#lutifi

Hello again! I hope ya’ll have been doing great. This troll wen through a few revisions in the past and all they need are a few tweaks.

Sup sup sup I am in 😎 a LOT of pain! So to distract myself I’m gonna review this yeehaw.

Planet: Alternia

Name: Lutifi Fintan

Lutifi being a variation of Lutfi meaning kind and gentle in Arabic and Fintan possibly meaning white fire or white bull. According to Irish legend, this name was the name of the only Irish person to survive the great flood. As well as a name given to many Irish saints.

So this was submitted before SA gave us the more useful revision of our template, which means I’m going to have to guess at your troll’s theme. It looks like we have shades of…survival, “eye of the storm” kind of calm? I can run with that!

Age: ~6

Strife Specibus: x2 prongkind; Specifically dualweilding modified Sai’s

Presumably modified to look a little more like the symbol, yes?

Fetch Modus: Bubble modus: It deals with buoyancy with heavier objects sinking to the bottom and lighter objects floating to the top. The catch (pardon the fish pun) is that if you take something out, everything above it is removed from the deck.

Trolltag: The only documented tag I have for them is gaudiloquentAbsolutism which sounds a bit too over dramatic for a troll like him.

Yyyyyeah let me suggest something like pacificContinuity? Gives you that water theme as well as the “I will survive” vibe.

Symbol: A greek looking symbol is the only way I can describe it.

Blood: Fuchsia

That doesn’t seem to track with the character you’ve presented. He would have a number of societal expectations of him (including the one to impress his personal tastes onto other Alternians), would likely be the only one of his kind (with the implication that he would eventually battle the Condesce), and he would need to FEED GL’BGOLYB OR THE ENTIRE PLANET WILL DIE. None of this is the kind of life you can up-and-abandon to be a surfer bro. If you want to pursue him as a fuchsiablood, I would suggest either:

1) He’s run away from being the next Condesce and is choosing to hide out among his fellow surfers (in which case he would most likely either go hemoanon/just swap his clothes out for violet), and feeds losing surfers and their lusii to Gl’bgolyb, thereby further cementing his theme as someone who survives and hides themselves in the eye of the storm. or

2) If I may suggest a tweak to this character, maybe make him a purpleblood who decided to pursue surfing over subjugglation? This would once again mean running away, but given that purplebloods already live close to the ocean and we have at least one example of a very blissed-out purpleblood in the form of pre-breakdown Gamzee, it’s workable!

Quirk: ~~~ he talks kind of like this and surrounds himself with wicked waves with way more surfer lingo dude ~~~

Special Abilities: Other than being one of the best surfers there is not much else.

Lusus: honestly, I think he just left his lusus behind once he reached 5 sweeps just to do his own thing.

Yeah, this once again doesn’t track with being a fuchsiablood, since Gl’bgolyb is a forcibly high-maintenance lusus (aaaaand based on some reasonable guesswork, may not be a lusus at all). If you really want to stick with him as a fuchsiablood, you should probably figure out how he’s worked around that. On the other hand, if he were a purpleblood it’s implied that they are typically amphibious and potentially neglectful, which means a) he could’ve run without a lot of notice and b) he could still potentially run into his lusus out on the waves, brah.

Personality: Despite the whole weight of the royal court on his shoulders, he looks to be one of the most laid back trolls there is. Somewhat like how Cirava is with their whole 2 4 / 7  M O I S T U R E W A V E  C H I L L  B E A T S thing they have going. When things go down, he just goes with the flow of things.

Ehhhhhh I mean. Cirava is definitely 【２４／７　ＭＯＩＳＴＵＲＥＷＡＶＥ　ＣＨＩＬＬ　ＢＥＡＴＳ】 but it’s also implied they dug their own eye out of their face? It’s difficult to be chill on Alternia while maintaining awareness of the political situation, and if Lutifi is a fuchsiablood then that lack of awareness could have serious consequences. Has anyone tried to assassinate him? Are others protecting him so he doesn’t need to be on high alert? How does he make decisions for the planet? Does he just defer to others? If so, what plans are pushed through as a result of that delegation?

If you make him a purpleblood, he can maintain that trait because he’s high enough on the social ladder that he doesn’t have to climb, but low enough that he’s not responsible for important, planet-wide decisions.

Intrests: He does love to surf as well as practice his fighting skills since he hunts for his food. Though he spends most of his time in the water, he has made his home in a cave on the beach and likes to gather trinkets to decorate the walls of the cave.

Once again, this 100000% reads like a purpleblood beach troll to me. If you wanna keep him as a fuchsiablood, maybe the cave is the kind only accessible underwater?

Title: Knight of Breath

I completely agree that this character is a Breath player, but I’m not so certain I agree on the class! I think he might actually be a Thief of Breath? If you want to keep them fuchsiablood, especially, since his grab for freedom will directly limit others’ freedoms.

Land: Land of Liberty and Aether: A bit of a WIP as of now

I mean you’ve already got a pretty good theme going, so I say Land of Storms and Strings! All the consorts are trapped in their homes because of the strings that are tied between multiple doors! 

Dream Planet: Prospit

Yeah that tracks. The redesign would just involve changing colors and removing ears, and you’ve already expressed a desire in the past toward designing your own symbols, so I think I’ll cut Lutifi free now! Hope this helped!

TR

Adding SA’s very relevant addition: