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World: Beforus!
Nice! I like getting Beforus trolls because there’s so much we don’t actually know about the culture! And since she’s Beforian, she would be based around an exaggeration of our existing culture.
Name:Â Lunast Arfell (I mostly chose her name because I thought it was very elegant like the character itself.Â
I think it’s a pretty name! If I may suggest a different last name, maybe Ethosn? I feel like Lunast naturally invokes the moon, and I was thinking her last name could be linked to the Gorgon Stheno to nail the ideas of beauty, image, and reflection.
Age:Â 10 Sweeps.
Review Goals: General overview.
Strife Specibus:Â Â Chainsaw. Elegant, customised to herself. It ties in pretty nicely to her theme of gardening.
I’m not sure how a chainsaw would fit with gardening specifically but I think it works if only for its fandom association with Kanaya. If you want to nail down the influencer vibe you’ve got going rn, maybe she has riflekind with a mounted camera that takes a selfie of her when she pulls the trigger rather than focusing in on her target?
Fetch Modus: PhotoKind!Â
I’m assuming this works kinda like Dave’s captcharoid camera which I LOVE.
Blood Color: Violet
Lunar Sway:Â Absolutely Derse
Title: Witch of Heart. Her entire goal, is to make people love her, and care about her. She’s an expert at changing peoples views on her almost like donning a mask and manipulating how she seems. It was the most fitting one I could think of.Â
Love it. Also gives me kinda Ursula vibes which I like for a vain seadweller.
Symbol and Meaning:Â I never actually came up with one!
If we go by the EZ, she’s Aquo, sign of the Obsessive, which fits super well for her.
Handle:Â Â solipsisticAdoration
This handle feels a little on the nose and a little too self-aware for the character you’ve painted. What about admiralHook. It contains the word “admire,” it’s a fish pun, it’s a rank higher than captain expressing her high social standing and perception thereof, and she “hooks” people as an influencer and manipulator.
Quirk: Her quirk is quite a simple one. She keeps correct grammar all the time until she gets annoyed, at which point her typing will seem much more frantic with occasional capital letters, misspelling and spammed punctuation. She ends all her sentences with a ~<3 resulting in “Something that looks a little like this, sugar~<3!” but “LiKe thIS when SheS REALLy ANNOYED!!!!”
I like it! Maybe she can still use a heart even when she’s annoyed to showcase that passive-aggressive streak.
Special Abilities:Â None I could think of.
Lusus/Guardian:Â She has a very fashion forwards Dolphin for her lusus that she just L O V E S to dress up! They get on incredibly well, and her lusus regularly joins in on her photoshoots.
looove that that’s cute.
Interests:  She has a strong interest in acting and modelling. She runs her own Instagrub page in which she’s become quite a celebrity. She also quite enjoys gardening as a relaxing task which also helps makes things beautiful. Lunast has a deep love of makeup of all variations including stage makeup too!
Appearance: Lunast is pretty tall, with soft poofy hair, violet tinted heart shades and killer black lipstick. She’s got incredibly strong highlight too makeup wise. She’s got that grunge aesthetic going on as she also has a tendency to wear leather jackets and way too many bangles when she’s not on screen.
Honestly as horrifying a character as she is that look is a mood.
Personality: Lunast, is a mythic bitch. She’s greedy, attention needy and honestly quite rude. However she manages to make people love her by her show stopping charisma. She often changes her attitude depending on who she’s talking to. Almost like Heather Chandler, really.
I’ve known people who can steal the show with nothing but their charisma, and it’s chilling.
There wasn’t a whole lot I had to suggest for Lunast, but I hope what little feedback I gave helped! Thanks for your patience.
-TR
