Nanoisms
The Bellows was a stifling, unforgiving place where tempers occasionally flared as much as the funnies needed for blowing glass. (furnace not funnies)
Thefted (I think I meant stolen)
the neighbourhood close to the castle where the uneducated labourers and pooper people lived.
Something didn’t miss up (I couldn’t decide between ‘something was missing’ and something ‘didn’t add up’)
Despite how meh (how much)
When Ani finally made her decision, it was with a real sense of finality.
She sippled from her water.
 ruin. Ani realized (zero idea were that accent came from)
He let out allowed cry
it sounded human, like machinery and like sounded like people shouting (like, so totally, like yeah)
King Remix (supposed to be Remus*airhorn noises*)
Turn left Sheakley
“I backstory” (I was in a sprint and panicked not remembering my himbo’ chatacer’s backstory)
Ani hoped she would see them all aging, (again not aging)
something must have very scared him
a small bord (bird)
value of suck (such)
she wasn’t sure that she could remain talent seem to be in glassblowing
some goodwill between him and the King could go a long way towards spreading goodwill between them.















