scwescola: DJEHSHWJJSJSN ENDING IT LIKE THAT REALLY? But this was so good! These two are absolute idiots 😂
Hello @scwescola (do you know, I only just now got your URL), I’m so glad you liked it! This ending wasn’t supposed to be a cliffhanger it was meant to be funny! At least ... I hope it was funny lol. Thanks for reading!!
maansiloves: i love these stupids so damn much....n i literally heard my heart pounded in ribcage n fell to my stomach with a thud reading the last line "we shud keep in touch" u said u left ur readers at cliffhanger n u did the same yet again dn know hiw m gonna survive waiting for the next..amazing story by amazing writer..thank u for this @phati-sari ❤️
Hi @maansiloves :) Eeeeee, I make no apologies for your heart’s dhak-dhak, though I’m proud of myself for writing something that evoked it! Thank you very much for reading. And omg I swear this one wasn’t meant to be a cliffhanger, I’m so sorry!
jalebi-weds-bluetooth: ASDFGHJKL I AM SPEECHLESS. Keep in touch, ugh... I'll return when I can speak more. *dramatically flopping in bed in happiness*
Hahaaha, I’ll await your three-ask long message full of praise and fave quotes and detailed analysis of exactly how stupid Arnav is AJ @jalebi-weds-bluetooth -- thank you very much for reading and for being so supportive and kind.
pakki-ya-nahin: Omg This is so beautiful PS! Especially the end of the chapter. Sooo good 👌
Thank you very much, PyN @pakki-ya-nahin this is so sweet! So, the beginning and the end of the chapter practically wrote themselves. It was the middle that gave me grief. For a long time, Khushi kept saying no -- either verbally or through her body language -- and Arnav kept pushing. I hate writing Arnav so blatantly ignoring consent. It took me a while to fix, but I really like the result!!
muttonthings: Omg Omg Omg I can't wait for Khushi's response. Payal please don't interrupt before she does
Hey @muttonthings ❤️Hahah no0o0o0o0o0 it’s not meant to be a cliffhanger omg I suck at this don’t I? The next scene is a little different (though I hope still enjoyable, and it will answer your question). Thanks for reading!!
thecharlesboyle: Ohhh my god,so good! I mean,Laad governor and Sanka Devi on a gol gappa date!! ❤️❤️😍
It was about time they went on a date @thecharlesboyle!! After all the whining and pining lol. I’m glad you liked it, thanks for reading!!
barshifan: Oh man 😞 the ride ended too early not just for our bitwa but also for us all readers :D Thank you PS🤗
Thanks for reading @barshifan :) Yeah, to be fair, bitwa wanted a few more hours, maybe some wining and dining, some making out in the back seat. Oh well, we can’t always have what we want ... ;)
wasnikkkk: these two idiots. “we should keep in touch”. didn't expect that ahh. so gooodd!❤️
I didn’t expect it either @wasnikkkk -- I’ve always wondered how they’d move forward in this story. Many of my stories have some formalised type of communication -- Moments has the letters, Charade has the ask game, Tere Bin can’t be left behind! Hopefully this takes the story in the right direction. Thanks for reading!!