#moonclaw

It’s finally done! The first page of Adventures of Cloudyclan! This moon was messy. I didn’t play through the whole moon before starting to draw so it’s missing an event. I couldn’t fit it onto the first page and it wasn’t big enough to fill a second one so here you go.

Figpaw finds a lost kitten while on patrol with Sunflare and Teaselflip. They bring the kit back to camp and welcome them into the clan.

I like to think that after surviving on her own Morningkit isn’t happy to be put into a role where she can’t leave the camp. It’s just one moon Morningkit. You’ll make it I promise.

I’m looking forward to Morningpaw and hopefully seeing the rest of Robinshade and Peakshatter’s siblings become warriors next moon.

I’ve never made a comic before so I’d really appreciate feedback on this. Where could I improve? Is the text too hard to read? That sort of thing.

Here’s Morningpaw’s cute little tail :)

Nightwhisker

A sleek black trans tom with blue eyes

Almost a carbon copy of his mom, aw. He tends to be pretty quiet, staying out of the center of attention. One of the stealthiest cats in Thunderclan and a great hunter. Despite this he chose to become a crafter instead of a warrior.

Replaces Darkstripe

Always was super close to his sister. For a long time he felt like he didn’t really have anyone else in the clan, especially after Leopardfoot left

Developed a friendship with fellow-crafter Moss-shine. They briefly began courting though mutually decided it wouldn’t work out and broke it off. They’re still good friends

Moonclaw starts coming to him with strange ideas for traps and plans. At first thinks she’s trying out new ways of catching large prey

Then Runningwind dies. Mysteriously.

And Nightwhisker recognizes his own handiwork

He confronts his sister about it. Yet Moon only tells him she’s doing this for the good of the clan. She says Running had a mate in another clan and was on the verge of leaving, betraying Thunder. They had to stop that from happening

Nightwhisker still feels awful… but he sees his sister is only doing what’s right. So he bites his tongue and goes along with it

Started courting Robinwing after Fuzzypelt died (they are t4t). They would end up having two tiny kits, Chestnutkit and Dustkit

His relationship with Robin’s previous kits, Cherrypaw and Ravenpaw, is… alright. He’s very much the awkward step-dad inviting you out to go fishing for bonding time

Moonclaw

A large grey and white molly with green eyes

Almost the complete opposite of her brother, Moonclaw is brave and ambitious. She’s also not afraid to speak her mind at clan meetings.

Sort of takes Tigerclaw’s role in the rewrite

Under Thistleclaw, she takes her first life at Sunning Rocks. It’s mostly self defense. She waits for the guilt to come… and it never does.

Thistle tells her that it’s proof she did the right thing. One less River cat means less dead Thunders

Was trained by Thistleclaw until his death. Moon got bounced around between mentors before Snowstar took over her training

Because of this Moonclaw grew close to many of her clanmates. She truly wants what’s best for Thunderclan, she just thinks she’s the only one willing to do what it takes

Nursed an apprentice-hood crush on Goldenflower. As warriors they become mates. Being two strong and renowned warriors, the pair are often looked to as an example of an ideal Thunderclan couple

Is assigned Sandpaw to mentor. The two do have a good relationship, even when Moonclaw keeps encouraging her more aggressive traits. Kid has potential

Born to Blackfeather and Lizardtail, Moonkit and his brother Poisonkit were adored by their parents. The two were inseparable until apprenticehood, as Moonpaw’s mentor taught him to always put ShadowClan’s needs first.

His first friend was Mudpaw and they called themselves eachother’s ‘competiton’ for deputyship. Once Antstar rose to power, she chose Mudfang as her first deputy until he proved himself unfit for the position, replacing him with Moonclaw. This caused a rift in their relationship.

Moonclaw hadn’t spoken to Poisonberry much until he needed an advocate to let him bring his illegitimate daughter Frostkit into ShadowClan. His stoic face softened when he saw her, feeling pity for his brother and niece. Moonclaw was Poisonberry’s first ally, convincing Antstar soon after.