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Hey yeah I was the anon for the too much positivity response and the anti Mrs. Anderson ask. I guess my growing concern is outside of a few exceptions the monsters are basically acting like monsters in the sense that I view them and their society as unequivocally the bad guy for what they're doing to the MC. I don't view the end of chapter 4 as a big bad hint, I view them as a savior. Which rubs me the wrong way, because I want to like Moonspot and Co. I understand that it is probably just a me problem and that this criticism is moving away from constructive (spelling, plot holes, etc.) and moving toward subjective. Good luck with the rest of the project!

Maybe kind of spoilery I don't know, but if the MC is obviously distressed about being kidnapped why doesn't anyone focus on explaining things and giving them time to adjust? Like it goes from fighting your kidnapper to being forced to go to college overnight and I kinda...just don't know what they expected? Thankfully most MCs aren't way more vengeful, but how could they not expect them to be at the very least severely depressed at having their entire life taken away from them in a day and then expect them to not act out or plot an escape? Like I get the MCs experience is somewhat unique in their eyes, but even for your average monster that seems cruel to expect them to be fine overnight.

i think it's so cool that youre maxwell!!

Moonspot

Yo! hi! sorry for bursting in like this ! but i think it's super ultra neato! that you ID as fifi and nuka! i dont have it stated in my blog but im also a nuka! i have never met anybody who IDs as anybody from Open Season! i think thats really cool! sorry for getting excited! have a super nice day!