#miracolus

-Un colore:Arancione

-Una stagione:Estate 

-Un paese/nazione:Inghilterra

-Un cibo:Cioccolatino fondente

-Una canzone:Centro di gravità permanente di  Franco Battiato

-Un fiore:Papavero

-Un film:Mulan

-Un libro:Dieci magnitudo di Adessoscrivo

-Un tempo atmosferico:L'uragano

-Un momento della giornata:La notte

-Un animale:Aquila

-Un oggetto:Il mappamondo

-Un pianeta:Marte

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-Un colore:Rosa

-Una stagione:Primavera

-Un paese/nazione:Francia

-Un cibo:Muffin

-Una canzone:La notte di Arisa

-Un fiore:Fiore di ciliegio

-Un film:Come d'incanto

-Un libro:Io te e il mare di Marzia Scigano

-Un tempo atmosferico:Il sole

-Un momento della giornata:Il tramonto

-Un animale:Volpe

-Un oggetto:Satua della giustizia

-Un pianeta:Luna

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Dalla vostra ragazza dal cuore nero♡

I already talked about the overall story and you may or may not have noticed how the start is pretty slow and not that much is happening. This is because I did not like how fast the real show was going in the beginning. Like, they could somehow manage to have a slow burn over five seasons for Marinette and Adrien and have every step take ages but let her fall in love with him in three seconds. Same thing for Cat Noir.

I did saw other people remove the love-square completely in their rewrite but will definetly not do that in mine. I really like the idea of the love-square in the show, I just think it is really rushed in the beginning and poorly executed in the end.

So basically, I want to strech the first episode out to the whole first season. Now, the main plot points of season one will still be happening and there wont be just one villain or something like that. But especially in the beginnign where there wont be thaaat much happening with the super heros, I want to really focus on the build up of the friendships.

I want to use the first season for everything to fall into place and not just the first episode like the real show.

Marinette wont like Adrien in the first episodes because she is getting tourmented by Chloe and she is always talking about him. But Marinette will be kind of forced to hang out with him because Alya starts to hang out and be friends with Nino. Adrien will be scared of loosing all his friends again but wouldn't want to be rude and he would slowly warm up to his friends and learn much about being a teenager while slowly exploring being a super hero.

The first quater or half will manly focus on the teenagers and their drama in school. Everxthing superhero related will be very special and exiting for the viewer (like someone could watch my rewerite XD). Maybe you wouldnt even see Adriens hero form till Marinette sees him for the first time and just see Adrien being tired in the morning after you heard more news about a mysterious figure in the news. I would really like to explore Chloes charakter in this first quater and the drama that comes with a really powerfull mean girl, not the softie she was in the show.

After Marinette starts to explore her power there will be much more hero stuff, wich will be very exciting (or so I hope). Ladybug first will think Cat Noir is a criminal too. They will have a rocky start and not get along too well. But with time they will learn to form a strong team while defeating criminals. Only every few episodes there will be an akumatised villain and in the first season tha will only mean a peson with a strongly influenced mind (I will talk about Hawk Moths powers again). In the season one finaly they will eventually meet their first rival with superhuman strenght , but that is a whole nother story.

At the end of the season I want to have:

A close friend group with Alya, Nino, Marinette and Adrien where everyone gets along with everyone

A Marinette with a sweet, NORMAL chrush on Adrien

A strong, trusting partnership between Ladybug and Cat Noir

A Cat Noir with slight feelings for Ladybug that he cannot admit to himself

and an interesting drama to continue the story

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That's it for now. I hope you like it <3

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