalty, and Narcor is. Well. Narc. Narc core.Ā
Lol got it ACAB.
Age:Ā 7.62 sweeps/16.5 years. (same as Renuti)
Theme/Story: Sheās the person who eventually calls the drones on Renutiās radio station, and is then of course forced to ācooperateā with them when SGRUB rolls around. Also, I came up with her while listening to National Anthem, so thereās that.Ā
Review Goals: General! Also, people frequently mistake her for a Blood player, so advice on how to push the Doom angle harder would be nice.Ā
Strife Specibus:Ā Fireworkkind? Because patriotism and also explosions.Ā
Also quite Doomy. I approve.
Fetch Modus:Ā No idea. I kind of think it would be funny if it was something very practical that she picked as a little kid and now regrets.Ā
Oh thatās easy itās a Hangman Modus which shreds the captcha card if you fail to guess in time. Itās Doom-themed, and is super easy when youāre a kid but becomes increasingly more difficult as you grow older because 1) you store more items, so youāre less likely to narrow the pool of the card up for grabs all that quickly, 2) stuff just gets more complicated, yknow? You may not be able to get āimmersion blenderā just from looking at the spaced and guess the most common letters, and 3) time-consuming, so you canāt just grab an item on demand. Also a nod to how much work it ostensibly takes to get the necessarily equipment when one is working for a public office.
Blood Color:Ā Near-perfect cerulean (#005780). Itās a bragging point for her.Ā
Lunar Sway:Ā Prospit!
Title:Ā Witch of Dooooom! She manipulates the rules of society to suit her own needs, causes explosions and death and forces the rules on others, and like most Witches, takes a maybe too practical and hands on approach without really listening to others. Also, I like the contrast of this very fancy, charismatic, preppy kid getting the most Halloween Spooky Goth classpect (in name at least).Ā
I also like this, especially because sheās theoretically a very successful Witch of Doom right now! Sheās doing a good job of narrowing everybodyās options to an increased number of failure states.
Symbol and Meaning:Ā Scormini, the Fatalistic.Ā
Handle:Ā sweetieSnitch!
Quirk:Ā She rep}a{es {ertain }etters with symbo}s. It }ooks }ike b}owing a kiss, see?
Ooooh I like that.
Special Abilities:Ā Mild mind influenceābasically weak charmspeak, if youāve read Percy Jackson. She swears up and down sheās just a nice person and thatās why people do things for her.Ā
Ehhh T B H idk that she need a power. we can tell an interesting enough story about a cerulean exploiting their position on the hemospectrum to take structural power without adding the psychic abilities, especially since mutations like Vriskaās appear to be somewhat rare.
Lusus/Guardian:Ā A Monarch Butterfly, because itās pretty, poisonous, and, well, monarch. Prodit loved her as a kid, but now that sheās older she doesnāt spend much time with her anymore. Call your damn mom, Prodit.Ā
YEAH LOVE IT.
Interests:Ā Listening to music and dancing (badly) in her room, messing with other peopleās code, trying and failing to care for her pet cactus (the fifth one this sweep), playing Troll Ace Attorney.Ā
Appearance:Ā Just fyi, the sprite used is a slightly recolored FarragoFiction sprite. Didnāt want to take credit where it wasnāt due.Ā
Yeah absolutely, thanks for letting me know! Always appreciate people giving other spriters credit where credit is due.
Personality:Ā Prodit is genuinely a very friendly person. Yes, sheās also kind of a manipulative asshole, but she does have some actual friends who she actually likes as well, and is easy to get along with. Sheās practical and perceptive, but tries to ignore any twinges of moral dissonance by going along with the flow and not causing a stir unless she wants to.Ā Sheās also great at talking her way out of bad situations, and will get you out of a jam as well if necessary. Sheās very self-confident because of the aforementioned traits, and thus far her confidence hasnāt exactly been proven wrong. However, she tries to stick to her own casteāshe has some sense of what life outside her bubble is like, and she doesnāt want her perfect view of the Empire disrupted.Ā
Hmmm I can see why people think sheās a Blood character; this bio leans heavily on relationships and charisma as her backbone. It might make a little more sense for it to go like this: she has plenty of Cerulean friends because she has to; sheās seen what life is like outside her caste and sees the spectres death and destruction. Her friendships with them are borne out of genuine care but also out of obligation; if she doesnāt have them, who can she even count on? She can still affect self-confidence, but it rests on an empty shell and she knows it.
Land:Ā I kind of want to use Land of Truth and Consequences, because itās a fun name and I think it makes sense for her. Learn to face the hard Truths of Doom or face the Consequences, Witch.Ā
That would imply that the Feel of her land is one of Truth and the Quest is one of Consequences, which is a little difficult to visualize. How about instead itās land of Tabloids and Yarns? Itās all about the tales being told about her and her fellow questees, putting the onus on her to right the story and unite the planet in truth? Iām picturing a planet plastered with print with big colorful string connecting everything a la a conspiracy theory board.
As for the appearance...Iām gonna be real, I have no notes! I know it was sprited by another person, but I believe that you had-draw your adventure, correct? The vibe is right, the horns are good, and the outfit recognizably conveys what it needs to. Itās good to go!
-TR














