Episode VIII (Because waiting until 2017 is torture.) *And now Episode IX. ;)
Episode VIII (Because waiting until 2017 is torture.) *And now Episode IX. ;) by MarvelSpacePrincess
Rating: G
Word Count: 42,905 (WIP)
Summary: This is a story I decided to create because I simply can't wait two years. For anyone who agrees with me on this, enjoy!
Not gonna lie. Read a few chapters and I gotta say, seems kinda boring as shit. Of course I'm in no position to judge; looking at the stats, plenty of people enjoyed this long ass fic so far and it's not even done. Thing is, ok. Like I said, take what I say either a grain of salt; but ta BORING. I get that chapters are sort of written like scenes.
You know what would've been a cool experiment? Writing it like a script. Like, you out so much effort into the content, why not just make it straight up dialogue and stage directions? Literally it's all there, the information AND the way it's describes. Maybe that's why it feels so slow: all the information that makes up a script is presented in long rom. It just feels very passive. Read it if you will. I'm already hesitant because of the Finn/Rey tag tbh.... and I just noticed.... why the fuck is there a rey/luke skywalker tag?!?!?! eww
