Sorry to be submitting so many photos, but I added details to the first one I submitted! Would you mind giving me critique on this one instead? ((Sorry for the super bad lighting and quality, my phone camera wouldn’t focus unless I did this :P))

i really like it!! the only critique i have is that the neck seems a little small compared to the head :0!

“Hi! I’m Jasper - often called either that or ‘Jasp’ for short by the family, or the ‘Jasper Cult’ as we sometimes go by. For the record, if the others say I have an apple addiction, it’s just a normal, healthy liking of apples.

I used to be a camper at the infamous Camp Campbell. I left not far into my early teens’, when I apparently decided I didn’t get enough and later returned to work as a Camp Counselor during the summers for the same misera-… Camp. And before you ask, one time as a camper, I fell off a cliff and experienced a bear attack; but I did not die from either. I’m still alive, an adult, and…. Debatebly healthy. If you want to ask anything, well- Go ahead and throw something at me!”

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(Hello there! Mod Jasp here. I most often go by Jasp, although I’ve been referred to as a few different names - from 'Jasp’ to 'Dad’, 'Apple Dad’, or 'Cult Dad’.

I’m a fan of cappuccinos, not being tired (which, much to my dismay, is 99% never the case, pfff-), horror/thriller genre within any form of media, almost any type of music, Camp Camp, seeing and drawing art, actually having art come out right, and a variety of other stuff.